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Week Div — NFC — A House Divided

Tanya Rydell was so mad that she thought she could spit. Somebody was trying to put the moves on her man but if that someone thought they could get their hands on her Tommy, that bitch had another thing coming.

The funny thing was that this wasn’t like her. It was so easy to stay at home and to let Tommy make all the decisions for her. She liked that and she’d thought that Tommy had liked it too but when her friend Nancy had said she’d seen Tommy out with some woman, well something had just sort of snapped inside her and it wasn’t like she could ask Tommy about it. He’d just tell her she was being silly or that Nancy was wrong and oh jeez, she really wished that were true. Even without him telling her that, there was a part of her that wanted to believe that Nancy was wrong.

But the problem was she didn’t believe it and there was only one way to convince herself that she wasn’t right.

That’s why she was in her car following Tommy around that night when she should have been at home keeping the apartment clean for Tommy but the truth was she had to know.

The only thing was he wasn’t going anywhere. Well that wasn’t exactly true. He was going places. He was meeting up with buddies. He just didn’t seem to be meeting up with any girls.

And maybe that was a good thing.

Or maybe it wasn’t.

It was getting late, Tanya told herself. Tommy would be heading home soon and when he did, he would expect Tanya to be there waiting for him so having decided that enough was enough, Tanya headed home feeling unsure as to how she should feel about it. Should she be happy that she hadn’t caught Tommy with another woman or should she feel unhappy about it. It all depended, Tanya thought, on whether she really thought that Tommy wasn’t fooling around. If she thought he wasn’t fooling around, she should feel happy that that was confirmed. On the other hand, if she thought he was fooling around, she should be unhappy that she hadn’t caught him.

Oh what to do!

Tanya was just scurrying into the lobby of her apartment building when a man stepped up to her, a man she’d seen before. She knew this man’s name was Blake but why was he approaching her at this late hour. “So did you find her?” he asked.

“Did I find who?” a confused Tanya asked.

“Did you find the girl you were looking for, the one who’s been sleeping with your boyfriend.”

Tanya’s eyes narrowed at that and she looked at the man anew. “I’m sorry but I can’t see as how that is any of your business.”

The man just smiled. “You’re right. It is none of my business. Nevertheless, I thought I’d ask the question anyway. Did you find her?”

“I already told you. That’s none of your business.”

“Hmm. That’s too bad.”

“Why?”

“Because I thought I could help you if you wanted to find her.”

“You know who she is?”

“No but I think I can tell you where she’s going to be.”

“Where who is going to be?”

“The woman who’s been sleeping with your boyfriend.”

Tanya couldn’t help herself. She hated herself for saying it because it was like saying she didn’t trust Tommy but if she’d really trusted him, she wouldn’t have had to have followed him around all night long. “Where’s she going to be?”

“At the bar in the Lobby of the Hotel Verdi. It’s a place called Geraldi’s.”

“How do you know?”

“How do I know what?”

“How do you know that that’s where she’s going to be?”

The man just smiled. “That’s for me to know and for you to find out but since you’ve been driving around all night looking for the woman who’s been sleeping with your boyfriend, I thought maybe you’d like to know.”

Tanya growled to herself but she already knew what she was going to do. “I’ll be there,” Tanya said and then she looked down at her watch. She’d have to hurry, she told herself. Tommy would be home soon but when she looked up again ...

Where the fuck was he, she wondered.

* * *

Heather just couldn’t help herself. Ever since she’d met that girl, Lenore, she’d kind of been a little bit spacey not that she noticed it all of the time. Sometimes it was nice to just not think about anything.

Like today for instance. She knew she was going downtown and she knew she was going to the Hotel Verdi but for the life of her, she just couldn’t remember why it was that she was doing these things. She just knew she was and that was good enough for her.

Like she liked boobies. Not breasts. Boobies. She liked boobies because it was so great to call them that. It just sounded fun and she did like to have fun.

