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My Former Succubus 2: A Holiday to Remember

Chapter 6

Making My Brother Happy

“Hey. I’ve got some bad news,” I said to my brother.

“You talked to AM, right?” asked Dave

“Yeah.”

“She told you she wants to break up with me?”

“Yeah. She said that since you both are going to different colleges…”

“Her college being ten miles away from yours,” he sneered. I didn’t bother to respond.

“That’s why you should end things now,” I finished.

“Why?”

I responded, “Because she knows that you like somebody else... somebody who’ll be going to State with you.”

“Who?”

“Monica Fennelli.”

“Why would I want to be with that slut?”

“Because she’s hot.”

“Yeah, but she’s one of the biggest ho-bags in my class. She’s got a boyfriend, you know.”

“True, but they are going to different colleges. AM told me she’s really hot for you too.”

“She’s come on to me more times than I could even count. I can’t believe she said that she wanted a real man for a boyfriend. I don’t know why George is such a pussy about that bitch. I’d dump her in a heartbeat if I heard her say something like that about me.”

“Maybe it’s because she likes you, not him. So you should take her.”

“I’m not a douche bag who’d take some other guy’s girl,” he looked at me and I guessed that his words had a purpose.

“Look, bro. I never meant to come between you and AM. A lot of shit has gone down with her and trust me, you were right to be worried. You should also know that some it was your fault.”

“What the fuck could be my fault?!”

“Trust me Little Brother, you don’t want to know,” I glared back at him.

My brother was a slacker, but he was a smart guy. I am sure somewhere in the area of his brain that had been dedicated to worrying about AM, what actually happened to her was his worst case scenario. He had realized that there was a chance that AM could be or could have gotten pregnant after their sexual mishap of a couple months ago. The other thing is that for all of my brother’s immaturity, he was not a bad guy at heart. He truly loved AM. The fact that he was going with AM showed that he appreciated brains in a girl. She was a very attractive girl, but he probably could have gone out with girls who were more classically beautiful or hotter than Ann Marie Lipke, but as the total package, the girl was beyond compare.

When I saw his eyes soften, I knew there would be no further resistance. “Is she OK?” he asked.

“Not completely, but she will be,” I lied, knowing that AM was as happy as I was at the moment (and that was completely happy).

* * *

That night after we had dinner with my family, I walked into Clayton’s with my entourage of women (Beth, AM and Reenee) and my brother. We were meeting up with Mike and Maira. My brother immediately peeled off to talk to some friends. I didn’t take long for people to notice the three women that were huddled around me.

“Joshua, my dear, you certainly have a lovely group of admirers tonight,” interjected Stephanie Van Allen.

“Shit, bro!” grinned my old friend Steve Carter. Steve went to State along with Stephanie, but I guess had not gotten back to town until today.

“Hey Steve!” I grinned, as I hugged my friend.

Steve was a fairly tall black guy. He, Mike and I considered ourselves “Three Amigos” (though admitted not as funny as Chase, Martin and Short, but hopefully cooler… well at least Mike and Steve were). Mike and Steve had played Basketball in High School, but Mike was the real star and went on to get a scholarship at a “Division One University”. Steve walked onto the team at State, but was concentrating more on his studies.

After breaking the clinch, Beth resumed her grasp on my arm. Steve smiled at me. “OK, I know your brother’s gf and Mike’s ex, but who is this stunning young woman on your arm?” I could tell that Steve was in “flirt mode”. I don’t think he was truly serious about putting the moves on my girl, but it was a well known fact that Steve’s weakness was lovely women and he always got into “impress mode” when a new lovely woman came onto the scene.

“Hi. You must be Josh’s friend, Steve. I’m his girlfriend Beth Andros,” said my girlfriend, as she somehow shimmered and looked even more beautiful.

“Wow. I must say that I think you’re the most beautiful woman that I’ve ever seen,” said my friend trying to be smooth. Of course Beth was not having any of it.

“You only think?” she asked.

“What?” asked Steve.

“You only ‘think’, I’m the most beautiful woman that you’ve ever seen?”

“Uh… I mean…” stammered Steve.

Beth interrupted. “You see, what I love about Josh is that he KNOWS I’m the most beautiful woman he’s ever seen.”

I laughed. “I do,” which earned a kiss.

“I know too!” laughed Stephanie.

