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The Emerald Aisle

“I know what you want.”

“Oh yeah,” Chloe said testily, “and just what might that be?”

Maggie just laughed. “Come on,” she said, “just looking at your face, it’s pretty obvious what you want.”

“Maybe so but it’s pretty obvious that you haven’t told me what you think it is that I want.”

Maggie was suddenly serious. “Fair enough,” she said. “Okay, you want to know what it is that I know that you want, it’s pretty simple. You want to come out on top.”

“Come out on top?” Chloe asked cautiously.

Maggie laughed again. “Would you listen to yourself. God, you’re being so cautious like you don’t want to admit what everyone knows. You want to be the best. You want to come out on top and even when there’s not a race, you want there to be a race so you can be the one who wins it.”

“Maybe,” the slim brunette grudgingly allowed.

“There’s no maybe about it. You want to come out on top and you know what?”

“What?”

“I can help you get what you want.”

“I’m doing just fine on my own,” Chloe said testily.

“Yeah but that’s just the problem. You’re all by yourself and as much as you try to be the best, you know there’s always someone who’s just a little bit better than you.”

“Who?”

“You know who.”

“You’re talking about Colleen O’Donnell.”

“Of course. No matter what you do, she always seems to stay right there with you. She’s just as smart as you.”

“Is not,” Chloe muttered.

“She’s just as pretty as you.”

“Is not,” Chloe muttered again.

“She’s definitely more popular than you.”

Even Chloe couldn’t disagree with that. Colleen O’Donnell was certainly well liked.

“And it all comes so easy to her. That’s what’s got to gall you the most. As much as you try to be the best, she seems to be able to stay right there with you and she does it with such ease and more than that, people like her.”

Yeah, Chloe had to admit. That did gall her.

“See. I do know what you want and more than that, I can help you.”

“How?”

“I can help you get the upper hand,” Maggie said, “and what’s more, I can help you get a little payback while you do it. How would you like that?”

A little payback did sound like fun. “I’m listening.”

Maggie just laughed again. “I told you I knew what you wanted.”

* * *

Chloe probably would have been amazed at just how much control Maggie already had over her rival and the amazing thing was that it had all started out so innocently with a bout of sleep anxiety. Her doctor had suggested sleep medications but her parents had resisted and eventually, her parents had turned to hypnosis.

Hypnosis. It sounded so new age-y and wasn’t that just like her parents, Maggie had thought, but fine, she’d go along with it.

It hadn’t worked at first because Maggie hadn’t wanted it to work. She’d resisted at first because truthfully, she hadn’t wanted it to work but in the end, it had worked, and with its success, Maggie had found herself fascinated by the topic. How had it worked, she wanted to know. How did it work and what could it have done to her.

And the more she learned, the more she wanted to know and yet as much as she knew, she never imagined that she’d have the chance to use what she’d learned and yet that chance had come to her.

She’d been talking with Colleen O’Donnell one day when the girl had confided to her that she was feeling stressed.

Why, Maggie had wanted to know.

It was all the pressure to be her best, Colleen had confided.

You feel pressure, an amazed Maggie had asked.

Of course, Colleen had said.

And that’s when Maggie had told her about what she’d done so she could sleep.

“Wow,” Colleen had said. “Do you think that could help me?”

“I don’t see why not?”

“Wow. So you want to try it?”

And that’s when Maggie finally got it. Colleen actually thought she was volunteering to hypnotize her.

She almost said that she didn’t do that kind of stuff. She almost said that if Colleen wanted something for that, she should go to a registered therapist. She almost said all that and more but she didn’t.

What would be the harm, she thought. What would be the harm to actually see if she could do it.

So she’d actually agreed to do it and she’d been so amazed that it actually worked but that led her to a whole new idea. Now that she had Colleen hypnotized, she couldn’t help but wonder ... what should she do with her.

And almost as soon as she asked herself that, she knew the answer. “Colleen,” she asked when she had the girl under, “what’s your favorite color?”

“Green.”

Green huh, Maggie had thought. “Oh, um, okay,” she’d said. “Green. Okay. I want you to imagine yourself in a corridor. The walls are green. The ceiling is green. The carpet is green. It’s all very rich looking. It’s a beautiful green. It’s a very calm place. It’s a very relaxed place. You know in your mind that more than anything, this is a safe place. This is a place where you can be totally honest even with yourself without fear of retribution. Can you see it?”

