Reader’s Picks: Dark Z
Dark Z is a male who enjoys Evil Transformations, Epic Tales, and certain Romances (though not at the same time). I prefer ff, mf, and Ft (fetish wear and body modification) in my fantasy worlds. Different stories result in different reactions, but I would describe my favorite stories as either Epics or Corruptions. Both types appeal to me on different levels.
A Small Case of Overkill by Sara H
From the light into the dark, the reader gets to experience the gradual transformation of a loving wife into a latex clad seductress under the control of her mistress. The true fun of this story is watching as the subtle changes in Lindsey’s perception of a moment in time transform her.... Body and mind . This is the first of the “Goddess Julia” stories, and my personal favorite.
Dimensions of Dementia by J. Darksong
This is a fun trip into the mind of a mad man. The good Doctor Jacob Thorton, enjoys inflicting a sexual insanity upon his victims. Erasing their mind, then rebuilding it. Although the conversion sequences are well done, watching the characters recall their pasts, and then watching his now demented victims recall their new pasts is incredibly erotic and where the true fun lies. Watch as the (not so) Good doctor turns a college girl into his loving assistant, and a pair of cops into his enforcers. What will he do to his former therapist? Stay tuned.
Shortskirt Street By Colleen Whyte
This is more of a fun story than a dark corruption. Rachel is a prudish girl whose father runs a clinic that has just started offering physical enhancements to its patients. Of course, Rachel cannot abide by this and is determined to put an end to it. But after a taste of the new services that the Clinic has to offer Rachel embraces a new lifestyle. Now she can’t wait to spread her new outlook of sex, fetishwear, and mild incest to the other women in the clinic.
Social Security Slut by Jackpot
This story doesn’t involve the use of Powers, chemicals, or any other normal MC element. Stacie makes the mistake of being rude to the wrong woman, and we watch as her new mistress forces her to erase her life’s history from the computers. The shock of this loss combined with a rapid induction by rote reduces Stacie to a whore for her mistress.
The Curse of the Wereslut by dor_01
A great transformation story, the protagonist finds herself at the mercy of a were-slut who wants to control her. The main character is two powerful to fall under her power so the only option is to convert her into a were slut as well. This has to be one of the most erotic conversions ever to be written. The transformation only takes seconds, but the visualization is perfect. As Jamie’s breasts erupt from her body, and her skin color changes from Caucasian to Asian. All of dor_01’s stories contain erotic transformations of some type, and I could hope for nothing more than to see continuations of them.
Tim, the Teenage MC by Rass Senip
This story holds a special place in my heart as it is one of the first stories I read at mcstories.com. (Makes me feel old knowing that I’ve been here since 1997... before the merger with ASSTR.) Anyway...
This is perhaps the most impressive epic tale in the archive, a story where a young boy discovers his powers and progresses through his life with his friends. Using his powers for good and bad. There are moments of incredible bravery and others of tremendous selfishness. Although Tim is the character with the empathic abilities, it is easy to get inside this character’s head. Reminiscent of Mario Puzo’s “The Godfather” this is the tale of a “Primitive King” among men. Sad at times, joyous at others... with the pain of tragedy and loss.. the elation of success... and the beauty that is true love and friendship. This should be required reading for all MC authors.
Ahead of the Game by Night Wolf
Today, the Greek Gods of legend are merely that, myths... Or are they? Jeff never imagined that his 16th birthday would begin an epic date with destiny and the Gods themselves. This story starts out with a fun MC story as Jeff discovers he has mental powers... and they work on women. One by one women and friends join his family, teaching him and training him for a future battle, and sharing in his love (and body). Written with an excellent understanding of Greek mythology, and applied well to the world of today, this story is modern mythology at it’s best.
Pretender to the Throne by URN My Power
When you start with a name like Kevin Shadows you know you’re in for something special :) Rather than the Myths of Greece, this story is a fine example of Fantasy/Horror. It starts out as a decent story about a Half Vampire, Half Elf learning about his powers... until during a moment of horror where an evil creature is at his throat, he is granted the power to become more. This story brings together the modern myths/horrors such as the Elves, Vampires, Werewolves, Valkries, etc. Like all great epics this story involves the gathering of heroes around a focal point. Additionally, this story contains some interesting side characters. A unique aspect that most writers aren’t capable of achieving as flawlessly as done here.
Alan by Julian Coreto
Alan is a kind young man who is given a power by a man in the hospital bed next to his Grandfather. After leaving the hospital, he finds that the power is the spirit of an ancient, and that this spirit has imbued him with certain mental gifts. Which Alan of course tests on his “girlfriend’s” sister and turns her into a submissive for him. As the story progresses Alan learns to respect others and their decisions and while meeting allies and fighting enemies, he enjoys exploring new sexual horizons with several women. A good adventure with some erotic use of toys and very light bd themes, I can’t wait for the next part of this series.
Camp—Part 1—Ron Begins His Journey by Eric Storm
The CAMP series is an interesting epic where a teen gains MC abilities, but must deal with other telepaths and agencies out to catch the telepaths. No super powers or mythology here, this is an MC adventure in the modern world.