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A Simple $5 Bet

Disclaimer: No one under 18 is to read this. If you do you’ll go blind and I’ll have a law suit on my hands.

Jason watched as his ex-girlfriend picked out the watch she wanted for her birthday from him. They had broken up 2 months earlier because he felt he just wasn’t ready for a relationship. Elaine Ortega was a nice girl from Puerto Rico. She was also one of the most beutiful women on the planet. Most people called her the teenage equivalent of Cameron Diaz. Although they had broken up they remained good friends so they spent alot of time together. Which was good since half the time her father would yell and beat her when she was home. She couldn’t run away because he was a cop, and if she did he would put a warrant out for her that she had murdered 23 people in cold blood. But despite all this she had a really nice personality towards everone else.

“That one.” Elaine suddenly said pointing to a gold pocket watch, “It reminds me of the one my Grandfather had when I was little. My cousin’s and I used to pretend we could hypnotize each other with it.” Jason paid for the watch, “Happy 18th.” he said.

The two went back his house. Jason channel surfed while Elaine polished her new watch. Jason slowly began to get bored. There was nothing on. So he began to think of something to do. Both he and Elaine were very competative by nature, but since it was winter all their favorite sports weren’t in season. Then he got a great idea. “Hey Elaine wanna make your childhood fantasy a teenage reality?”

“What are you talking about?” Elaine asked.

“I’m saying I bet you five dollars you can’t hypnotize me with that watch.”

“You have got to be kidding.”

“Nope.” Jason said as he put a five dollar bill on the coffee table. “You’re on.” Elaine said.

Jason sat back in his recliner as Elaine slowly began to swing the pocket watch back and forth in front of his eyes, “Watch the watch.” She started, “You are getting sleepy. Very very sleepy.”

As he continued to follow the watch with his eyes Jason thought, “Ha, I’m not sleepy must not be working.”

Elaine continued the induction, “All your stresses and worries are going away as you relax and grow sleepier.”

Jason yawned and thought, “Oh no! It’s starting to take affect. Gotta resist it if I’m gonna win this bet.”

The pocket watch continued to swing back and forth in front of Jason’s eyes as Elaine said, “Felling sleepier with each swing of the watch. Letting everything fade away but me, the watch, and the sound of my voice.”

Jason began to panic as the sounds of traffic going by outside drowned out and everything but Elaine and the watch faded away to black. “Must resist. Can’t let myself be hypnotized.” He thought.

“You are so very tired now. Your eyelids grow heavier as you continue to watch the watch. You are so very sleepy. Your eyelids are very very heavy. Like lead weights. So heavy you can no longer hold them open. You are falling into a deep deep sleep.”

Jason’s eyes closed as he fell into a deep hypnotized sleep. Elaine walked over to the coffee table and picked up the $5 Jason had bet and said, “Well it looks like I won the bet.”

Jason slept while Elaine thought what to do. “Well I might as well test the depth of his trance and see how much control I have over him.” She thought. “Jason while you are hypnotized you will do what ever I command and answer any question I ask no matter what. Do you understand?”

“Yes master.” Jason said in a low monotone.

“Now then Jason do you still love me?”

“Yes master, I still do, but I’m just not ready for a relationship, plus your dad hated me and told me to break up with you or he’d shoot me, and if I told anyone he’d shoot me.”

“Well when you wake up you will no longer be afraid of my dad and be ready to start a relationship. Now let’s see how much futher this conrol thing goes. Jason I want you to drop your pants and masterbate for me.”

Jason drop his pants and shot his hot cum out of his hard penis. Elaine then put his penis in her mouth as she slowly began to suck. The oral sex was wonderful. Then suddenly she had a thought, “If I can get this much control over Jason who is the one person in the world who just won’t let himself be controled I wonder what affect this would have a certain dickhead of a father.” She removed Jason’s stiff rod from her mouth and wipe off what she had on her lips, and said, “Now Jason I’m off to improve my life greatly. Why don’t you take a hypno-power-nap.”

“Yes master.” Jason said as he fell back into a hypnotized sleep. Elaine then left the house.

Elaine arrived at her house her father was in a rage, “Elaine where the hell have you been?”

“With friends.”

“Why the fuck weren’t you here making me my dinner.”

“Because I was out learning something that would get you out of my life forever.” She took out the watch and began to swing it back and forth in front of her father’s eyes. “What the hell is that.” He said.

“Now daddy just relax and focus all your attention on the watch as it slowly swings back and forth. It makes you so relaxed so calm so sleepy.” As she continued to swing the watch back and forth Elaine smiled as she saw her father’s eyes locked on the watch, “Now then dad you are getting sleepier with each swing of the watch. Your mind is getting empty, your eyelids are getting heavy, and you are so very very sleepy. Now when I count to three you will become so sleepy you will no longer be able to stay awake. 1...2...3.” Her father’s eyes closed. “Now dad I’m in control of you now. You know I believe everyone deserves a second chance. Now when I snap my fingers you will immediatly make me the sole benifactor of the will, then fake your own death, and finally join the Peace Corps under the allias, Dick Largo.” Elaine snapped her fingers, and her father immediatly left to full fill his master’s biddings.

“Now that he’s gone I can live the life I’ve always wanted, and Jason and I can finally get together.” Elaine left and went back to Jason’s.

“Now Jason when I count to three you will awaken from your trance and have no recollection of me controling you. All that will remain will be my post hypnotic suggestions. Also, so you won’t confused this gap in time will be filled with you losing the bet and me making you think you were a chicken. 1..2..3.” Jason woke up and said, “Cluck cluck. Very funny. Well you won the bet fair and square. By the way I think I’m ready to start a relationship now. Wanna give it another try?”

“Absolutly!” Elaine said. The two embraced in a long pattionate kiss.

That night the news reported a red pick up truck had driven off the 49th street cliff and crashed and burned. The driver of the truck Mr. Ortega had left a suicide note about how he hated himself for the sins he had commited against his daughter and couldn’t live anymore.

Over the next few days Elaine employed her acting expertise as she cried for the media and at the funeral.

One night after a movie Jason and Elaine went to her house. “You know Elaine there was a question I’ve been wanting to ask you.” Jason got down on one knee and presented a ring, “Will you marry me.”

“Yes I will.” The two kissed and began to make out. Soon they were naked and about to engage in sex.

“Wait wait I know how we can make this sexual endevor even better.”

“How?” Jason asked.

Elaine took out the pocket watch, “It’s quite simple really. Just watch the watch. You are feeling sleepy. Very very sleepy. With each swing of the watch your eyelids are getting heavier and heavier. Now when I snap my fingers you will fall into a deep trance.”

Elaine snapped her fingers and Jason fell asleep. “Now then you are very aroused Jason, and you feel the desire to please your master, and I want you to please me with a round of super powerful hypno-sex.” Jason said, “Yes master.” and the two bodies locked together in the dance of hard core sex.

Epilogue: Five years later

Elaine and Jason are now happly married.Elaine is now a high school principle. Jason is a Dentitist. Elaine is expecting the couple’s first child. Mr. Ortega a.k.a Dick Largo is now serving with the Peace Corps in Cambodia.

One day a senior was sent to Elaine’s office for smoking marijuana on school grounds. “Now Joe why were you smoking an illegal substance on school grounds?”

“I just can’t stop I’m addicted.”

“Maybe I can help.” Elaine said as she reached into her pocket and pulled out an old birthday present.

“How?”

“Simple. Why don’t you just watch the watch...”

The End