“Yes.”

“On either side of this emerald aisle, there are doors. Each door leads you to something you want but think you cannot have. Do you understand?”

“Yes.”

“Each door leads to something you deeply desire but think you cannot have but there’s one door that calls to you more than any other door. Can you see that door?”

“I can see that door.”

“You’re standing in front of that door now. You’re reaching out for the door and now you’re pushing it open and I want to tell me what’s inside.” This should be interesting, Maggie had thought.

Interesting hardly began to describe it. “There are two girls there,” Colleen said.

“Two girls? What girls?”

“I don’t know,” Colleen had said. “I don’t know them.”

What?! That didn’t make sense, Maggie had thought. Had she somehow set up the premise wrong? “What are the girls doing?” she’d asked.

“One of them is licking the other one’s pussy.”

“W-what?!”

“One of them is licking the other one’s pussy,” Colleen had said again.

“O-okay,” Maggie had said. “Um, tell me more.”

“There are two girls,” Colleen had said. “They’re both naked, of course, and one of them, the one getting her pussy licked, she’s kind of exotic looking. Maybe she’s Asian. I’m not sure but her skin is darker than the girl who’s licking her pussy which isn’t that big a deal.”

“Why isn’t that a big deal?” Maggie had asked.

“Because the one doing the licking, she’s very white just like me,” Colleen said. “I can only see her from behind but it’s the way I want to see her most.”

“Why?”

“Because I’m looking right at her butt. I love her butt. It’s small and tight but it’s just round enough. I want to hold her butt. I want it so bad.”

Oh my God, Maggie had thought. This was certainly more than she’d ever expected to get from the other girl but Colleen wasn’t done.

“I love her butt because I know her butt is just like mine. I want to kiss her butt. I want to kiss her butt so bad.”

“Is the White girl you?”

“N-n-no, I don’t think so but I wish she was.”

“Why?”

“Because I can tell she’s about to make the other girl cum and I know I want that, too.”

“Okay.”

“The exotic girl is so close now. She’s so close. She’s playing with her little breasts as the other one eats her pussy and now she makes this little gasp.”

“Why is she gasping?”

“Because the other girl is making her cum. Oh my God. It’s so beautiful.”

“Colleen, I want you to pull back from the room and now you’re closing the door behind you. You’re back in the hall. You’re back in the emerald aisle, right?”

“Yes.”

“Let’s try another door then.”

“Okay.”

“Are you standing in front of the door?”

“Yes.”

“Open the door then and tell me what you see.”

“I see Chloe.”

“Who?”

“I see Chloe.”

“Chloe? Wait. You mean our Chloe? You mean the one from school?”

“Yes.”

Oh my God, Maggie had thought. This was hardly anything close to what she’d expected to hear. “What’s she doing?” she’d asked.

“She’s sitting in a dressing room in front of some mirrors and she’s brushing her hair.”

Oh my God. “Does she see you?” Maggie had asked.

“No,” Colleen said wistfully. “She never sees me.”

“But you’d like her to notice you?”

“Yes,” Colleen had said and there was no doubting the intensity of that feeling.

Maggie had sat back after that. She’d really done this as a lark. She hadn’t ever really thought she was going to be able to hypnotize her friend but now that she had ... wow.

It was time to wake her up though. Maggie knew that but before she did that, there were a few housekeeping items to take care of including a trigger that would bring her friend right back to where she now was anytime she wanted it.

* * *

Chloe couldn’t believe she’d let Maggie talk her into this. This was silly. It was ridiculous. It was so ... oh man, she could get in so much trouble for doing this and yet she knew she was going to do it anyway.

The funny thing was the girl was right where Maggie had said she’d be and standing just how Maggie said she’d be standing. She was in the parking lot but most of the cars had gone now and she was just standing there almost as if she were waiting for something.

Or someone.

Chloe took a breath as she came up behind the other girl. She really hoped she wasn’t going to regret this.

Chloe put her arms around Colleen’s body. “Would you do something for me,” Chloe whispered and even as she did, she felt the other girl stiffen. She really hoped this was going to work because if it didn’t, people were going to think she was really stupid. “We’ve got that big test coming up in Mr. Hurley’s class. Top score’s probably going to be you and me, but from now on, whenever you get the urge to study, would you think about how you’d rather be licking another girl’s pussy instead?”

