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A Mind Control Story in Mongolia

April 2008
Classifications: m/f male dominant, f/f female dominant, mc, humiliation, incest, lingerie, bdsm, beastiality

Author’s Note:

This is the first time I have written a mind control for submission to www.mcstories.com although I have been a vivid reader of stories from this website since 2001. This was a story that I wanted to, not just write, but tell as well. I also purposely chose this “title” for this story because I thought that it would make it more interesting and kinky, just like many people I knew who were interested in the shower scene from that most popular Werewolf film of all times “An American Werewolf in London”.

I also do hope that many of you do like my story and give me some feedback as well. Have fun reading

Synopsis:

A British boy named James lives with his mother in Mongolia, where she spends time teaching English to local students in secondary school. Being a loner with no friends, a local boy named Subotei becomes friendly with him and even getting cozy with him, offering him alcohol, drugs and porn magazines. Then at one point Subotei gets a chance to meet James’ mother and one day, Subotei makes a kinky suggestion of a wager with James. If Subotei wins, James must hypnotise his own mother and make her Subotei’s mind controlled slave for a week.

A Mind Control Story in Mongolia Part I

ULan Bataar was a very coLd capitaL. it was the capitaL of Mongolia, a nation sandwiched between Russia and China, with only a population of less than 2 million inhabitants. the people had diversed Asiatic type features ranging from Korean types to Mexican ones. James did not even really like living in Mongolia. His mother had responded to a job offer for anyone from the Western world to come to Mongolia and teach English to secondary school students. The government of Mongolia even offered to help buy her plane ticket and get her accomodation with some apartment block that was not far from that school where they wanted her to teach. After all to Mongolians, English was the language of commerce and still far more important than even Mandarin from neighbouring China. His mother wanted the job as it paid a lot of money and she was already losing her job, like many other people all over England due to outsourcing for cheaper labor. And after many failed relationships, she was tired of going out with men. As for why she thought of going to Mongolia, simply because she thought everyone spke English and that the country was another Korea or Japan or Shanghai.

The moment their plane landed, James and his mother were greeted by some government officials. They drove them to their future accomodation, some apartment block that was not far from the school and that James too could enrol in that school so that he did not missed out in his education. Lucky for James, his mother was granted the privilege of not having to pay fort her son’s education in that local school.

James was 18 years old. He was skinny at 5 foot 8 with brown hair and green eyes and was even semi-nerdy. He had already been in Ulan Bataar for roughly 4 weeks now. So far he has not made any friends and there weren’t many other foreign students his age to hang out with. A language barrier too.

One day while sitting all by himself in the cafe during break, he was approached by a classmate of his. The boy was skinny too and had a round face with black hair and black eyes. Same height as James. A local. The boy then said to James in English

“May I join you?”

James looekd up to him and then smiled. Finally after 4 weeks of thinking that he was not going to be making any friends, here was someone trying to be friendly with him and even speaking his language

“Yeah sure”

The boy brought his food tray and the high school operated very similarly to a public school back home. The boy offered his hand, saying

“I am Subotei”

James shook his hand

“I’m James. You speak good English”

“I’ve lived before in London”

James then realised that this local boy was probably the son of someone who had a high status in the country like a son of government official or someone wealthy who has been abroad.

“I miss England”

“I can understand that”

After both boys had much conversation, they quickly became good friends. After school hours, Subotei would take him to some nearby shop and both boys would get something to drink. Over there, Suboeti would have offered him some cigarette or even drugs and outside when they sit together on the street pavements or a mall (less sophiscated than the ones in the West), even vodka and Subotei would open up his bag and display some Russian Playboy magazines for both boys to look at.

By 5pm, James would always be headed back home. His mom would be asking him what he did the whole day and he would tell her that he was hangign out with the friend he made. His mom would normally cook them spaghetti or something she was familiar with. Lucky James that Subotei had also lived in the same apartment block too but different floor. James’ mother was 5 foot 6 and she strongly resembled Carrie Ann Moss from the Matrix Trilogy with long black hair but green eyes. Her name was Jennifer

ONE THURSDAY

James met up with Subotei after school hours were over. Subotei said

“Let’s go to the hills”

The hills were some hills that were on some nearby park. James and Subotei sat on top of one of the hills and Subotei opened up his school bag and took out a bottle of voka and offered it to James. James had a sip and could not stomach it. Subotei took it from him and laughed

“You still haven’t gotten used to it”

“No”

Subotei was sipping from his own vodka and he easily handled it. Loving it even. He then patted James at the back, saying

“Hey, you have not really been to my place yet. We always hang out at the local mall. I just received my X Box”

James only had the Nintendo DS. An X Box was a console that could be attaceh to the televisin and ahd many cool games

“You have an X Box”

“I even have that latest game Halo 3”

“Cool”

“Wanna come over to my place”

“How about now”

James and Subotei went to the apartment block that they lived in. It was strange that this was the first time Subotei had invited him back to his place. While James lived on the 3rd floor, Subotei lived on the 6th floor. They took the lift and had gotten off the 6th floor.

Outside Subotei’s apartment, Subotei knocked on the door. After a while, Subotei’s mom had opened it. She looke and smiled at James

“My friend”

“Oh yes.Please come in. Subotie has told me a lot about you James”

James was glad that his friend told his mom about him. Subotei’s mom had short black hair, round face, very slanted eyes, high cheekbones and quite pale, compared to Subotei. Once inside the apartment, Subotei had arranged the television so that he and James could play with the X Box. Subotei’s mom made them some hot tea and something to eat.

