‘The characters in Nick Vegas’ stories are FICTIONAL characters, crafted by the mind of Nick Vegas. Any resemblance to persons living or dead are purely coincidental, including their behaviors, good or bad. No characters represent an entire people, or culture, their appearance is merely for the aesthetic value that appeals to Nick Vegas’ libido and that of his loyal readers.’
‘Correcting’ Mary
copyright © 2020 Nick Vegas
25yr old Mary was adorable with her petite build, long hair and cutesy ways, but her Crohn’s, her depression, her anxiety, and her food allergies really made dating a hassle for her.
There was so much to explain, so many things to avoid, and it was really getting to her. She had to scan menus for allergies and explain the things that triggered her anxiety, it was making her pretty much undateable.
She was getting annoyed with it all, and getting very depressed. But then she found an interesting ad online, and that made her think the ‘Jackie of all trades’ could possibly help: “moods, foods and attitudes corrected! Mind over matter therapy.”
The CL author claimed to be able cure crohn’s, help with depression, and even some food allergies and more, with a simple combo of ‘guided meditation and gut bacteria replacement she claimed to have pioneered, using a proprietary method of her own design’.
Kimberly was what one would call a: ‘glamazon.’ She was rather tall, 5′ 11″ to 6 feet, a large breasted type, who was built strong, and prone to wearing Birkenstocks, with tight fitting jeans, and clingy t-shirts. She sported a cute grown out former pixie cut, and she was pretty enough she almost never wore make up. Her voice was raspy and sexy, but oddly soothing. It had a pleasant lilt to it.
She was big into natural foods, and she used crystals rather than deodorant. She would grab an essential oil before she would use a commercial store brand perfume. For her it all worked. Most of her former partners, mostly male, a couple female, every race and ethnicity you could think of: were always enamored by her natural scent. It was kind of her calling card. If you met Kimberly in person you’d feel the urge to sniff her.
She arrived on time and she lit a few candles she brought with her in her large hemp woven bag, and then she opened her little ‘box of capsules’ and laid out several for Mary.
She had one of those ‘pill per day boxes’ with days labeled and a cute sticker of her face on it.
Kimberly: ‘Ok, so I laid out the morning, afternoon and bedtime doses. These will totally reboot and rebuild your intestinal flora and the results have been nothing short of amazing.” She said.
She continued: ‘I couldn’t help but notice you wear cute dressy shoes, which unfortunately—add tension and discomfort to your already uncomfortable issues. I recommend Birkenstocks, as they reshape the foot and give your body the natural connection to the earth it needs.”
Mary glanced down at Kimberly’s size 9s and said:
“Hippie shoes too? I will have to think about that one, I like dressing pretty, fancy shoes are my thing, cuteness, you know..”
Kimberly laughed. “Well it’s an option, and you’d be surprised.”
Kimberly: “Let’s do the guided meditation, of which I have a prerecorded induction for you to keep as an mp3, to use a couple times per day, but not while driving or operating heavy machinery.”
Mary laughed: “Yeah, I’m operating heavy machinery all over the place.”
Kimberly did a good 45-minute guided meditation and she delved deep.
When she awoke Mary, Kimberly said:
Kimberly: “Ok, I hope this works out well, I will see you every other day this week, then once a week for 2 more weeks, ok?
I left a box of herbal tea, please read the box and have a cup waiting for me when I am about to arrive. Thanks.”
Kimberly then removed her old Birkenstocks and she put on another, slightly newer pair she had in her bag.
She turned to Mary: “ Now Kick off those fancy shoes and begin to wear these around the house until we meet again, from waking til bedtime.
Mary paused for a moment She sneered. Kimberly was nice enough and all, but wearing a stranger’s old Birkenstocks seemed weird.
Mary: “Really? I don’t know.”
She thought that for a brief moment and then she thought: ‘Wait, what’s the big deal, girls share clothes all the time. It was like they were besties already, yeah’
When she placed her feet into the warm Birkenstocks, a look of pleasant surprise came over her face.
