The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Short Stories – Vol. 2

Author’s note: The following pieces were written throughout the year of 2010 and come in a variety of flavors, from revenge stories to slightly humorous tales. There are even MD enterprises and something dealing with superheroes, two subjects that don’t exactly fall on my gamut of usual tastes. Most of them were born out of requests I tried to bring to life in a befitting manner, and those are duly noted. The rest were things I wrote on my own, as inspiration allowed.

For the purposes of this compilation, I’ve arranged them alphabetically and not in accordance to the dates they were originally written.

As usual, if that should be the case, enjoy!

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Beneath the blue

[mc, ff, fd]

((the first of the short tales I wrote for robotunit8. I know she loves the subject matter of this one and I had never written anything about it so it was a good experiment in the end.))

“More wine?” asked Estefania to her companion, as she played with the bottle in her hands.

“No thanks, Steffi,” answered Chloe using her favourite pet name. It was way easier than trying to pronounce correctly the Latin intonations that were part of her friend’s heritage. “To be honest, I think I’ve already had enough…” and then she giggled, all flustered.

“Okay, then. I hope the meal was to your liking.”

“Are you kidding me? Everything was simply divine! I don’t know how you do it, really!”

“Oh, I just love to experiment! Besides, it felt good to cook for someone else again, especially a person I love so much….” said the Spaniard woman caressing Chloe’s lips with the tip of her right index finger.

“I… care about you, too.” retorted Chloe, slowly escaping the gentle touch.

“That’s it? Care? I was hoping for a little more than that, sweetie.”

“It’s… hmmm… complicated.” she mumbled.

“That’s what you always say…” said Estefania, visibly disappointed. “I hope you still have stomach for the dessert.”

“Hmmm, I might… what did you prepare?”

Estefania got up from the table, headed into the kitchen and came back with a tray filled with tantalizing chocolate brownies. Some of them were of pure cocoa, others were raspberry-spiked and there were still some with mint frosting. All of them looked positively delicious.

“Wow, you really outdone yourself, haven’t you?”

“Nothing is too good for the ones I love. I had trouble choosing the best recipe so I prepared them all. Don’t be shy and be as glutton as you want to be, my dear.”

“I really shouldn’t, but… hmmm, they smell so good.” Chloe took one of the pure chocolate ones to her mouth and the taste was everything she hoped for and more. “Seriously, Steffi, one of these days, you’re going to have to teach me how everything you cook turns out so perfect. I love them!”

“Good.” Estefania smiled whilst sipping another bit of wine. Then, she took a mint frosting brownie from the other end of the tray and munched it, happily.

A couple of minutes later, half of the tray was already empty and Chloe made a signal with her head that she had had enough. In fact, she was starting to feel just a little bit nauseous, probably as a result of her excesses.

“Are you okay, Chloe? You look a little… pale!”Estefania asked.

“I… hmmm… I’m not really sure. I have this awkward burning sensation in my stomach as well as this headache that came out of nowhere. I…”

Estefania proceeded to start clearing the table as the other woman experienced a turmoil of vast proportions in her bodily and mental functions. There was a loss of balance, followed by a weightlessness of both arms and legs, but instead of blurriness in her eyes, it was as if everything suddenly became too vivid , all the colours of the apartment becoming more bright as she slowly collapsed into dullness.

“Steffi… w-what… is the meaning… of this?”

“I’m testing a theory, sweetheart. The brownies on your end of the tray were laced with a mild sedative, just enough for you to lose your strength while I do what I have to do.”

Estefania grabbed her semi-drugged friend and led her to the bathroom where a bath filled with steaming, hot water, awaited their arrival. Seeing as the other woman was in no condition to resist, she removed her black dress and high-heel shoes before having her enter the tub.

“Don’t… do this….” whispered Chloe as the warm liquid came in contact with her bare skin.

“I already did, and now I’m about to find out if I was right or not...”

Chloe looked at her with half-sleepy eyes and then, soundlessly, allowed her entire body to go limp. As her head submerged, a phosphorescent glow irradiated from the center of the bathtub engulfing the whole division in pure white. As it subsided, returning the surrounding world to its natural state, Estefania saw what she had already imagined to be true in her mind. Her friend’s long and gorgeous legs had disappeared from view, Replaced by a sparkling green tail with hints of yellow sometimes phasing in and out here and there, as if they were alive

“I knew it!” she exclaimed with glee. “It was hard to conceive, but I had this distinct feeling about you ever since we met at The Aquarium. There was something in your eyes whenever you were close to water, not to mention all the fluids you consumed on a normal day, much more than a regular human being needs, and now everything’s explained. You’re not human at all, but a mermaid!”

