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Mars: 400,000 years ago

Mars. It is not a red, dead and barren world. It is a world full of life.

But it is a world spins on a different axis. But one part of it is constantly in the dark. A line—a shadow wall—visible in the ground where the world of light and the world of darkness meet. The world of light has night. The world of darkness—always darkness.

Near this curtain of light people dwell. The world is not too cold, not too hot. It is a people in this world that we must now look to…

Chapter One

Attu smarted from the humiliation. Tan, Bel, and Tokin urinated on him; laughing as they did. The three spraying liberally their piss upon Attu’s bdy.

Near-by the chief Ma’ok simply stood by and watched. It was his opinion that if someone did not stand up for themselves they were not any kind of a man. He turned to his sons Lor and Yon. “If I ever see you not fight, I will disown you” “Yes, father” Lor said

Yon saw Bela approached. They knew trouble was coming. The three went back into their hut.

“Tan! Bel! Tonkin!” Bela yelled as she ran from the village fence line to the defensive ditch.

As she approached them she picked up a piece of wood and wielded it like a club

The three youth backed away.

“Stupid Attu” Tonkin spat.

Bela whacked him on the butt

“Ow!” he cried, it smarted

She stopped and looked down at her son, crying. She turned and returned into the line of the wooden palisade.

Attu had hoped for some sympathy from his mother.

She gave him none

He was a disappointment to her. She too shared the notion about manhood that Ma’ok understood.

It seemed to her that he would not survive as a man, he had no … no spark in him. There was nothing manly about him.

Tok ran to him as he entered the hut

She was sympathetic.

They hugged each other till Bela scolded her daughter.

“He’ll never be a man if you smother him!” Bela said

“Don’t be so cruel…” she began. Bela smacked Tok across the face, using the back of her hand. “Don’t talk back to me!” Bela said

And now it was Tok who was confronted by Attu’s embrace

As Bela went out of the hut Tok felt a hardness press against her. She looked down to Attu’s groin. His cock was pressing against her from under his loincloth

“What is this?” she gasped

“Shh!” he whispered. He rolled her onto her back and was atop of her. She didn’t understand what was happening when he pressed his cock heard against her furry snatch.

“Ow!” she cried. He softly placed his hand over her mouth to muffle her cries as he penetrated her

She found herself wrapping her legs around him as he humped her hard and fast. She looked into his eyes trying to understand what was happening. She accepted her brother’s love

And then, he came in her.

It was over in less than two minutes.

She straightened herself out as their mother returned.

She looked at her brother with shocked amazement. It had caught her off-guard, and it had both hurt and warmed her at the same time. “What’s got into you?” Bela asked as she saw Tok sitting there in a daze

“I… err…” Tok began

“Come… help me with the meal…” Tok stood up, and felt the cum running down her inner thigh. She went to help her mother with the preparations… no meat thanks to Attu’s inability to hunt. They had wooden bowls, set out with herbs, nettles, and other vegetation.

Bela made some comments about the lack of meat. All understood that she was criticising her son.

The three sat around the hearth. Tok leant in on her brother’s shoulder as they ate.

Bela cut her a nasty look… she did not like how close her children seemed to be.

It was about time that Attu took a mate.

“Have you thought of taking Reni?” Bela suddenly asked her son

“Reni?” “Yes” Bela said… it wasn’t that shocking an idea… Reni had bled, she was capable of having offspring.

“Ah, no….”

“You are not much of a man” Bela said “You should be happy that Reni should want you” “One day” Attu said, “I will be more powerful than any other” “Well, you’re not…” Bela added

“What would you do then?” Tok smiled “Don’t encourage him” Bela interjected “This world… this whole world would know my name” Attu said, “And they would fear my name” he added muttering under his breath “Well I can make arrangements with her mother…” Bela added wanting to bring the discussion back to reality, “You need a mate…if I am to have grandchildren”

“I…” “Just let me take care of it” Bela said. Then she noticed a look from her own daughter… it looked like jealousy.

“This is a nice meal” Attu said

“For a meal with no meat…” Bela added just to remind him of his uselessness.

Attu kept his own counsel. He was too frightened to challenge his mother. But he made plans in his head. He smiled at what he thought might happen

“I will go to the big river in the morning” he said, “There’s plenty of game there this season”

“You do that” Bela said, “You do that indeed”

“I will go with you” Tok whispered

“What was that?” Bela asked

“Nothing, mother” Tok said

As the sun set they lay down around the fire to sleep.

Chapter Two

“Where are you two going?” Yan asked them

Attu and Tok were surprised to find someone else up so early in the pre-dawn.

Yan was aged between Attu and Tok.