This was it, Chloe told herself. If Maggie was right, that was all she’d have to do, but she wasn’t even sure how she’d know for sure.

Colleen’s body seemed to start under Chloe’s hands and then the brunette breathed again and it was only then that Chloe realized the girl had been holding her breath. “I’ll do as you say.”

“What?”

Colleen shook her head as if to clear something from her mind. “Chloe?” she asked. “What are ... what do you want?”

Chloe pulled back. “Nothing,” she said and then she took a deep breath. “Nothing. I was just going to go study for the test for Mr. Hurley’s class. What about you?”

Colleen seemed to nod as if in agreement and then she seemed to reconsider. “I was, too, but you know what? I think I got something even better in mind.”

“Yeah? Like what?”

Colleen smiled. “I’m not telling.”

“You’re not telling? Why not?”

“Because I’m not sure you’d understand,” and with that, Colleen just walked away.

Chloe couldn’t help but wonder where the other girl was going but at least it seemed as if Maggie had been right. Whatever had just happened, it didn’t seem as if there were going to be any repercussions from it.

Colleen just couldn’t help herself. As much as she knew that she should go study for Mr. Hurley’s test like Chloe was going to go do, every time she tried to think about it, she kept thinking about something else and that something else was driving her crazy. Already, her pussy was wet and just the thought of that was enough to fuel her passion.

Most of the kids had gone home for the day but not all of them and now as she walked back through the halls of her school, she couldn’t help but wonder if there might be someone who could give her what she wanted. There were still a few of them still around but in a way, that only made it worse. She knew what she wanted. She wanted to lick some girl’s pussy.

Actually, it wasn’t just ‘some’ girl’s pussy, Colleen told herself. It was a very specific girl but that hardly made things better.

She almost ran into Teagan Jones as she rounded a corner. “Hey, Colleen,” Teagan said.

Colleen could feel her pussy twinge as she looked at the cheerleader. “Hey,” she said.

Teagan looked back at the other girl. “Is something wrong?”

“Wrong? No. Why should anything be wrong?”

“You just seem ... distracted.”

“Me. Distracted. No. I’m fine.”

“Are you sure, because if I didn’t know better, I’d say you wanted to eat my pussy.”

“What? No!”

“Oh come on,” Teagan said. “The whole school knows what you are.”

“What am I?”

“You’re a girl who likes girls ... a lot. You’re the type of girl who likes to lick another girl’s pussy.”

Oh my God, Colleen thought. Was that what everyone thought. She thought she’d managed to keep it all a secret.

“Come on.”

“What?”

“Come on. Follow me.”

Colleen followed. What else could she do she told herself as the other girl led her to one of the now vacant classrooms.

Teagan took her right to the front of the room and then she turned around to face her and she pulled up her little, green cheerleader’s skirt. Oh my God, Colleen thought. She was wearing matching panties but then of course she was. She was a cheerleader after all.

“Take my panties down.”

Colleen hesitated for only a moment before she knelt and took the panties down.

“Good girl,” the cheerleader said as she leaned back against the desk and spread her legs and her fingers played with her pussy. “Now I think you know what to do with this,” she said.

Oh my God. It was right there, Colleen told herself. It was right there. She shouldn’t.

And yet she was. She was leaning forward and then her tongue was flicking up against that pussy.

“Mmm yeah,” Teagan moaned. “Mmm. That’s it. Lick that pussy.”

She didn’t seem to have any choice, Colleen thought as she continued to lick and that was when something else occurred to her. The other girl was wet. The other girl was wet for her tongue. Did that mean ... did that mean that one of the most popular girls in school was just like her.

“Don’t stop now,” Teagan moaned. “You’re doing such a good job.”

Colleen wasn’t stopping. She didn’t care anymore why Teagan was doing what she was doing. She just cared that it was getting done.

“Ooh, you’re almost there.”

Colleen tongue kept working the other girl’s nub. Almost there, she thought. What an erotic set of words.

“Oh my God,” Teagan gasped.

Colleen could feel the other girl’s hips as they bucked under her tongue and she couldn’t help herself. She just had to lick her harder.