“Me too,” said Stephanie’s sister, Jennifer. I was pretty sure at this point that the Van Allen sisters were solidly bisexual. I thought the fact that Steve was hanging out with them to be interesting. While Steve and Stephanie had been somewhat friendly in high school and were attending the same college. Steve always had the hots for Stephanie, but her family parents were pretty snobbish. My dad was a CFO for a medium sized local company, so Stephanie’s family was happy that I escorted her to the Senior Prom. While they may not have been specifically racist, I’m sure that a young African-American man from the wrong side of the tracks was not the Van Allen’s first choice as a suitor for their daughter. Stephanie knew where her bread was buttered and had always seemed to make a sport out of rebuffing Steve’s advances.

“Why thank you, lovely ladies,” laughed Beth. “Of course Doreen and Ann Marie are incredibly beautiful too,” she said, breaking her clinch with me and pulling each to them into an embrace. “As you can see, Josh is a lucky guy.”

I looked at the girls and they were smiling. I could almost see the pink glow emanating from their bodies and I felt my cock begin to rise. I was awoken from my thoughts by Steve’s voice whispering in my ear

“Josh… all three?! Ann Marie and the fucking Boobapocalypse?! Shit, bro! You da man!”

Reenee broke her clasp with Beth and hotly kissed me; making sure to rub her huge melons into my chest. Since Dave was breaking the news to his friends about him and AM breaking up, she was a little more circumspect out of respect for Dave, but that did not stop her from gazing at me adoringly.

“Where can a girl sign up to part of Josh’s ‘Posse of Pussy’,” came Stephanie’s voice.

I heard Beth’s magical laugh. “I’m sorry, the ‘posse’ is not accepting new members at this time, but Josh will review your qualifications and we’ll call you if there’s an opening.”

Luckily, I was still kissing Doreen and was somewhat distracted, otherwise, I might have laughed my ass off.

My cock was now rock hard because Reenee was now grinding her sexy, lower torso into ‘little Josh-ee’ and I was on the verge of cumming in my pants.

Somewhere in my lust hazed brain, I heard my friend’s voice. “Dude, it’s so uncool to hoard all of the pussy for yourself.”

“Oh stop complaining. I already got you a girlfriend,” snorted Stephanie.

“But she’s a lesbian,” griped Steve.

“Yeah, but she’s in love with your cock, right?”

“I guess so.”

I broke my clinch with Reenee before I got past the point of clean underwear. “OK, this I gotta hear,” I laughed.

* * *

Stephanie and Steve then went into the story of how they had been frequently hooking up for sex up at State. Last term, Stephanie got a new roommate. Her name was Beatrice and she was a lovely, blond lipstick lesbian. “She of course fell head-over-heels in love with me,” recounted Stephanie. “It got to the point that after a week of girl-on-girl, only with her, I was missing cock, so I gave lover boy here a booty call. I had already prepared Bea for the fact that while I would be licking her, Jethro here’s long pud would be giving me the good fucking I needed.”

“I think I fell in love with Bea at first sight,” admitted Steve.

“You seem to fall in love with all of the girls at first sight,” laughed Beth.

That shut Steve up, but Stephanie continued. “Yeah, I could tell that Steve was smitten with my roommate and while she had become fond of Steve, she fell in completely in love with his cock. I mean, it was the funniest thing I had ever seen. She was mesmerized watching it pump in and out of me. After we were done, she said it was beautiful and asked if she could touch it. Then she began to sniff it and lick my pussy juice off of it. It wasn’t long before she was giving him her first actual BJ.”

“Yeah, she didn’t really know what she was doing, but I got so horny when she started to rub my cock all over her face, painting it with my pre-cum before sticking it back in her mouth again,” relayed Steve.

“TMI,” I cried and we all laughed.

“Anyway, on our third session, Bea asked for Steve to fuck her with his ‘beautiful penis’, as she called it. When I asked if she were on any birth control, she said ‘no’. She then asked if Steve had a condom.”

“I didn’t have one because Stephanie was protected. Now here’s the fucked up part. She said to fuck her anyway and she would get a ‘morning after pill’.”

“Bea was technically a virgin, but had had other things in her pussy, so she felt little pain, but she was cumming on his cock almost from the moment he put it in her.”

Steve grinned at me. “Unfortunately, you never got to fuck Stephanie…”

“A problem I want to rectify soon,” interrupted my prom date.