“We are going to hunt” “I will come to” Yan said, before they could protest

“Why do you bring your sister?” Yan asked after some time

“She will cook for us” Attu said

“Like a wife’ Yan said

Attu turned and looked at Tok. She blushed. They were in fact a lot like husband and wife, not just brother and sister. “Yes” she smiled taking Attu’s hand “I will cook for my man” He squeezed her hand gently.

It took till the end of the day to reach the hunting grounds and they were disappointed by the lack of game “Where could they have gone?” Yan said disappointed.

He threw his spear into the ground in disgust and frustration.

“We should go back” Yan said

“No. We will camp” Tok said

“I take no order from a woman!” Yan turned angrily

Attu immediately stepped between them, facing Yan. He scowled, and Yan backed down.

“You can go if you wish” Attu said “No man owns another man”

“No man owns another man” Yan and Tok said; it was one of their laws.

Once Attu saw that Yan had backed down he turned to his sister. She smiled. She was happy to see him act as a man; even if against such a minor foe.

“I will build a fire” Tok said

Attu had a stick over his shoulder and a skin made into a bundle over one end. He now undid this and unpacked

They had several skins for bedding and as Tok gathered sticks he laid these out. He put two skins aside each other… normally this is what a husband would do for his wife—so that they could couple

Yan looked at the arrangement; the meaning of it was obvious to him, but he was concerned.

Tok noticed and she blushed when Yan looked at her.

That night, as Yan went to sleep she rolled atop her brother and took him into her. They rutted for a while.

She saw Yan watching them.

Tok rode her brother’s hard cock without shame.

“Aiiiiiiii!” she screamed as she came. Her hips contracted and began milking her brother of his cum.

Chapter Three

By the dawn’s early light a thunderous noise. All three were woken by the trembling of the ground

Yan leapt up and stared at the ground.

Tok and Attu had their faces to the sky; deep into the shadowlands

“The earth shakes!” Yan said, “We must leave before we are swallowed up!”

He heard no response from the siblings. He turned to see them looking up

“Attu? Tok?” he said

Suddenly the sky was bathed in flashes of light.

Yan spun around to see a ball of light streak across the sky towards the shadowlands.

Attu rose to his feet, drawing his sister up beside him. She bent down and picked up her skin to cover her nakedness.

“What is it?”Yan trembled, a quiver in his voice. “It’s a sign from the great spirit” Tok said

“We must go”

“But it headed into the shadowlands”

“There is nothing to worry there” Attu said

“You know this?” “My father had been there many times”

“Well I’m not going” Yan said

“I will go” “Then I will go to” Tok said

“You should stay” “We are joined in body. My place is with you” “That’s just stupid” Yan said, “You two are not a pair” “We have paired” “It is against our laws” “No, it is just not custom” Attu said

“It’s the same thing” “No, it’s not” Attu said “If my sister chooses me as her man, then I choose her as my woman” Tok squeezed her brother’s hand and smiled at him.

“Well… anyway” Yan said “I am not going with you” “Then at least stay here” Tok said reaching out and taking his hand gently. “Stay for a day or so and see what happens”

“And if you don’t return?” Yan asked

“Then go warn the others” Attu said

Chapter Four

Attu and his mate/sister Tok walked for a day towards the still glowing skyline. Deeper into the shadowlands.

At the end of the journey they found it…

“What is it?” Tok asked

“It looks like a black water” Attu said

In a crater was a black oily pool. About it were pieces of something the two had never seen; they were not even aware what it was made of… metal.

A piece of the hard material had strange shapes on it. Attu looked it over before being drawn back to the goo.

Attu was focused on the liquid. He almost thought it spoke to him.

He swaggered. Something about it. He couldn’t focus

He wasn’t aware, but his sister felt the same way

“I must leave…” he said

“I…” Tok began but could not form words in her head any more.

“Leave” Attu said

But instead he staggered towards the black oily slime. It was almost as if it were calling to him

“At—tu” Tok gasped

She could barely focus, but found herself drawn to the sludge too.

Attu stopped on the edge. He took off his skins and shoes and stepped into the mess, his cock rock hard as if he were going to fuck it.

He suddenly screamed in pain. The liquid flowed up over his legs

Had he the presence of mind he would have seen his sister do exactly the same thing… and her scream was just as urgent as his own

He looked down as the black oily goo seemed to climb up over his body.

Tok felt it move up her legs and then, remarkably, it moved inside her

Attu felt it too, up into his rectum, and then more painfully through the eye of his penis.

The screaming stopped only as they were totally engulfed. They struggled but it has an elasticity that instead of breaking contained them

It was a day later when the still surface of the black goo seemed to bubble over. Attu was expelled.

Moments later his sister too.