Mary: : “oh wow, I stand corrected.”
Kimberly: I also have two bottles of all natural toner to use instead of deodorant or chemicals. One is for under your arms and crotch, the other is marked ‘ped’ for your feet. Apply each one at night before sleep at night and again in the morning after a shower.” She left those as well and then she left, as her phone was ringing.
Mary kicked off her fancy shoes, size 8.5 and she placed her feet into the Birkenstocks only a ½ size larger. Sure it necessitated she walk so as to not lose them but she was actually shocked at how comfy they were.
She got to work doing her time consuming computer based work and the rest of the day went as normal.
She faithfully took the tablets and noticed within the first day some of her stomach and intestinal symptoms were reduced. ‘Holy shit’, she thought. “This stuff is starting to work already.’
Then a day passed and then Kimberly returned with more tablets and more toner.
Mary had followed the box and handed Kimberly her tea when she arrived.
Kimberly asked Mary how she felt and ran her through a series of questions.
“How was she sleeping, how was her eliminating? How were her depressive thoughts? Was she Gassy? Feeling Better? How about your anxiety about dating?’
Mary was tickled pink with the results so far, and noticed not only did she have better moods, but her appetite had improved, and her lower back felt relief from the Birkenstocks, or so she claimed. She no longer worried about dating at all nor did she feel ‘lonely’.
Mary said she needed more capsules and that they were a ‘miracle’ worker. When she asked what was in them,
Kimberly simply said: “a proprietary blend.”
Mary was also thrilled with the ‘toner’ and she requested more of that too. She said she “loved the scent.’
Kimberly was pleased and she recommended doubling the tablet dosage then, and applying the toner more frequently and showering only ½ as much, as all that extra showering was removing oils and she had been ‘over washing.’
There was another guided meditation and then Kimberly said she’d be back in a couple days, having left the requested items. Mary seemed especially elated to have them and took two capsules and then applied the toner the minute she received them.
This went on for the first week, and at the end of that period Kimberly returned with more capsules and more toner.
Mary told her: “I haven’t had any digestive issues, and my mood has been better all week! I wish you would tell me what is in these, I love it, you are my hero You’re like..like my favorite person right now!”
Kimberly laughed, appreciating the compliment and they did another guided meditation.
When Mary awoke, she confessed. “I really need to get a pair of these shoes of my own, they feel amazing. And with this toner, I feel like I could go a couple days without a shower and just use this, right? It smells amaze!” she said.
Kimberly smiled and said she’d be back in 5 days and she had left enough supplies.
That week. Mary used the toner, and she took her capsules, noticing her digestive issues were drastically improved, and that showering less often was no big deal. This toner always made her smell amazing, and she also discovered that after using it, her libido increased as well, and her anxiety decreased to almost zero.
Near the end of the week she had used most of one bottle, but there was still some left in the ped bottle, so she thought ‘toner is toner’ and she used a cotton ball and then applied it as a facial. Her skin looked amazing. Again her libido went up, and she laughed. What the hell. She figured she’d grind one out, but then she thought the ped toner smelled familiar.
She picked up the Birkenstocks and noticed the aroma was not dissimilar. She ended up checking and double checking and checking yet again as Kimberly’s face flashed in her mind and then she surprisingly had a tremendous orgasm. She actually collapsed on the floor and then rested her head on the Birkenstocks as her pillow. Her dreams were bizarre and erotic. This scenario repeated.
Time for Kimberly’s visit again
Kimberly arrived and she had the usual. She noticed Mary looked different.
Kimberly commented: ‘You changed your look, did you get bored or was it time for a change?’
Mary, now with a home cut pixie cut, answered.
Mary: “It came to me that I should just go ahead and cut my hair like this, it’s so..low maintenance. And I realized like these t shirts without the annoying sleeves, so I cut them all off.”
Kimberly smiled: “It’s a good look for you. Goes great with the birks, and a pair of faded jeans.”