This caused Steve to glare at her, before he continued. He was clearly annoyed at his fuck buddy. “And Stephanie is a great lay,” he added pointedly, “but Bea is the wildest ride I’ve ever had. At one point, we weren’t even fucking. She had clasped her dancer legs… Oh by the way, she’s a dance major,” he grinned. “Anyway she clasped her legs and heels around my butt and then we were fucking see-sawing as I tried to fuck in and out of her, but her legs wouldn’t let me have any purchase. It did not really matter. I was so turned on and she was so tight that we were both cumming. In the afterglow, I wanted to kiss her, but instead she rolled us over on our sides, leaving me still deep in her, snuggled her face into my chest and we fell asleep that way.”

“Yeah, dude! She fell in love with your cock; not you,” laughed Stephanie.

Steve continued to get teased by Stephanie, Jennifer and a few girls from Jennifer’s clique. As much as I wanted to hear more of my friend’s tale of woe, I knew I had business to deal with involving my brother. The problem is that Steve would not be deterred. Having seen my newfound harem, I could tell that he wanted to question me about it. I saw him get futher pissed at Stephanie’s antics when she turned the topic back to being part of my “pussy posse”; especially when she offered to sweeten the deal to become my lover.

“I’ll let you fuck my sister,” said Stephanie.

“Hey!” complained Jennifer.

Stephanie sneered, “Like you haven’t thought of eating Beth’s pussy, while Josh fucks you.”

A far off look came over Jennifer’s eyes. “Yeah… that would be nice.”

I looked at Beth and she waggled her eyebrows at me. “Please,” I said sarcastically.

Beth gave me a look that told me that we were going to talk about this later. All of a sudden, I imagine Jennifer riding my cock, while Stephanie sat on my face. I knew if Reenee had still been kissing me, I would have been walking around with a wad in my pants. Then Steve caught my attention and pulled me to a corner table for a quiet conversation.

“Dude! You perfected your hypnosis project, didn’t you?!” he accused.

“No, I didn’t!” I technically spoke the truth.

“But you got something to work. There’s no other explanation. Doreen may look like a porn star, but she never kissed Mike like she just kissed you. That chick Beth is a goddess. She’s not only out of your league, but my league and perhaps the whole fucking human race’s league. But she’s willing to share you. I know Ann Marie has always liked you, but to dump your brother like this…”

“OK! Enough! There‘s some truth in what you say, but it’s not the hypnosis that got me the girls. It’s Beth.”

“Beth?”

“Yeah. Let’s just say that for some reason, she’s completely in love with me, but also completely bisexual. She’s also persuasive as hell!”

“Yeah, you can say that. She’s got ‘Thing One’ and ‘Thing Two’ over there drooling for her”, he said pointing to the Van Allen sisters.

“Yeah, something tells me that you may lose your fuck buddy.”

“I can live with that. The thing is I want Beatrice. I really want a relationship with her, but she’s still hung up on pussy. She won’t even kiss me unless we’re fucking. Then afterwards, she doesn’t want anything to do with me. I’m just a nightly booty call.”

“You mean, she actually calls you every night?”

“Well… she used to call. Now, I just show up and she gets all romantic with my cock. I can spend the night as long as she gets to play with my cock at anytime during the night or in the morning. She even talks to it. Do you know how I found out that she got on the pill?”

“No.”

“She told my cock. She said “I went on the pill for you, Darling’ and she was talking to my cock; not me. Then she kissed it and let it into her mouth. I almost came immediately. It was so fucking hot, but it’s really weird, man.”

“Why do you bother?”

“Because it’s the best fucking sex I’ve ever had. You’ve heard of someone ‘making love to your cock’, right?”

I nodded.

“Well, Beatrice literally makes love to my cock and my cock simply LOVES the way she kisses it and adores it and buries it deep in her pussy. After a while, she began to kiss ME when we made love and now I’m hooked on her.”

“It sounds like she’s infatuated with having sex with you and your cock, but is still hung up on her sexual identity.”

“Yeah, I guess that makes sense. Her ex also used to be her ex-roommate. She’s a radical feminist, lesbian. She broke up with Bea over the summer and now has a thing with her current roommate. Bea still goes over there from time to time play. They keep telling her all men are good for is their cocks and with the availability of good fake ones , not even for that. I’m sure this has poisoned Bea against being seriously with me. To me, it’s more than just about the sex and I want her to feel the same way. Anyway, Stephanie finally got sick of her crap and hooked up with another lesbian roommate couple. This means that I’ve been virtually living with Bea for the last couple of weeks, but the only way Bea will give me any attention is if I make my cock available to her. Dude, I need your help!”