Like she liked to giggle and just what the heck was wrong with that? Sometimes, she’d giggle about something and sometimes about nothing and sometimes people would just look at her like she was stupid or something. That was just like so totally wrong. People shouldn’t be so judgmental all the time.

Which brought her back to where she was. So she was here at this bar. So maybe she couldn’t remember why she was here. Did it really matter?

What mattered was having fun.

* * *

Brittany knew the Hotel Verdi very well. She should, she thought. After all, she’d come here with her husband often enough but this was the first time she’d come here in pink hot pants and a push up bra.

One of the parking attendants came up to her almost as soon as she pulled her car up and then the boy stepped back. “Ms. Blue,” the boy said. “Is that you?”

There was a time not all that long ago that she would have looked down at the boy coming to help her but that was then and this was now. Now, she just wanted to find guys that could pay their way into her pussy and she didn’t much care who those boys were. “Hello, Ozzie,” she said.

“It’s Oscar,” the boy corrected her.

“Oh. Sorry.”

“Wow. You’ve really changed, Ms. Blue.”

Maybe she had but as far as he could tell, Oscar hadn’t. He was still a bit of a twerp. “I’m here to meet someone,” Brittany said.

The boy seemed to have recovered from his initial surprise and he was looking Brittany up and down and seemed to be assessing just what it was she looked like she was. “You know, we’re not supposed to have any working girls inside the hotel, if you know what I mean.”

Working girl. What a cute way of putting it. Cute but accurate because yes indeed, she was a working girl. “I’m meeting someone,” she said.

“Uh huh,” the parking attendant said uncertainly.

“I still have some clout here, Oscar.”

“Uh huh,” the boy said with a little less uncertainly.

“If you let me go inside, maybe I’ll let you feel up my breasts when I come out.”

“Seriously?”

“Yeah seriously but you’ve got to park my car to get it.”

“Sure thing, Ms. Blue,” the kid said. “I’ll park your car for you right away Ms. Blue.”

“And make sure you park it in a good spot,” Brittany called out as the kid drove away and then she turned and walked into the hotel. Now to see what was so important here that had her pimp sending her to meet somebody at Geraldi’s.

* * *

When Tanya entered the bar a couple of minutes after eleven, there were only two women in the place and both of them were sitting almost side by side at the bar. Tanya took a deep breath. Might as well get this over, she told herself and she strode up to both of them and tapped each of them on the shoulder. “I think I’m supposed to meet one of you here,” she said.

Both Heather and Brittany turned around almost at the very same time. “Yeah,” Brittany said, “what makes you think that?”

“Because someone’s been having an affair with my boyfriend and because I was told if I came here today at this time to this bar, I would meet the whoever it was who was doing it and since you two are the only girls in here, it’s got to be one of you.”

“Yeah well maybe maybe it’s not one of us. Maybe your party didn’t show,” Brittany said.

It was a good point, Tanya had to admit. She didn’t really know who it was she was supposed to meet and yet somehow she knew she was in the right place.

Finally, Heather interjected herself into the conversation. “Look, I don’t know what you’re talking about but to tell you the truth, I think I can say right now that your man is not my type.”

“Oh ho. So you do know him.”

“I didn’t say that,” Heather said. “I’m just saying that I’m telling you right here and now that your man is not my type.”

“I find that hard to believe.”

She could believe whatever she wanted, Heather wanted to say but what she didn’t say was that she had an eye out for Tanya’s body. The girl’s boyfriend was one hell of a lucky dude if he had her wrapped around his finger as much as he apparently did. In fact, Heather thought as she looked Tanya up and down, she wouldn’t have minded if this Tanya girl had her wrapped around her finger. Just the thought of that, just the thought of Tanya telling her what to do and of her doing it, that was so hot just so long as in the end, she got to lick this Tanya chick’s pussy.

“I don’t get it,” Tanya was saying. “How is Tommy not anyone’s type?”