Attu took a moment to process what had happened. He felt different right away. He rose up. He felt strong

Tok rose too. When she looked at him she saw black featureless eyes. She raised her hand to her own face wondering if her eyes were the same as her brother’s.

He smiled

They were drawn together.

His cock loomed up, larger than before.

She virtually leaped onto him, her legs apart, impaling herself on her brother’s large member.

They rutted. Both came a number of times. Attu shot load after load into his sister… both pleasantly surprised at the depth of their orgasms; and the seemingly endless flow of joy they brought to each other.

“I feel powerful” Attu said.

“So do I”

Attu leaped up. He flew about 20ft into the air. He landed 20ft away. He laughed. He and his sister tested their new powers.

Attu was able to crush a rock as if it were made of nothing. Tok went over to a fallen log. She picked it up and threw it. It flew more than 100ft away before hitting the ground so hard as to be buried completely.

They laughed. They fucked.

And then the hunger.

A gnawing in their stomachs like they’d never felt before.

It was deeper than ever imagined.

Chapter Five

It was at sunset that Yan felt their presence.

“Attu?” he called out, leaping to his feet. He grabbed his spear.

He turned to see his friend standing there

“Attu!” he gasped “You scared me!”

Attu didn’t move or make a sound

“Attu?” Yan said. He adjusted the hold on his spear. He sensed danger.

Attu moved forward towards the camp’s fire-light.

Yan saw Attu’s black eyes

“What are you?” he gasped. He thrust his spear hard and fast

Attu was quick, but still caught the edge along his side.

Where the wood pierced his flesh it burned like fire

He howled in pain, temporarily shocked by it

Tok leapt out of the shadows, knocking him to the ground as Attu fell away crying in pain.

“Tok?” he said

“Yan” she smiled

He noticed her mouth did not open but he had heard her clearly.

Then, her mouth did open. Her upper canine teeth extended downwards till they were sharp fangs. He raised his arm to beat her

“Tok!” he cried

“Lie still” she said in his head.

His hand fell away

She turned his head and bit into him.

His neck burned.

He barely noticed as the whimpering Attu joined his sister.

The two siblings feasted

They grunted like animals as they fed.

Their joy was the last thing Yan heard in his head.

What was left of Yan was not very much. His body sunken and his skin desiccated

They copulated beside him, over him. Attu noticed that his leg was lying in the fire.

As the sun began to rise Attu felt his skin begin to seer

He went to wake his sister but she felt it already and was on her feet trying to pat down her skin, as if it were flamed.

They turned and ran… towards the shadows.

The vampire siblings were saved by their inhuman speed, and the fact that they were so close to the shadowlands.

They reached the shadows, with fire burning them

Once in the shadows the fires diminished and their own ability to heal took over and they were restored; but it was a valuable lesson… sunlight hurt. Sunlight could kill.

Attu turned to his sister. They leaped at each other and fucked…

Chapter Six

The siblings found their lovemaking intense and long-lasting. Each had increased stamina.

What had been Attu and what had been the black slime… was together a new being. Tok was the same too. They has so much energy from draining Yan. They had no regret.

They ran with joy and found themselves back at the village in no time at all.

It was as if they were faster than the wild animals.

They arrived at the village and all were still asleep.

Bela was woken as her son and daughter peeled back her animal skin blanket.

“Attu?” she gasped half asleep “Tok? Is that you?” She felt Attu spread her legs

“Attu!” she said angrily

His eyes—black and featureless seemed to trap hers “Still” his mind said into hers

Her arms flopped helpless by her side

He grinned. He looked at his sister. They kissed “Fuck her” she said to her brother.

He drove into her

“Mm-nnn-nnnph!” Bela cried unable to voice her disgust

Tok rose up on her feet and as he fucked his mother Attu tongued his sister. His tongue was obscenely long

He humped his mother and then came in her. She stared up at him angrily, her eyes puffy and watery.

Ma’ok, the tribal chief was woken by the hide panel door being torn from his wooden hut.

He rose to his feet. His wife Ani, daughter Pers only more slowly waking

“Attu?” he gasped as he made out the face there

Suddenly Attu was atop him.

“Attu!” Ani cried as she saw her husband pinned down

“Still” Attu’s mind said to Ma’ok. His body relaxed. Attu turned his prey’s head to the side and he bit into Ma’ok’s neck and began to feed

Before Ani could help she was knocked flat by Tok. Tok smiled, her fangs extending “Still” she said into Ani’s mind. She turned and looked at Pers who seemed to freeze to the spot

Tok smiled and bit into Ani and fed.

The sibling lovers rose from their meal. Ma’ok was no longer breathing. Ani was gasping for air… she would survive

Tok turned to Pers who suddenly gasped as if released from a hold. “Come, lick this” she said in Pers’ mind. Pers came forward on her knees and began tonguing Tok’s vagina

Attu smiled.