And then she was back in the halls of her school and Teagan Jones was walking on by her. What? No, Colleen thought. A fantasy. A daydream. That’s all that was and her pussy was even hotter and wetter than it had been before. She shook her head in frustration.

A couple of days had passed and Mr. Hurley’s test was coming up and she still hadn’t studied for it. Oh, she’d had plenty more fantasies. She was getting pretty good at those but for some reason, she just couldn’t seem to study.

“Hey, Colleen. Whatcha doin’?”

Colleen looked up from the bench where she’d been trying her best not to think about getting her tongue shoved up some hot and deserving, little tat but the problem was every time she tried to study, she got the urge to lick some pussy instead and right now, her pussy was so fucking wet. “Oh hey, Katie,” she said.

“Whatcha doin?” Katie asked again. “You studying?”

Colleen fought back the urge to moan. Even that word was starting to make her hot. Dang, she really needed to find a pussy to lick.

“You mind if I hang out with you?” Katie asked as she took a place next to Colleen on the bench.

As a matter of fact, Colleen thought, now that she’d mentioned it, well, everyone knew what Katie was and Colleen didn’t want people to get the wrong impression even if the wrong impression was the right impression. Everyone knew Katie liked girls and that was fine with Colleen if that was the way she wanted to be but she didn’t want other people to think she was that way.

“What’s the matter?” Katie asked.

“Nothing,” Colleen said.

“Are you sure? You seem a little bit nervous.”

“I’m not nervous but I’ve got to go.”

“That’s cool,” Katie said. “I understand,” but even as she said it, she was leaning in closer. “First though,” she said in a low voice, “before you go, would you do something for me?”

Katie knew Colleen was getting ready to run away. She was almost used to it by now. Most girls kept her at a distance. Almost, but not quite, but as soon as Katie’d said what she’d said, Colleen seemed to stop what she was doing and she seemed to settle down again.

Katie couldn’t help but lick her lips. She’d always liked Colleen but the other girl had always seemed so unreachable, but now, if what Maggie had said was true, now, she shouldn’t be hard to get at all.

Katie licked her lips once again. Here goes nothing, she told herself.

She leaned in and she whispered in the other girl’s ear. “You like other girls,” Katie said. “You like being in their company. You like being intimate with girls. You like giving them pleasure, and you like receiving pleasure as well. The more you get, the more you want to give. The more you give, the more you want to get. You want sex with women. You want it and you need it, so I would like you to take my body and make love to me.”

Katie held her breath. This was it, she told herself. She waited for Colleen’s response.

Colleen sighed and then she let her breath out. “I’ll do as you say,” she said.

Katie couldn’t believe it. “Seriously,” she asked. “You really mean it?”

Colleen turned and looked at her friend. She couldn’t believe how hot she was. God, she needed Katie. She needed her so bad. She leaned in and she kissed her friend.

Katie pulled back. “Whoa. What are you doing?”

Colleen looked hurt. “I’m kissing you,” she said.

“But someone might see.”

“I don’t care about that,” Colleen said. “I just want to make love to you.”

“I don’t believe it,” Katie muttered.

“What’s not to believe?” Colleen asked. “I love you. I want to make you feel good.”

Even if Katie had still been inclined to not believe what Colleen was saying, it was hard to deny the truth of it when Colleen’s hand was already stroking her and when the other girl was already starting to nuzzle closer.

“Come on,” Katie said breathlessly.

“Why? Where are we going?”

“Back to my place where we can be alone.”

That was all it took to get Colleen racing after the other girl.

It wasn’t long before Katie was letting the two of them into her bedroom. “I didn’t know you were into girls, too,” she said as she shut the door behind them. “If I had, I would have come onto you earlier.”

Colleen wasn’t sure what to say to that.

“You want to see what I got?”

“What?”

Katie went to her nightstand and when she turned back around, she was holding two matching pink dildos. “I’ve been saving these for just the right girl,” she said.

“You think I’m the right girl?”

“I think we’re going to find out,” Katie said.

It wasn’t long before the two girls had gotten naked and were lying together on Katie’s bed.

It started with some gentle kissing at first, almost as if the two of them were trying to feel each other out but then the kissing graduated to petting which led to more kissing.

“You want to try them out?” Katie asked.

“What?”

“You know what.”