“It all depends what you like.”

“What’s that supposed to mean?”

“It means that when it comes to what I like, I’d much rather have a pussy than a cock. It means I’m not really interested in your boyfriend but I am rather interested in you. It means right now I can’t help but wonder if your pussy is wet right now.”

“Eww.”

“I don’t know about her,” Brittany said, “but when it comes to handling men, I wouldn’t have any qualms about manhandling your boyfriend.”

“So you do know him?”

“You didn’t let me finish. I said I wouldn’t have any problems man handling him ... if the price was right.”

“Huh?”

“You heard me.”

“I don’t get it.”

“You heard me. I like to get paid before I let some guy inside my pussy.”

“But that would make you ... that would make you—”

“Go on. You can say it.”

“That would make you a slut.”

“Oh, honey, that would make me a whole lot more than that. That would make me a prostitute. That would make me a hooker. That might even make me a street walker or if you want, that might just make me a whore.”

“But ... but my Tommy would never do that.”

“Oh, Honey, you’re not the first woman who’s said that and I don’t know about your Tommy, maybe you are right about him, but there are lots of women who’ve said what you just said who were, I’m not sorry to say, but who were wrong.”

“Not my Tommy.”

“Fine. Not your Tommy then.”

“I don’t get it. That guy named Blake—”

“Blake,” the other two women said in near unison.

“Yeah why? Do you know him?”

“There was this girl I knew,” Heather said with a giggle. “She was a clerk in a store and I’d had my eyes on her for some time. He said I could have her if I wanted and he was right. I did.”

“With me, I used to be the wife of a rich man. I guess I was a bit of a trophy wife but this guy Blake, he baited me. He said what I really wanted was to be a whore.”

“And did you?”

Brittany smiled. “I guess I did,” she said, “and even if that’s not what I wanted, it’s what I want now.”

“So why’d he come to me then?” Tanya asked. “I don’t want anything.”

“I thought you said you wanted to find the girl who’s been stooping your guy.”

“Yeah, I did. I do actually but it’s not a fantasy of mine.”

“Maybe it is and you just don’t know it yet,” Brittany said. “Maybe you want to watch.”

* * *

That evening, Tanya ran into the Blake fellow once more in the lobby of the apartment building where she lived. “So, did you meet them?” he asked.

“Yeah,” Tanya said warily. “Why?”

“I was just wondering did you figure out who’s been fucking your boyfriend?”

Tanya couldn’t help but grit her teeth. She didn’t want to admit that she wasn’t any closer to the bitch who’d been sleeping with Tommy but something made her answer anyways. “No,” she said finally. “No, I didn’t.”

“Pity. I was hoping you would. Would you like a hint?”

“What?”

“Would you like to know who’s been sleeping with your boyfriend?”

“Yes!”

“I’ll give you a hint. Divide them up. Take them one at a time. Take Heather for example.”

“What about her?”

“I’ll bet you she told you she was into girls, didn’t she? I’ll bet that’s why she said it couldn’t be her but did you bother to test that out?”

“What do you mean?”

“Did you bother to see if she really liked girls?”

“How’m I supposed to do that?”

“You’re a clever girl. You figure it out.”

“What? You mean like check up on her or something? You mean like I should call up all her friends?”

“I had something a little bit more personal in mind.”

“Like what?”

“Like here’s her number. Let’s see if you can figure it out.”

The next morning, Tanya was still looking at the slip of paper that the man had given her. What the heck did he want her to figure out?

Well it was her phone number and there wasn’t any other information so it was obvious that this Blake guy wanted her to call Heather.

Yeah but why?

Tanya picked the phone up and then he put it down again. Why did he want her to call her?

Oh what the fuck, Tanya told herself and with that, she picked up the phone and she dialed the number.

“Hello,” a voice answered.

“Is this Heather?”

“This is she?”

“Oh hi, Heather. This is Tanya. We met yesterday at Geraldi’s.”

