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The Goddess Within, by Mudak

This story had numerous points of inspiration, and it would be quite difficult for me to list them all. Suffice it to say that this story owes its origins to Michelle’s contest from April, 2008 and TS Eliot’s The Wasteland, although I doubt Eliot ever imagined his poem giving birth to adult literature. But it is adult literature, so you might want to seek out some other wasteland if adult-oriented works are not your proverbial cup of tea. I welcome comments, criticism, and questions about my inspiration at

It was a dark and stormy night, as the five friends on spring break backpacking across northern England scurried to find cover from the rapidly intensifying downpour. Alyssa was the first to notice the silhouette of the large building, with a dimly flickering set of lights punctuating its shape.

“Hey guys, look!” She pointed at the building. Between the rain battering their heads and shoulders, and the mist that rose from the moors around them, no one was sure exactly how far away it was. But then again, no one cared either. Here was shelter. Sanctuary. A place to dry off and warm up. Hopefully, someone would take pity on five poor college students. Five college students who, Irene seemed overly fond of saying, could be sitting on a beach in Cancun at this very moment, sipping margaritas and wondering where the MTV cameras were.

They arrived at the building fairly quickly. Faster than they thought they would, considering how far away the building appeared when they first saw it. The path up to the building led through a garden. It was too dark out to see what was in the garden. Lynda paused for a moment, trying to get a feel for what was in the gardens. “I think I smell lilacs,” she mused. She’d loved working with flowers since she was a little girl; that’s probably why, she would tell friends and acquaintances, she chose to major in botany.

Her friends had already reached the door into the building and she hastened to join them. The five friends stood in the doorway. Pete asked, “What kind of place is this?”

“A church of some sort, I think,” Ron answered. He let out a deep sigh and continued, “I guess we should knock, huh?” He felt along the door and found a heavy iron knocker. He lifted it away from the door; as it struck against the metal plate upon which it normally rested, the door opened slightly with a creak that echoed throughout the cavernous halls inside.

The five students shuffled into the building. The large stone walls were lined with thick, heavy candles that, at first glance, resembled torches. The candles sent shadows jumping across the granite floor. The building definitely had the feel of an old church, however there were no icons or religious statues. In fact, with the exception of the candles themselves, there was nothing adorning any of the walls. As the gang of five surveyed the building, they couldn’t help but notice the large wooden pew-like benches facing what clearly looked like a low-key altar.

The air inside the church was heavy, yet dry. Irene removed her backpack and coat, remarking, “It feels good in here, but I’m chilly.” The other four nodded agreement and followed suit. Irene casually walked to a series of candles, attempting to dry her clothes with the flames. As she rubbed her hands above one candle, she smiled. “This isn’t fast, but, man it feels good.” Alyssa took her place a few yards away from Irene and started doing the same.

One by one, all five students found a candle and attempted to dry themselves. Ron and Lynda found that they were more comfortable after removing their respective shirts. When Lynda noticed Pete staring at her rain-soaked bra clinging tightly to her skin, she chided him, “This isn’t a wet T-shirt contest, honey.”

Pete quickly looked away. For a long while no one spoke. Most were too thankful or too busy trying to dry off to think about actually communicating with one another. The rain battering the walls outside and the occasional distant crack of thunder was the extent of any real sound.

When Ron figured he was about as dry as he was going to get, he sat down on the floor and stared at the light flickering everywhere around him. He closed his eyes and a slight smile appeared on his face. He spread his arms in what he considered a silent homage to the atmosphere of this place. The sound of the rain, the feeling of the air, the mystery of this whole place.

Alyssa noticed him and asked, “What are you thinking?”

He opened his eyes and answered, his voice echoed across the church, betraying a sense of revitalization that his companions hadn’t yet experienced. “Do you know the song, ‘Chimes of Freedom,’ by Bob Dylan?”

Pete answered sarcastically, “I try not to think of anything by Bob Dylan.”