She didn’t really need the dildos, Colleen told herself. In fact, she was just fine with what they were doing now but it was obvious that Katie wanted to try them out.

“So you want to do it?”

“Sure. I guess.”

“Cool. I’ll do you first and then you can do me.”

I’ll do you first. That sounded so ... so clinical.

“Mmm. It looks like someone’s already wet,” Katie said as she slipped down between Colleen’s legs.

Well yeah, of course she was, Colleen thought. Why, wasn’t Katie wet?

And then Katie worked the dildo into her pussy and Colleen couldn’t help but moan.

“Ooh, I see someone likes this.”

“Yeah,” Colleen moaned and then she gasped as Katie’s fingers worked her clit. Maybe this wasn’t such a bad idea, she thought.

“You’ve got such a pretty pussy.”

“Yeah?”

“Yeah. Oh my God. I can’t wait to make you cum.”

That makes two of us, Colleen thought.

“And you’re so responsive. Do you like this?”

“I love it.”

“Are you going to cum for me?”

“Yes.”

“Good. That’s just what I wanted to hear.”

Colleen couldn’t help but groan again as her body finally did exactly what she said it was going to do.

“Wow,” Katie exclaimed when Colleen was done. “You really came good.”

Colleen nodded. “Thanks.”

“No thanks needed. You must have really liked that.”

“I did.”

“But now it’s your turn.”

Again with the turns, Colleen thought, but it didn’t really matter. She was going to do what she was going to do anyways. She slid down between the other girl’s legs and she let her fingers work the other girl’s pussy.

“Oh, that’s nice,” Katie purred.

Colleen kissed her pussy and then she slid her tongue between her lips.

“Mmm yeah,” the other girl moaned.

Colleen’s tongue found its way to Katie’s clit.

“Oh yeah,” the other girl moaned again. “That’s it. Do me. Do me with the dildo.”

Colleen would have preferred to continue using her tongue, but if that was what she wanted, then fine. She slid the pink dildo into Katie’s wet pussy.

“Oh my God, yes.”

“You like that, huh?”

“I love it.”

“Good. I’m glad,” and with that, Colleen kept working the dildo in and out of that pussy.

“Oh my God,” the other girl moaned. “Oh my God.”

“What?”

“I’m going to cum.”

“Yeah?”

“Yeah. Oh my God. Do me harder.”

“Okay.”

Katie moaned as the dildo savaged her cunt and all the while, there were Colleen’s fingers rubbing away at her clit.

“Oh my God,” the girl moaned. “Oh my God.”

Katie’s body left absolutely no doubt as to what was going on between her legs.

“Oh my God,” she moaned. “Oh my God.”

“Did you like that?” Colleen asked.

“Yeah. It was great.”

“Good. Then maybe we can do it again.”

* * *

She was back in the emerald aisle and once more, she could hear Maggie’s voice. “You’ve been doing a very good job,” Maggie’s voice said.

“Thank you,” an obviously entranced girl said.

“Have you been thinking about licking pussies?”

“Yes.”

“Have you?”

“I think about it all the time.”

“That’s a good girl but now I think you’ve earned your reward.”

“My reward.”

“I want you to pick a door. Do you see the door?”

“Yes.”

“Go to the door.”

The girl went to the door.

“Open the door.”

The girl opened the door.

“Wake up to your new life.”

Chloe’s eyes blinked open and she found herself looking down at a very naked Colleen with her face buried between an equally naked Maggie’s legs.

Hey, that was her job, she found herself thinking but in the very next thought, she found herself unable to begrudge the other girl anything.

Maggie looked up at her. “Don’t just stand there,” she told Chloe.

No, of course not, Chloe thought. She needed to take her clothes off just like the others but when she looked down at herself, she realized she was already naked.

Good, she found herself thinking. That was just the way she was supposed to be and then she was dropping down beside Colleen and as Colleen moved to the side, her tongue took its own turn on Maggie’s pussy.

“Mmm yeah,” Maggie moaned as she stroked Chloe’s hair. “You’re such a good girl, aren’t you? You both are.”

Chloe didn’t say anything but she moved aside so that Colleen could take a turn on Maggie’s pussy. She wasn’t sure if she was a good girl or not but one thing was for sure. She knew she and Colleen were doing what they were meant to do.