“Uh huh.”

Did the other woman’s voice suddenly sound more guarded, Tanya wondered, but before she could dwell on that, she pressed on. “I was wondering if you could come to my place. I’d like to talk to you.”

“Talk, huh? What about your boyfriend?”

“He’s not here right now.”

“Oh really?”

Did the other woman suddenly sound more interested Tanya wondered but she didn’t have time for idle speculation. “Yes, really,” she said. “I was wondering if you could come over.”

“Where do you live?”

“Um, 1859 Halstead, Apartment 329.”

“I know where that is,” Heather said. “I can be there in about fifteen minutes. Are you sure your boyfriend’s not there?”

“Positive.”

“Cool. I’ll see you in a little bit.”

True to her word, it wasn’t long before Tanya received a knock on her door and when she opened the door, there was Heather. “Oh, hi,” Tanya gushed. “I’m so glad you could make it. Won’t you come in.”

“My pleasure,” and Tanya couldn’t help but notice the way the other woman’s eyes seemed to drink her in. Maybe Blake was right, she thought. Maybe this Heather chick really was only in to girls but she still wasn’t convinced.

“I think we got off on the wrong foot yesterday,” she said. “I must have come off like a real crazy woman like that accusing you and your friend of sleeping with my boyfriend.”

“Huh? What? My friend?”

“The other girl who was there in the bar with you.”

“Her? I never met her before.”

“Oh. I just thought ... I mean you both knew that Blake guy ... and it looked like you were together and ... and oh we’ll, never mind. It’s not important. I just wanted to say I’m sorry.”

“You don’t have to do that.”

“Oh but I do.”

“It’s a nice apartment you have here,” Heather said.

“Thanks. I love to cook and clean and I love keeping it up for my man. Do you like to cook and clean?”

“Who me? Not really.”

“Oh you should try it. There’s nothing better than taking care of my man but then on the other hand, I wouldn’t mind taking care of a woman either.”

“Oh really.”

Was that interest there? It certainly seemed to be but there was one way to really find out. “Would you like me to show you the joys of being domestic?”

“Um, okay.”

“That’s cool. Why don’t you go take a seat in the living room and I’ll join you there in a moment.”

“Okay.”

Heather went into the living room and she took a seat as she’d been directed. Nice place, she thought. A little small but then the same was true of her place. Someone had done a good job at keeping it up though. That was nice.

She was wondering what was keeping her hostess when Tanya stepped out of the kitchen and Heather couldn’t help but gawk. In a very short amount of time, Tanya was carrying a silver tray with what looked like little pastries on it and had stripped down to just a short, black frilly apron and a pair of high heels and absolutely nothing else.

Fuck, Heather thought. The girl looked ... the girl looked hot. She’d already decided she’d liked the looks of the girl from the moment she’d seen her but now ... now, everything was on display. Cute breasts that were not too big and not too small and a waist that led to a bottom that seemed like it couldn’t help but jiggle when she walked. “What ... what are you doing?” Heather croaked.

“I already told you. I’m showing you the joys of being domestic.”

“But—”

“Shush. You just sit back there and relax and you let me take care of you.”

Heather couldn’t help but sit back. She had no idea what had come over the other girl but whatever it was, she couldn’t wait to see what was going to happen next.

“Now the first thing you have to know is that when you’re being domestic, you have three things you need to do. The first is that you need to cook. The second is that you need to clean, and the third is that you need to take care of your man or in this case, your woman. You got that?”

Heather nodded.

“Of course, sometimes it’s even better when you can do more than one of those at the same time. Like these cakes for instance. I baked them just for you. Would you like these cakes?”

Heather looked at the cakes and she nodded but then she had the feeling that by about that time, she would have said yes to almost anything.

“I thought you might but since I’m the domestic, I’m going to take care of you,” and with that, Tanya took a bite from one of the cakes before she knelt down between Heather’s legs and then she moved up to kiss Heather and even as the two women kissed, Heather could feel the other woman pushing the cake into her mouth.