Ron scoffed. “It’s just that, well, I can’t help but think that we just walked into that song.”

Alyssa always marveled at Ron’s ability to relate everything he did to a song, poem, or book. She always chalked that up to what made him become an English major. “How does it go, Ron?”

“The first lines of the song go something like this:

‘Far between sundown’s finish and midnight’s broken toll
We ducked inside a doorway as thunder went crashing
As majestic bells of bolts struck shadows in the sound
Seeming to be the chimes of freedom flashing.’

I’ve always loved that song. He goes on to sing about how the chimes of freedom touched everyone who sought shelter from the storm which then reached out to the people he admired and loathed, extending, in one way or another, to everyone in the world. There’s a certain unity to it.”

Lynda cleared her throat. “Wouldn’t it be easier just to begin the song by saying, “It was a dark and stormy night?”

Ron laughed. “Um. No. It’s not—”

“But that’s what he said, isn’t it? Between sundown’s finish and midnight’s broken toll is night. Thunder went crashing, so it was stormy. It was a dark and stormy night.”

Letting out a deep sigh, Ron demurred. “Saying ‘it was a dark and stormy night’ is just too cliche. This way has a lot more poetry and symbolism.”

Pete defended his friend. “I’ll tell you what I’m thinking of. What’s that line by C.S. Lewis? April is the cruelest month, or something like that?”

“T.S. Eliot,” Ron corrected him.

“Sorry. Either way, here we are five friends taking spring break amid less than ideal conditions, it’s raining profusely outside, and didn’t you say you smelled lilacs outside, Lynda? There’s something in that quote about lilacs, too, isn’t there?”

Lynda nodded her head yes.

Ron smiled. “I guess you really did learn something in Lit 101 two years ago, didn’t you?”

“I guess so.”

“Well, you’ve got a good point. I thought of that quote, too. Eliot wasn’t the only one who waxed poetic about April’s cruelty. Chaucer did it in the Canterbury Tales. That’s part of why I thought of ‘Chimes of Freedom.’ That song, believe it or not, is a modern Canterbury Tales.”

Irene stood up. “When we get back home, you can play it for us.” There was an impatience in her voice, “Right now, I’d just like to see if this place has a bathroom and maybe change into some dry—dryer, I should say—clothes.”

Alyssa stood up. “I’m with you. Besides, I’m not sure we should be going anywhere in here alone.”

Lynda joined Alyssa and Irene. “Why not all three of us go? That way, the guys can change here.”

Neither Irene or Alyssa objected to Lynda’s suggestion. Ron started to rummage in his backpack. As the three women started to walk away, Ron stopped Irene and handed her a flashlight. “You might need this.”

“Thanks.”

Pete called out, “When you find the bathroom, could you let me know where it is?”

The three women strode semi-confidently across the sanctuary and towards what appeared to be a door near the other end of the church, the pounding rain accentuating each stride. Once he was certain the women wouldn’t hear, Pete looked over at Ron. “Why do you keep trying to impress Irene, dude? She doesn’t have the patience for all of this artsy-fartsy shit. Besides, can’t you tell how much Alyssa wants you?”

“Yeah, I know. But you know how it is. I can’t have Irene, which is why I want her. I can have Alyssa, which is why I don’t.” Ron rummaged around in his backpack and found a clean shirt and a pair of jeans. Why he’d decided to wear shorts that morning, he couldn’t remember, but it was a bad idea while he was outside. Inside, that gave him more room in his bag to put on something a bit heavier, so it wasn’t the worst decision he’d ever made. “How long do you think it’ll be before the storm lets up?”

“Hard to tell, but I think we should plan on sleeping here tonight.”

“Assuming no one tries to kick us out.”

“Assuming no one tries to kick us out. Right. Do you think there’s anyone else in here besides us five?”

“Well, someone lit these candles. Whether they’re still here right now, I can’t say.”

“So, what do you think this place is? Something about this place feels ... I don’t know. Off?”