Chloe looked at her, still submerged, before sticking her head out, her dripping blonde hair making her an even lovelier sight to behold. She didn’t seem under the effects of the drugs anymore, as if the contact with the water had cleansed her whole from inside out.

“Yes, I am and I wished you hadn’t figured it out like this. I thought about telling you a lot of times since we first encountered, but the timing was never right and I was afraid of what you might think of me if you knew the truth. So now what, Steffi? What are you going to do now that you’re aware of my true nature?”

Estefania removed a small digital camera from one of the pockets in her leather pants and took three pictures in a row, capturing all the details of the tail and the way it fused with Chloe’s torso, leaving no doubt that she was for real and not an elaborate hoax.

“Well, I have great feelings for you but as you can imagine, I have to share with the world what I found it, today! This is going to change my world completely!”

“You’re going to doom me to be a science project in the hands of greedy humans who know nothing of the mysteries of the sea? I can’t allow that, Steffi!” replied Chloe, her eyes twinkling

“Then, I’m afraid I’m going to have to lock you here in the bathroom while I contact the proper authorities! It’s nothing personal, Chloe – if that’s really your name, after all – but I just can’t say no to the fame and prosperity this discovery will bring upon me, can I?”

“You can and you will. Have you forgotten what the legends say about our kind?” Chloe smiled mischievously and started to sing.

The sound was unlike anything in the world of men, a hybrid of whale song with deaf notes and angelic strings, a combination that wasn’t supposed to work harmonically in any way, yet it did. It was the most profound call of underwater realms, the very definition of ‘enthralling’ and ‘irresistible’, unleashed upon a spirit too frail to comprehend its transcending magnificence, let alone fight it.

“Come to me, Steffi.” instructed the mermaid in her musical voice to the completely mesmerized woman. With a simple phrase, the mere mortal moved willingly towards her in a firm, resolute pace.

“Now take off your clothes and join me in the tub.” continued Chloe, heightening her power over Estefania’s mind. The human obeyed without hesitation for all of her free will had been sapped by the supernatural creature’s charms.

The mermaid’s tail wrapped around her waist like an organic straightjacket, keeping her in a pinned position where she could easily be taken advantage of. Then, the music faded and gave way to a passionate kiss, the taste of salted water infiltrating Estefania’s lips alongside with something else, and a surge of bio electric luminescence that caused her head to spasm.

Gently, Chloe held her neck straight and then showed her a single finger. Like an arrow, it was pointing down, to a small point just beneath her navel before the human flesh gave birth to the fish scales.

“Down….” she cooed. “Sink into me”.

Estefania collapsed, her body becoming like a dead weight that had just drowned. However, that wasn’t truly the end of it all for, after an indeterminate period of time, the Latin woman opened her eyes and came to realize she had been reborn inside a sub aquatic dimension, a plane of existence below the surface of the Pacific where a dome- like structure, decorated with multi-coloured reefs, was the sanctuary for everything that was beautiful and believed impossible by the dwarfish minds of the human race.

As she looked down, to the place where her lower limbs used to be, she saw a gorgeous fish tail with red, blue and purple streaks in-between. Chloe was next to her, holding her hand and they both started to talk using a psychic string, an advanced form of telepathy.

Welcome to your new home, Steffi.

Why did you turn me into a mermaid? I didn’t ask for any of this.

I know you didn’t, but you were going to expose me and I couldn’t let it happen. I killed humans in the past who uncovered my secret, but you’re different. I really care about you and so I made you a part of the secret as well. Now, you can’t expose us without exposing yourself.

Should I be grateful to you then, Chloe?

I don’t see why not. Now, you’ll get to experience some truly amazing things you never thought could actually be real. And we can finally be together. I know you were willing to betray me and all but when I kissed you, I felt the raw emotions inside you. It’s time to let them all come forth, dear. I don’t think I can. Not yet, at least. This is still all pretty strange to me….

I understand. Take whatever time you need to adjust yourself to this world. In the meantime, can I show you all the lovely things we have down here?

I… hmmm… I guess so…

Chloe was overjoyed and kissed her once more, this time on her forehead.

Wonderful. Come along, Steffi. There’s plenty to see….

Her tail flapped and twirled, causing small ripples in the water. Holding on to her hand, Estefania propelled herself forward, feeling the power of the oceanic currents making her pledges of everlasting discoveries. In the immortality beneath the blue, ‘happiness’ would soon cease to be just a word, but become her completely.