Oh my God!

“What do you say? Do you want more?”

Heather nodded eagerly and Tanya smiled.

“I kind of thought you might,” and with that, she once more repeated the procedure.

The second time was better than the first and the third time was better than the second and Heather just couldn’t help herself. She had no idea what had come over this woman but whatever it was, she knew she loved it.

“Oh my,” Tanya cooed when the cakes were finally gone. “Would you look at us. We look like such a mess. There are crumbs everywhere.”

Heather wasn’t sure she saw any crumbs but then she wasn’t about to disagree.

“That brings us to the second thing that a domestic needs to do. A domestic needs to clean,” and this time, Tanya didn’t bother to ask if she could do what she was doing. She just kissed and licked over Heather’s body as she chased what might have been real or what might have been imaginary crumbs but one thing was sure. The further she went, the more she was peeling back Heather’s clothes.

Oh my God!

Her blouse was open, Heather thought, and Tanya’s lips were pecking at her tits. Tanya pulled one of the cups of her bra down just a little and she gave one of Heather’s breasts a kiss and then she did the same thing on the other side.

Oh my God!

Tanya was tugging even more on Heather’s bra and when it was clear that she wanted to take the bra all the way off, Heather knew she wasn’t going to stop her.

And then she was naked from the waist up and there was Tanya sucking away on her nipples.

Oh my God!

“Seems pretty clean up here,” Tanya said with a wicked, little smile, “but I don’t know. What about down here?”

“Oh geez,” Heather moaned as the other woman traced kisses down past her tummy.

“Should we see what’s in here?”

Oh my God!

But already Tanya was tugging at Heather’s skirt and Heather was sliding her bottom up and letting Tanya pull her skirt free.

“Ooh, I think someone likes this,” Tanya cooed, “but I think someone’s still overdressed.”

Oh my God!

And now Tanya was pulling off Heather’s panties. “I think this needs cleaning up, too,” and with that, she let her tongue slide in between Heather’s thighs.

“Oh my God,” Heather moaned and then she moaned again even as she stroked Tanya’s hair. “Oh my God.”

Tanya didn’t bother saying anything and why should she. After all, she was licking the other woman’s pussy and really, that was all that needed to be said.

“Oh my God,” Heather moaned. “You’re going to make me cum.”

Still, Tanya said nothing.

“You’re going to make me ..”

Again, Tanya said nothing.

“You’re going to ... you’re going to ... oh fuck, yes, you’re doing it. You’re making me cum. Oh God, you’re doing it. You’re making me cum.”

* * *

“So what about it?”

“What about what?”

“Do you think it was Heather?” Blake asked.

Tanya shook her head. “I don’t think so. I think she’s really into girls so it has to be the other one.”

“Brittany you mean?”

“Yeah, her.”

“So did you test that out?”

“How’m I supposed to do that?”

“She says she only has sex for money. That ought to give you some ideas, shouldn’t it?”

Tanya thought about it and then she smiled and she nodded. “Do you know how I can get a hold of her?”

“I think I do.”

“Then yes, I think I know what I can do.

* * *

“Hey, Tommy.”

Tommy couldn’t help but be surprised. He thought Tanya knew better than to call him when he was at work. “Tanya,” he said, “what’s up?”

“I know I shouldn’t call you at work but I just wanted to let you one that I’ve got a surprise waiting for you when you get home tonight so you should hurry home after work.”

“A surprise, huh? What kind of a surprise?”

“If I told you that, then it wouldn’t be a surprise now, would it?”

“Come on now. Can’t you give me a little hint?”

“Nuh uh.”

“Well, am I at least going to like this surprise of yours?”

“If I didn’t think so, then I wouldn’t be telling you to hurry home now, would I?”

“I guess not.”

“So you’re going to come straight home right father work. That’s very important, you know.”