“I get that same feeling, Pete. I’m not sure what this building’s used for now, but it definitely once was a church. I don’t think they have services or rituals in here any more, though.”

“Yeah. I’d think there’d be a cross, or a picture of Jesus, or something if it was still being used as a church. What do you think it’s used for now?”

“Overall, I’ve got no clue, but for tonight anyway, I’m hoping it can be used as a haven for five wet and weary travelers. Here’s hoping the owner or owners of this place don’t mind us being here.”

As if on cue, a loud clap of thunder struck the ground somewhere on the grounds outside the building, lighting up the sky through the small windows in the top of the walls. Irene, startled by the unexpected loud noise, jumped. The three women were standing in a hallway, lit with candles similar to the ones they had seen in the main sanctuary. Midway down the hallway was a large wooden door. For the time being, this was their goal.

When they reached the door, the three women couldn’t help but notice the ornate markings on the door itself. There was text across the top, written in a language and alphabet none of them recognized. Two images were engraved below the text. On the left side of the door was the silhouette of what clearly appeared to be a woman. It was hard to tell based upon its appearance whether she was standing or lying down, but her legs were slightly askance and her hands stretched above her head. On the right side of the door was a man’s silhouette; the man’s figure, slightly larger than the woman’s, was in by and large the same position. Both images were remarkably well-defined, especially for an engraving into a wooden door.

Alyssa’s eyes darted back and forth between the two pictures chiseled into the door. “Do you think they’re naked?”

Irene didn’t want to dignify that question with a response. Lynda responded to Alyssa’s question with a grunt reaching forward and casually turning the doorknob.

The door creaked open to reveal what looked like an ancient sitting room. There were chairs placed around the room a few feet from each of the walls, with a large table standing in the middle. In the center of the table was a bowl, empty save for a small pool of water. The light from the candles in this room danced across the surface of the water.

“We might as well get changed here,” Irene finally spoke, as she started to search through her bag for clean underwear.

Alyssa placed her bag on one of the chairs and did the same. Lynda walked closer to the table and put her bag down on the table. She started to open her bag but stopped before she would have the opportunity to find something. Taking a deep breath, she spoke to her friends, “Do you smell something?”

“Like what?” Irene countered.

“Oh, I don’t know. Something in here smells sweet and relaxing. It smells like ... lilacs. You know, what I smelled outside. Are you saying you don’t smell it?”

Irene sighed, “Nope.” Alyssa simply shrugged her shoulders.

Lynda inhaled deeply. When she opened her eyes, she casually removed her blouse and skirt and folded them neatly on top of the table. Once she had stripped down to her underwear, she felt the need to know more about this smell. “If someone’s growing flowers down here, I’d like to know how they’re doing it. This place isn’t exactly conducive to an indoor garden. Do you mind if I go check?” Neither Alyssa nor Irene looked Lynda closely enough in her eyes to notice that her gaze seemed distant, unfeeling.

Irene started to say that she didn’t think this was a good idea, but Lynda said, “I’ll catch up with you back with the boys,” before any objections could actually be raised. Lynda turned on her heels and slowly walked out of the room.

Irene and Alyssa stood there in disbelief. They looked alternately at each other, and towards the door through which Lynda had just left, confused as to what just happened. Irene hastened to change her clothes and said, “Let’s go after her.”

Alyssa nodded and quickly changed into a sweatshirt and sweatpants, shoving her other clothes into her backpack. Both girls left the room and looked around. Alyssa asked, “Which way do you think she went?”

“She said she smelled lilacs. Do you smell anything?”

“No. She wouldn’t be imagining it, would she?”

“Probably not. But she works with this kind of stuff, so maybe she’s just more attuned to it.”

Alyssa pointed to her right. “We came from that way. I doubt she would have gone that way. What do you think?”