After playing for many hours, James then realised that it was getting late. he asked Subotei

“Oh shit. I’m late. What’s the time now”

Subotei was looking at the wall clock

“It’s about 8PM”

“oh shit. My mom’s gonna kill me”

“Let me come with you. That way she would understand why you are late”

Subotai had accompanied James back to James’ apartment. James had knocked on the door and his mom opened it. She looked angry and pissed, standing at the doorway

“Where have you been?”

“I was at my friend’s place”

“You could have called”

“Sorry but time flew us by”

His mom could see Subotei. She then said to him

“So whos is this?”

“Oh mom. This is my friend Subotei. I was at his place. You know, he is the one I hang out with and that he also happens to live in this block too”

His mom stared at his friend. She gave him a stare as if he was some kind of rat. She then said to her son

“Say good bye to your friend because I want to have a word with you”

James felt embarrased and then said to Subotei

“I will see you tomorrow”

“oK see you tomorrow.”

Once inside his own apartment, James’ mom was giving James a lecture about his behaviour and how she did not approve. As for Subotei, he got a chance to see what James’ mom looked like and she sure was some hottie that he wouldn’t mind fantasizing about.

FIVE WEEKS LATER—FRIDAY NIGHT

Subotei’s place. James was spending the night at Subotei, whose parensts were outstationed . As for James, his parents were divorced but his dad was an alcoholic without self-control and hence the divorce. Subotei was making them dinner but after 10PM, both boys were sat in front of the living room television, watching porn on the DVD player. They watched one film that had incest in it between mother and son. Another one was a Russian film that had two Russian girls having sex with their Dobermans and Rotweilers. James did enjoy those films and a dark part of him was reall enjoying it. After having lived in this country, morality was just a subjective word. Both boys even talked about some of the girls in their class whom they wanted to have sex with. Subotei then spoke

“My parents won’t be back for a week. You can spend the whole week here if you want”

“Not sure if my mom would be up for that”

“You know she does boss you a lot. You are eighteen”

“Yeah and she brought me all the way here too”

“Why didn’t she let you stay with relatives back in London”

“Because she would be here all by herself”

Subotei chuckled, saying

“I know western women can be bossy and demanding”

“Tell me about it”

After much talking over drinks and that Subotei was giving them both alcoholic drinks, they were talking about how they would not have to go to school because next week was a holiday. But holiday would be for 2 weeks sicne it was Mongolian New Year. But Subotei’s parents went outstation because of some commercial project, not because they were traditionalist in any sense.

Afterwards, both boys stayed up until 5AM, talking about the sex in the films, even discussing the issue of beastiality or incest or how one guy was lucky to have power over some girl he liked and make her his sex slave and also make her do degrading things.

The next day, James called his mom again and asked if wheterh he could spend another night in Subotei’s place. She was furious. But then gave in and said that perhaps he should live with Subotei instead (sarcastically and an attempted guilt-trap). James said that he should be ok to hang out with Subotei for Saturday Night too and even told Subotei about his mom being bitchy.

But that evening, both boys were playing a video game called Soul Calibur III. James was enjoying the game and complaining about his mom’s sometimes bitchiness and Subotei would bring up the great time they had watching the porn films the night before. And then it came. Subotei then said

“Hey James, are you man enough to make a wager”

“I can take anything”

James was egotistical and proud. He did not liek lsoing face at all.

“So how about a wager?”

“Wager. What did you have in mind?”

“You win, I will give you all my games. And this console”

“Are you serious? That is a crazy wager. You know this is a boring country. If I take away your means of entertainment, trust me, you woulg go mad.”

“So I lost. I am man enough to take it”

“I would be happy to go for that deal”

While they were playing that game, it was mostly James kicking Subotei’s ass in the game. But James then said

“And how about you?”

“If I win, you must hypnotise your mom and make her my slave. For the week”

“What?”

James was snickering. It was such a nasty thought. His mom was acting bitchy and the porn films and the incest film was making him equally excited about such ideas too.

“Well how about it? Your deal is much better than mine. You get my games for life. I just tget your mom for the week”

“Not sure about it.”

James did not like losing face

“Wait. Hold it. I am man enough to make wagers”

“Well how about it? Or maybe you are chicken”

Subotei laughed but James looked pissed. James then said

“No. tell you what. You’re on”

“You sure??”

“I am positive. Maybe you are the one chickening out now”

“Ok. If you can take my deal. Let’s go for it”

“You’re on”

James agreed to the wager because he was sure that he would kick Subotei’s ass and that because he was winning, he believed that Subotei was infleucne dby his own drinking and watching of the porno film that he wanted to make such an impossible deal.

“Remember. The winner is the one who wins this match”

After playing the game, Subotei turned out to be the winner. James’ jaw dropped. He lost. And now he had to give Subotei waht he wanted. A part of James did enjoy his own mom being put in her place. Subotei then said to James

“I won. Looks like I have your mom for a week”

“Yes you won. But please don’t tell anyone”

“Won’t even dream of it”

“Since now that you won, I don’t know how I can hypnotise her”

“That is easy”

Subotei went to his book shelf in his bedroom and took out a book for both boys to read. It was on Mind Control tactics and easy ones too. Subotei handed him a strange looking pendulum. The pendulum resembled a bloodstone. Subotei then said

“Now you tell her about how you can hypnotise her to experience the happiest moments in her life. So she confides in you and lets you hypnotise her. Then you make her mind blank. Once you do that, you can re-program her. You will tell her that she will retain her knowledge and memories and that you tell her mind to open up her subservient side. Then you tell her that from now on, she will be an obedient slave to the first person she sees and she will see that first person when she wakes up from the snap of a finger”

The talking made James excited. James then said

“So when do you want me to start?”

“Tomorrow. You can tell her that we tried this experiment about hypnosis and our happiest experience. I will follow you back. And once she is under our control, I will take it from there”

(to be continued)