“Sure, Babe. I’ll come straight home.”

“Good. I can’t wait. I’ll see you then.”

For the rest of the day, Tanya’s man did his job but he couldn’t help but wonder just what the heck she had waiting for him when he got home.

By the time the day was done, Tommy couldn’t wait to get home. He grabbed his jacket and he headed for the door. Moments later, he was in his car and he was on his way and after dealing with some rush hour congestion, he was finally walking up to his apartment and he was turning his key in the lock and Tanya was there to greet him as he stepped into the apartment. “Honey,” she said. “Welcome home.”

Tommy couldn’t help but gape because there was his girlfriend in the same outfit that she’d used earlier to seduce Heather. “Wow,” he said as he stepped forward. “I take it this is my surprise.”

Tanya stepped back before Tommy could put his hands around her waist. “Not quite, Honey, or maybe it’s more appropriate to say its only part of the surprise.”

“Part of the surprise?”

“Yeah, part of the surprise,” Tanya said as she led Tommy over to the couch. “You see, Honey, I know how you like to be taken care of so tonight, you’re in for a real treat. Tonight, you’ve got two women to take care of you.”

“Two?”

“Mm hmm. Brittany,” Tanya called out, “would you come out here and join us please.”

This was embarrassing, Brittany thought as she stepped out of the bedroom wearing the exact replica of what Tanya was wearing. It was embarrassing but it was what the bitch wanted and since she was willing to pay for it, then fine, she’d wear the outfit and she’d do whatever else she was told to do.

“Who’s this?” Tommy asked.

“This is my friend Brittany. She and I are going to put on a little show for you.”

“Really?”

“Yes really so why don’t you just sit down on the couch there and let us get on with what we’re going to do.”

Dumb, Brittany thought again as she and her counterpart dusted the apartment while Tommy watched. Really dumb but she was being paid for this.

Tanya was the first one to move to the couch. She snuggled in close to her boyfriend as they watched Brittany continue about the apartment. “She’s cute, isn’t she?”

“Yeah, I guess.”

“You guess,” Tanya cooed. “Only guess?”

“Well she’s not as cute as you.”

“Oh, Honey, that’s so sweet but maybe you need a closer look. Brittany, would you come over here please?”

Just as she’d been directed to do, Brittany drifted on over to the couch and then she was snuggling in on the other side of Tommy. “I think she’s cute,” tana said, “but you know what I think would make her even cuter?”

“What?”

“Brittany, I think Tommy here needs to have his cock sucked.”

Without batting an eye, Brittany lowered Tommy’s zipper and she pulled his cock out even as Tanya continued to snuggle with her man.

“There now,” Tanya said. “Don’t you think that makes her look cuter?”

“Mm yeah.”

Tanya stroked a hand over her boyfriend’s chest. “Is she a good sucker?”

“Oh yeah. She’s good.”

“Maybe you’d like to fuck her.”

“You sure about that?” Tommy asked.

“Baby, this is for you. Would you like her to maybe ride you?”

“Um, okay.”

That was all he had to say. Tanya looked at Brittany. “I think you know what to do.”

Indeed she did, Brittany thought. This was something she was used to. This was something she could do so she climbed up onto Tommy’s lap and she eased her pussy down onto Tommy’s cock.

“Do you like that, Baby?” Tanya cooed.

“Oh yeah,” Tommy groaned.

“I’m glad, Baby. You know it’s all for you.”

Tommy groaned and moments later, he was grunting as his cock filled up Brittany’s pussy.

* * *

Tanya was hardly surprised when the next day, she ran into Blake in the lobby of her apartment building.

“So did you figure it out,” he asked. “Did you figure out which of the women in that bar was sleeping with your husband?”

“You know what? I think I did.”

“Did you now,” said Blake.

“Yes, I did. When I went to that bar, there was only one woman there who had been fucking my boyfriend.”

“And?”

“And that woman was me.”