“OK, I’ll talk to Beth and see what I can do.”

“Thanks bro, I knew I could count on you.”

We walked back to the group and I noticed that a large number of people had congregated around Beth.

“Shit, you can’t be going out with Redmond, he’s a geek!” complained Zach Turner, a big football player who graduated a year behind me.

“My boyfriend is twice the man you’ll ever be,” said Beth, as her eyes narrowed.

“Well how about I take him outside and I’ll show you what a real man does to a faggot little geek.”

“Shut the fuck up!” yelled Steve.

“Mind your own business, Carter. This is about me and fag boy over here.”

“Don’t worry about this, Steve. I’ll handle it,” I said glaring at Zach and ready to meet my maker. I then heard another familiar voice.

“What does this fucking loser want?” said my approaching brother to me, as he glared at Zach. Dave gave up a couple of inches on Zach, but my brother was just as, if not more muscular.

Zach glared back at me. “What? You need your little brother to fight your battles.”

“No, Turner. My brother can take care of himself, but I hate your fuckin’ stupid ass and I think that I’m just gonna kick the shit out of you right now!”

“What the fuck?! I just want to fight this pussy; not you.”

“You think you have a choice? I tell you I’m gonna fight you whether you like it or not. You can fight Josh if there’s anything left of your sorry ass when I’m done beating it black and blue. I’m gonna love wiping that ugly fuckin’ look off of your fuckin’ pie hole!” menaced my brother.

A sick look crossed Zach’s face and he cried “Uh!” as all of a sudden, a huge black spot appeared near his groin.

Beth whispered to me “I made him cum a ton in his pants, but everybody will think he peed them,” she laughed.

“Shit!” he cried as he ran out of the restaurant and everybody laughed.

“He fuckin’ pissed his pants,” laughed some girl I did not know.

I then saw some hot brunette with huge tits approach my brother. “Shit, Dave, that made me so fucking hot seeing you stand up to that kid.”

“Yeah, whatever, Monica. Why don’t you just go back to your boyfriend?”

“But I hear that you and Ann Marie are over. I’d dump George if you wanted me.”

“Hell, you’d fuck me and still go out with George, if I wanted you.”

“That’s what have I been trying to tell you for the last year,” grinned Monica.

“Which is exactly why I don’t want to have anything to do with you,” glared my brother, as he walked away. I saw a tear form in Monica’s eye. Beth looked at me with a wink. I tossed her my car keys and before I knew it, Beth had ushered the crying girl out of the restaurant and soon into her new life.

I then saw AM give Dave a hug. “Dave, Honey…”

“What AM?” sighed my brother.

“Don’t be so hard on her.”

“Who, Monica?”

“Yeah. I appreciate that you didn’t cheat with her. That’s why you’ll make somebody an awesome boyfriend.”

“But not you, right?” said my brother, as he glared a bit at me. I decided that silence was probably my best course of action.

“No. Not me. I’m sorry, Dave, I never should have gone out with you. You were my best friend when we were kids, but we were never right. I was never going to give you what you really wanted.”

“And what do I ‘really want’,” my brother again looking at me.

“Someone who wants and desires you. Monica does.”

“And everybody else.”

A dark look crossed AM’s face. “And just how do you know that?”

“Her reputation…”

“Do you know how much of that is true?”

“No,” he admitted.

“Have you ever seen her with anybody other than George?”

“I guess not. it’s just that…”

“Everybody’s claimed that they’ve fucked her.”

Dave’s face registered the same shock mine did. AM seldom swore. “Yeah…”

“Do you know how girls usually get bad reputations?”

Dave shook his head.

“By saying ‘no’ to the wrong guy and not having a boyfriend who would be able to stand up for them. George is a sweet guy, he’s not going to scare anybody off, right?”

“True.”

“Speaking of George, let’s face it. She’s not right for him and vice versa. You know that Hayley has been in love with George since third grade. Lisa told me that she had a crush on him last year. Either of them is a better fit for him. You, on the other hand, stud, need a girl who can take care of you. Monica’s not a dummy, but she’s not going to thrust her brains in your face. You’re a good match.”

“If she’s not a whore,” stated Dave.

“True,” admitted Ann Marie.

Dave gave her a small smile and walked away.

