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Rebalancing the scales pt1 — Meet Zoe

MC/MF/HM

Disclaimer, all people involved are over 18 in a fictional universe etc etc.

Author note: Have you ever considered that there are a subset of humanity that get everything their own way, literally all their life only positive things happen for them.

Not once have they ever experienced hardship, everything falls into place for them without any concern for others, a good example I was given was that these people have never had to put their luggage into an overhead compartment on an airplane because someone was always there to do it for them so now, they just think that’s how it’s always supposed to work.

Is it good genetics? Is it luck? Maybe a mixture? this story is about one guy who has decided that an unfair universe needs a little rebalancing.

Part 1

Zoe Black writhed on her king size bad, basking in the afterglow of her fourth orgasm of the afternoon, skipping boring classes to sneak back to her parents incredible mansion so her quarterback 7ft 2inch boyfriend Zach, could pound her into a quivering mess all seemed a fair trade, its not like she ever failed an exam in her life and was so well liked by the teachers that they all turned a blind eye when ever she felt like being naughty.

Zoe got up and went into the shower, she liked having a taller boyfriend, being 6ft 5in herself, she liked having a big strong stud to throw her around and make her feel extra special.

Between being head cheerleader and captain of the netball team, blonde, athletic, and extremely popular, she was destined to go far in life.

Stepping into the hot shower, soaping her breasts, giggling a little as her long hair tickled the top of her firm bottom.

Feeling a hot body rub against hers, Zach groped Zoe’s large perky breasts as his flaccid but rapidly hardening rod rubbed against her wet body.

Pushing Zoe against the shower wall, playfully pushing her legs apart as she felt his 11-inch monster enter’ s her wet pussy and powerfully fuck her as the hot water bounced off both of their bodies.

They were both celebrating getting into their university of choice on full scholarships, life was so good.

Mike Zane arrived home, back to his basement to drop off his school bag and get changed before going out to his part time job at the grocery store.

Mike had been going through a tough time, his folks passed away in a car accident due to a drunk uninsured driver hitting them head on, no other family forced Mike to live in basement and pay an extortionate amount of rent for a tiny damp room to live in while pinning his hopes on getting a scholarship.

Mike’s interest in science was his only passion in life, through all the knocks and bad luck, science was the one thing that was a ray of hope, he had ideas on how to repair tissue at a cellular level, even regrow body parts custom to the user so no chance of rejection, he could see it all so clearly but he just needed the chance to show everyone what he could do.

Mikes room was full of test tubes, samples and old repurposed computers running complex tests based off Mike’s theories, what little money he had was spent on his passion as well as learning to coding as a hobby.

Nervously Mike opened the university letter, “unfortunately we do not have the budget to offer enough scholarships this year, we hope you will apply next year”.

Sighing Mike crumpled up the letter and threw it in the trash and called his science teacher to let them know the bad news.

Professor Daniels was as emotionally broken as Mike by the news, another student with all the potential in the world being discarded in favour of the sports, it’s just not fair that some people get all the breaks despite not needing it while the actually deserving people get nothing.

Professor Daniels said he would talk to Mike tomorrow and to keep his chin up, he knows that someone with Mike’s ability can make something positive out of a negative situation.

Mike pulled himself together and put on the grocery store uniform and headed out to work him minimum paid job with the Professors words rattling away in his head “make something positive out of a negative”.

The experiment to make things right.

Mike got home and went to school as normal, at least he had a rare weekend off to work on his experiment.

Firstly, there was the target, Zoe Black, universally popular, athletically gifted with immensely wealthy parents and the recipient of the full scholarship that should have been Mike’s,

Mike hacked the school database, being careful not alter anything, she never got a grade below a B, yet she somehow got an A in test she couldn’t have taken as it was widely known that she has taken two weeks off school to go skiing with her clique of cheerleader friends.

Clearly teachers were covering for her and whether she knew it or not, she was being protected from failure, not the only one in the school by the look of things as her friends and boyfriend were also showing similar grades.

“Must be nice to have people do everything for you” Mike mused as took screen grabs to add to his evidence pack, “if things go wrong then I may need some blackmail material on the school”.

Mike had settled on trying out the theory he had been working on for a long-time involving microburst visual data packet delivered to an unsuspecting individual could induce a window of suggestibility but how to do it secretly and get Zoe in a position where her suspicion wouldn’t be raised? Also, Mike had no idea how many bursts he would need to implant the suggestions.

Obviously, an app on her smartphone would be ideal but how to make sure that it was an app that Zoe would look at several times a day, cant add an app to her phone as this would be too obvious and no guarantee she would look at it and not delete immediately, cant alter her messaging apps either, these are locked down and may trigger tampering alerts.