They were going to have fun with the village.

But, after raping Pers the two had another idea

Chapter Seven

Bela was crying still when her children returned.

“What did you do to me?” she yelled at them

“Silence” Tok said. They were with Reni—the girl who had been promised to Attu. She had dried blood caked to her inner thigh… it was clear she’d been fucked recently.

And suddenly Bela couldn’t speak. Reni too was silent.

“Come with us” Attu said

Bela rose, unable not to obey them. She shuffled after them.

For a day they travelled—back to the site of the black slick. Only they were not alone. Matak, Yan’s younger brother tracked them.

He hoped to find what had happened to his brother.

They camped; the family. Matak didn’t keep a fire as he camped on a hill overlooking them.

He was disgusted to see the three of them rutting. He noticed none of them seemed to speak. He did not know it was because the vampires no longer needed to, and that Bela was under command not to.

The next day he rose to find tha they had gone

Suddenly he realised Attu was standing there

“You thought you could sneak up on us?” he said in Matak’s mind. “I can sense your thoughts!” “What…?” Matak began

“Silence” Attu said, “You can come with us too…”

The party of five continued on a day in silence—except that Attu and his sister Tok continued to talk without speaking

They arrived at the black pool.

Bela and Reni were forced to undress. Bela was thrown inside the pool. Despite the command at silence she screamed out in pain as she was engulfed

Next Reni went in.

Matak was thrown in too.

They emerged later, their eyes black

“What have you done?” Bela spoke without a voice

“You are like us now” Tok smiled

Reni felt down her body, feeling it like she had never felt herself before.

She drew her mother to her and they kissed. Attu drew Matak to him and they embraced to. Their cocks touched, rock hard in seconds.

Attu spun Matak around and bent him over. He gasped with joy as he slid up into Matak tight anus. Matak too, rock hard cock as his anus was pounded by vampire sausage.

Bela was eager to explore her daughter. She felt so horny. Reni too. They fucked.

……

Lor and Yon crept through the bush, spears ready; the hunt was on. Prey in sight. Only they were now being hunted too.

Hungry eyes watching. Then, they pounced

Lor sensed it first. He spun and launched his spear in one action.

Lor was quick, he threw his spear, hitting Reni in the chest. She fell back, suddenly, screaming. The spear had pierced her heart. She writhed in pain. Then after a moment she stopped

Attu was momentarily taken aback by this. He had not realised that wood would still harm them. Reni’s body shook violently then it seemed to explode into a puff of powder. Nothing but a pile of ash-like dust was left

Attu stood stunned.

Tok was fast and came up on Yon

Matak came up on Lor.

Matak fed on one male as Tok took Yon to her mother for her first meal. Bela drained Yon with relish.

As soon as she had bitten into him Yon’s whole body relaxed. He was unable to fight her

The vampires then returned to the village.

Epilogue

Pers and her mother Ani were taken to the pool and converted as well.

The first meal meant draining someone and this happened to Tan, and Bel.

Tonkin slipped out of the village. He ran… towards the shadow-curtain and the sunlight. He had no idea it meant safety… he only wanted to get away. He could well have run further into the darkness

Attu, and his vampires enslaved the village.

The villagers became like cattle to them—property. Soon they enslaved neighbouring villages too.

Tonkin slipped back into the shadows and went to rescue his own mother, Kamen

But Kamen was under the influence of her masters and she screamed for help. She did not want to disobey them

Tonkin ran again

Only this time Attu came after him. Although Attu was coming from another village he was soon catching up to Tonkin

Tonkin ran across the shadow-curtain. When Attu approached it he burned in pain and realised that he could not travel beyond it. The direct line of sunlight set his skin ablaze.

He paced back and forth wishing to get at Tonkin who was getting further away.

He he been closer Tonkin would have come under Attu’s mind power and simply walked back into the shadowlands.

It was a valuable lesson to the both of them.

Attu’s evil empire grew. He was able to live his dream of having power.

Tonkin had gone to some villages to warn them and he lead some into the light. They had to struggle to exist there because of the occasional light bursts that drenched their land in unbearable heat.

Attu’s village grew as he forced his cattle to breed. He could not have children, but it didn’t stop him fucking his sister.

Years passed and Tonkin was long in the ground, but the people lived on, a precarious existence in the sunlight.

In the shadows the ‘cattle’ increased and Attu forgot about Tonkin, but he did not forget about the people who had got away.

He organised hunting parties and men and women would go across the shadow wall looking for the ‘freeborn’ and capture them…

And then, one time, centuries later, when Tonkin was long in the ground, there was another flash in the sky…