“Do you really believe that her reputation is undeserved?” I asked.

“I don’t know. All I know is in about ten minutes, Beth is going to lead Dave out to the car and nothing Monica has ever done will matter anymore,” grinned AM.

“I do believe you are happy about this,” I smiled.

AM whispered in my ear. “I still love Dave, even though I’ve never been in love with him, Master. I want him to be happy.”

I thought about my brother. Yeah, he had become really jerky towards me over the last few years, but when push came to shove he was ready to defend me even though he was clearly still pissed off at me over the Ann Marie situation. I guess I wanted him to be happy too. Maybe now if he would grow up a bit, maybe we would be able to finally be friends.

* * *

As AM predicted, Beth walked back into the restaurant a little more than ten minutes later wearing a big grin. George had been looking for his girlfriend, but AM had sicced her friend Hayley on him. Hayley Stevens was a pretty honey blonde. She was a bit skinny, but had oversized breasts for her build. Her lovely hazel eyes shone out from under her glasses. I could tell George was not happy about something, but AM and Doreen joined the conversation and he appeared to calm a bit.

“Dave, I need to talk to you and Josh outside for a bit,” said my approaching girl.

“OK,” said Dave, with what I perceived a questioning look.

We walked out to the SUV. When we got there, we saw an enraptured Monica sitting in the backseat, looking longingly at Dave through the window. There was still some evidence that she had recently been crying.

My brother turned to Beth. “What’s going on?”

“I’ve had a long talk with Monica and she needs to tell you something,” said Beth, as she opened the door and he climbed into the backseat. Then Beth and I climbed into the front seat.

I could tell that Monica looked nervous, but she immediately pulled my brother into a big hug and mashed her Boobapocalypse II melons against my brother’s chest. For a second, Dave tried to pull away, but I saw Beth reach back and put her hand on his shoulder and his struggling ceased.

Monica then took the lead. “Look Dave, I know you’ve heard a lot of things about me, but most of them are false,” she said from the clinch. “The truth is, I did fool around on George once, but it was after you had rejected me for the fifth time. I let myself get drunk at a party and I wound up letting one guy fuck me, but then two of his friends ganged up and raped me.”

After what happened between him and AM, I knew that Dave was sensitive about this issue.

“I’m so sorry. Why didn’t you report them?” asked Dave.

“Because I was drunk and embarrassed. I also did not want to admit that I cheated to George. I just denied the whole thing. After that, other people kept lying about me and it just wore me down. You kept rejecting me, so eventually I just gave up fighting the lies since it didn’t seem to matter anymore.”

“Why am I here?”

“Because I decided to break up with George tonight and I wanted to tell you what happened to me. I also wanted to ask one last time to be your girlfriend.”

“Why do you want me so badly?”

“I’ve wanted you since we hit puberty, but Ann Marie was always in the picture; even before you started going out with her. You only had eyes for her, so eventually I just gave up the idea of ever being with you. So when George asked me out, I said ‘yes’.”

“Then why did you start coming on to me?”

“Because I started to notice that you were always watching these,” she said, as I saw her shamelessly break the hug and place Dave’s hands on her covered boob flesh. Dave couldn’t help himself. I eventually heard Monica coo, as Dave must have given her melons a squeeze. “I knew you liked them. I bet you can tell that they like you too,” she giggled.

“No more games, Monica. What do you really want?” asked Dave.

I looked back and saw a fire in Monica’s eyes that I was sure that Beth had placed there.

“No more games, David, I want you. I want you to be my man and I will be your woman. I want everything with you and I will give myself to you completely. Nothing is off limits, I give you my body, heart and mind for our mutual desire and happiness. I will be your perfect girlfriend in any way you want me. Just say yes and take me.”

“What about George?”

“We were never right for each other. He was never the one I wanted. I wanted you.”

“And if I say no?”

“Then I will be as unhappy as George. Either way, he and I are finished tonight. The question is do you want me as much as I want you and if so; what in the fuck are you going to do about it?!” leered Monica.

A few minutes later, Monica was being pummeled by my brother’s cock. They did not seem to care that Beth and I were in the car with them. I’m sure Beth had amped up his lust, but Monica’s, big sweet tits shaking under my brother’s thrusts was truly a sight to behold. I’m sure Dave would be happy with his new girlfriend, but happier when he realized how amazing and powerful Monica would be once Beth had finished with her.