Then it hit Mike, the school’s own app, it gives notifications about school events and timetables, it won’t have much security and hardly difficult to reconfigure the app specifically to Zoe’s phone as its all sideloaded.

It took all weekend to create the burst program but due to size and other complications, Mike settled on hitting Zoe with three short bursts to see how her mind accepts the input also the obvious limitations of the school app itself.

The bursts will come through as notifications which activate as soon as she opens her phone, the screen will emit a white flash for a fraction of a second as it sends the subliminal instructions.

First burst would be a test instruction, go the library on your own.

Second burst would be slightly more information, “you trust Mike Zane, Mike is your best friend, you trust Mike Zane completely” sent in three bursts for a fraction of a second.

Third Burst would instruct Zoe to come to Mikes basement followed by a trigger command “airhead” to get Zoe to mentally switch off and await instructions.

Mike triggered the update to Zoe’s smartphone and went to bed, excited to see if his experiment worked.

Mike arrived at school, scanning the classroom but no sight of Zoe, even her friends hadn’t seen her (Mike overheard them talking), Mike checked his watch and thought that Zoe had taken the day off to screw her boyfriend instead.

When Mike arrived back at his basement, he was surprised to see Zoe’s car on the side of the road and her standing at his door, luckily none of the neighbours had seen her due to how lowdown Mike’s front door was.

Zoe was in a trance state, staring at Mike’s front door, oblivious to anything else in the world, she must have checked the app first thing then came to school to sit in the library on her own then left school to come to Mike’s home.

Mike shuffled past Zoe who didn’t acknowledge him at all (nothing new there then) and opened his door but was knocked over unexpectedly as Zoe barged past him to into the dingy basement and stood in the centre of the room.

Mike got up off the floor, taking another look outside to make sure no one saw anything and closed the door.

Rushing over to his ancient computer, Mike loaded up the results to his experiment folder and smiled, not thinking for one second that this would work.

“Hey Zoe, how are you feeling?”

“I’m fine” Zoe replied.

“Ok then, have you been standing there all day? Do you need anything?” Mike asked looking for any kind of reaction that this could all be a massive prank.

“I have been here since 8am, my legs ache from standing up for so long and I need to pee” Zoe immediately responded.

Mike realised that they must have just missed each other, right then, here’s a chance to prove if this is a prank or not “Ok Zoe, you can use my sink to pee, but you have to take off all your clothes and use your panties to wipe yourself after your finished”

Like it was the most natural thing in the world, Zoe took off all her clothes consisting of her white blouse, cream bra and matching panties, skirt, shoes and socks, dropping them on the floor and wiggled her ass onto the sink, holding on to steady herself and let loose a long stream of urine into Mike’s basement sink, finishing she picked up her cream panties to wipe her wetness.

Mike couldn’t believe it, full verbal control, this is incredible as he pulled out his phone to take pictures, having Zoe proudly model for him in all her glory.

Mike readied his camera phone “Zoe spank your butt as hard as you can while apologising to me for stealing my scholarship that you don’t need or deserve to have, do left butt cheek then right, don’t stop until I say so”

Zoe looked directly at Mike, bent over slightly (and yet still taller than Mike) and started swatting her butt “I’m so sorry for stealing your scholarship “spank” “I don’t deserve it and never have” spank” I don’t need it but took it from you anyway “spank”.

Each powerful strike caused her perfect tits to shake, her voice didn’t faulter or crack despite her butt becoming a glowing red which Mike captured on his phone, dropping back onto his foldable sofa/bed “ok stop, now to really make it up to me, give me a blow job and make sure you swallow everything”.

For years Mike was teased about his genitals by the jock football team psychos who all were proud of their cocks in the changing room, we all knew the coach had the guys on steroids to build mass and increased energy, “maybe there was something that I could do about that as well” as Mike’s mind wondered about all the things that he could do.

Zoe dropped to her needs and pulled Mike’s trousers down along with his boxer shorts, freeing Mikes rock hard 6-inch cock which Zoe took straight into her mouth, bobbing up and down clamping her limps tight around his shaft.

Mike stopped her before he got too close to cumming, made Zoe turn around with her now bright red ass high in the air as he impaled her wet pussy from behind, fucking her as hard as he could before he exploded into her tight wet hole.

Mike left Zoe on the threadbare carpet, the sight of the hottest girl in school at his command, Mike spent the next few hours questioning Zoe about all her friends, her boyfriend and his friends, who is dating who, what were her plans for the rest of the school year before instructing her to forget everything that happened at the basement and that she could only recall feeling ill and spent the day in bed then instructed her to get dressed except for the underwear and to go home.

Mike had work to do on the app and the next set of instructions.

End of part 1