Mary blushed. “Thanks, I think you have been an amazing influence, oh, are you ever gonna tell me what is in these?” She quickly took another two capsules and swallowed them. She hungrily grabbed the toner, and used it as a facial, loving it.
Kimberly relented: “Sure, right after today’s guided meditation.”
They did another guided meditation.
As the mediation ended, Kimberly awoke Mary, and then Kimberly asked her line of questions. Again all 5 star ratings on everything.
Kimberly: “You said you wanted to know what was in the capsules.”
Mary seemed excited. “Yes, I’m so curious, they have been so helpful.”
Kimberly, “I took the liberty to mention a couple post hypnotic suggestions in each guided meditation”
Mary: “That’s totally fine.
Kimberly: “That was one of them”
Mary: “One of what?” she giggled.
Kimberly: ‘Exactly.’
Kimberly: “You have been doing a fecal exchange from day one. I package my own, dehydrated and processed, which then actually replaces your flora with mine, your digestive enzymes with mine, and probably some dna with mine, so your moods, tastes and appetites will mirror mine now.”
Mary’s expression was blank as she processed what she heard, then she simply smiled:
Mary: ‘Oh wow, that’s amazing, but what about the toners?’
Kimberly: “Your calm reaction to the news was also a posthypnotic, which also included being aroused and extremely submissive once you got the news.”
Mary: “what was?’ Mary then immediately knelt in front of Kimberly. Then She slowly and carefully removed Kimberly’s Birkenstocks, as she studied them with reverence.
Mary: “I know you are kind of…like, my counselor, so to speak, and this is well… ‘business’, but this has helped me so much… would it be inappropriate of me if I gave you a really nice, really long foot rub… and then maybe made you dinner afterward…? I’d love to cook for you. It would be such an honor.”
Kimberly: “Not at all, I would hope you’d do that every visit, and that you feel really feel comfortable while you are paying extra special attention to my feet, and even offer full body massages if I mention I feel exhausted after work.”
Mary smiled widely.
Kimberly: In fact, you could massage my feet whenever the mood strikes if you so chose, whenever we are in private, unless I say otherwise of course, meaning in public by my choice.”
Mary: “Oh my gosh what a great idea, that was kind of what I had hoped you’d say.”
Mary then began eagerly kneading Kimberly’s feet, staring at them, admiring them. She kept moving her face ever closer. “Mmm’ she moaned. “I thought another woman’s feet would be yucky, but yours certainly aren’t, they’re the opposite.”
Mary: “Do you get a lot of compliments on your feet? They are fantastic.”
Kimberly: (nonplussed) “All the time, oh, I noticed you burned thru the toners as well.”
Mary; “Yes, I used so much of the one toner, I had to use the ped toner as a facial. Tee hee. God it smells so good, soo good, I love wearing it.”
Kimberly: “That’s just fine, big surprise: those are both made from my pheromones and some witch-hazel, so you’ll smell just like me… just like me.”
Mary: “Oh my gosh, no wonder I liked it so much…it’s like, addictive…hey can I share with you what I dreamt and not get into trouble? You won’t think I’m weird? I mean sharing dreams is kind of on a serious friend level.”
Kimberly: “Of course, share away.”
Mary then promptly repositioned onto her back and then she quickly repositioned herself so that she could grab Kimberly’s ankles, then she and moved Kimberly’s feet, so the soles of Kimberly’s feet were then both resting firmly on her face. Mary then put her arms fully underneath her and she just stayed there, with Kimberly’s feet covering her face completely, as she inhaled deeply, ‘mmming and mmming’.
Mary: “I dreamt this and it was so wild I desperately wanted to try it. I dreamt it made me more and more obedient to you as well, making me unable to resist any command. I, I woke up really horny, I admit.”
Kimberly: “Really? And… tell me… how is it?”
Mary: She was now muffled with her pelvis twitching and her toes curling “Amazing, it’s…it’s heaven! Better than I imagined. Can we do this every visit too please, I promise will be super obedient, and super submissive too, oh my gosh, oh my gosh. I will be so good!
Mary had been well corrected so far.