Irene scratched her chin, scowled and indicated the hallway to the left. “You’re probably right. Let’s go this way.” With each stride, both women felt colder and colder, as though the gusts of wind through which they had trudged to reach this place, were actually blowing within these cavernous walls, too. The only saving grace was that it wasn’t actually raining inside the building.

Alyssa rounded a corner and saw that the corridor stretched further than she could see. The torch-like candles still lit the way, but did little to help warm them up. Irene stayed close behind Alyssa, arms crossed and trying desperately not to let her teeth chatter too loudly.

“Ya know, Ally, I d-d-don’t th-th-th-think Lynd-da c-ca-came th-this w-w-w-w-way. It’s too c-c-c-cold and sh-she’s barely wearing anyth-th-thing.”

“I th-think you’re right. Let’s head b-b-back. M-maybe she’s already c-caught back up with Ron and P-p-p-p-pete. If not, we’ll get the guys to help us f-f-f-f-find her.”

Irene and Alyssa quickly turned around and headed back to the sanctuary where their friends were waiting. The rain outside gave little sign of easing up.

Lynda reached the end of the corridor and entered a small foyer. She had sensed some of the coldness her friends had felt, but it didn’t affect her. The lure of the flowers was simply too strong. Once she reached her destination she saw a large circle of flowers growing out of a small mound of dirt in the center of the floor. She knelt down and deeply inhaled the sweet aroma.

She grabbed a handful of the dirt in the ground and examined it closely, sifting some through her fingers. With each handful of dirt that she grabbed and slowly released onto the floor below, she slipped deeper into a state of tranquility, remembering those happy times when she was a little girl, playing in the dirt and returning home, filthy, and loving every minute of it. To her, nothing else existed in the world, except this beautiful, aromatic place.

After a few moments of playing in the dirt, she sat back on her hands, staring at the dirt and the walls that surrounded her. She felt a slight vibration in the ground but remained motionless. Rising up out of the dirt, inside of the circle of flowers, came a tall, slender young woman. She had long brown hair that cascaded over her shoulders. She was dressed in a long, flowing red robe that swayed in the light breeze that swept through the hallway. This mysterious stranger smiled solemnly as she held out her hand.

At first, Lynda felt afraid, but the fear quickly dissolved to confusion, and, ultimately, to a sense of purpose. She reached out and took the hand of this girl who stood above her. As her hand gripped the outstretched hand offered to her, she felt a sense of warmth, of beauty, of light. She stood up and gazed into the face of this woman. The woman cracked a slight smile of welcome.

Lynda immediately knew who this woman was, and what this woman wanted, needed, and expected. She knelt down and bowed her head. “How may I serve you, my Goddess?”

The Goddess gestured to command her new servant to stand, which Lynda did wordlessly. Lynda stood upright, her hands hanging limply by her sides, as the Goddess quickly assessed the role Lynda would play in her quest. After a moment, the goddess snapped her fingers, and Lynda accepted her duty.

As Lynda removed her bra and panties, she intoned, “I shall be your voice, my Goddess. I shall enlighten the masses on your behalf.”

The Goddess lowered her left hand and held it a few inches away from the exposed skin beneath her servant’s legs. Lynda closed her eyes and let a low hum escape from her lips. The pleasure, the warmth, the beauty surrounded her and she was powerless to do anything but surrender to it. She opened her mouth and let out a gasp followed by a low, drawn-out squeal. If this was the reward for simply dedicating herself to her Goddess, imagine the rewards she would reap upon successfully demonstrating the power, the beauty, the truth of the lessons the Goddess wishes to teach us!

“It is time to begin the process of enlightenment, my Goddess. Do you wish to demonstrate your love now, or do I need to go before you?”

The Goddess placed her hands on her hips and stared at Lynda, who immediately knew the answer. Lynda calmly turned around and walked back towards the sanctuary where her friends were starting to grow concerned for her.

Ron and Pete had nearly reached the door in the sanctuary, through which the women had first left, when Lynda returned to the sanctuary. No one expected her to walk in the door, but even more unexpected was her complete lack of clothing. Although it wasn’t immediately noticeable, Lynda was also carrying the bowl of water from the room in the hallway.

Pete tried to divert his eyes. Lynda had already chastised him once for staring at her tonight, and he didn’t want to cause any further trouble.

Lynda walked past all four of her friends and stood near the altar at the front of the sanctuary. The Goddess had entrusted her with a mission, and it was soon time to carry it out. The only question was, who should make the next move.

In the ensuing silence, Lynda stood motionless as the four others cautiously approached her, occasionally glancing back and forth at each other, unsure of what to do next. Lynda finally spoke. “There is such beauty here.” There was something unnatural in her voice. Maybe it was the word choice. Maybe it was the tone. No one knew for certain.

Alyssa stepped forward and placed her hands defiantly on her hips. “What’re you talking about, Lynda? Where did you go? We were worried about you? Why’re you naked? Aren’t you cold?” A flash of lightning momentarily distracted her.

“The Goddess protects us all,” was Lynda’s cryptic response. Seeing the confusion on Alyssa’s face, Lynda continued, “Unleash your inner goddess and you shall understand.”

“My inner .... goddess?”

“All females should embrace their inner goddess. All males should revere the goddesses.”

With a mixture of confusion and fear, Alyssa stepped back, glancing back and forth between Lynda and her other friends.

Ron started to laugh, causing Pete and Irene to glare at him. Feeling his friends’ reproachful glances, he hurriedly explained himself. “Sorry. I’m not really trying to offend anyone, it’s just that, you know, I’m supposed to revere this goddess? Alyssa, Irene, do you know your inner goddess?”

Neither Irene nor Alyssa spoke. Alyssa wanted to say that she didn’t, but there was something about this whole situation that made her feel safer just by keeping quiet.

Ron stepped closer to Alyssa, facing Lynda. “I think Alyssa here doesn’t know how to embrace her goddess. Maybe you could show her, and then I’ll see whether her goddess deserves my reverence.”

A look of panic spread across Alyssa’s face as Lynda responded. “Fair enough. All goddesses deserve reverence, but you shall soon learn this fact for yourself.”

A loud crack of thunder from outside filled the air and the candles flickered madly. Alyssa turned to run, but lost her footing and fell to the ground. Lynda casually approached her, setting the bowl of water on the floor next to where Alyssa lay, and helped her to her feet. Seeing the look on her face, Lynda knew she must speak. Her voice was calm, metered, soothing. “Do not be afraid. Your inner goddess will be your guide, and she will not lead you astray.”

Lynda knelt down and covered both of her hands in the water from the bowl. She raised her left hand and placed it on top of Alyssa’s head, much like the way a faith healer would attempt to channel mystical powers to cure the lame. Alyssa opened her mouth to express her shock and discomfort at this, but no sounds came out. Instead, her eyes simply focussed on the pressure from and the moisture of Lynda’s hand, such that she didn’t notice Lynda’s right hand reaching forward between her legs.

Even through her clothes, Alyssa felt a jolt of energy in her nether regions. Her inner goddess had been awakened, and needed to be embraced. Lynda was right: there was nothing to fear. The men shall bow before her inner goddess. She knew and understood her mission, and, using both hands, moved Lynda’s hand away from between her legs.

She then calmly, casually, removed all of her clothes and turned to face Ron. Here was a man who had said he only wanted to be friends with her, in spite of her clear and stated interest. She smiled as she recognized that he was staring at her body. “Do you like what you see?”

Ron’s breaths began to quicken. He wanted to say something, but could not muster the energy to do anything other than stare at her body. He had never recognized the beauty that was her form.

Alyssa heard Lynda’s voice behind her. “He likes your form. Show him your goddess.”

Alyssa stepped closer to Ron and put her hands on his shoulders. She pushed with a slight amount of force and in the blink of an eye, Ron stood on his knees in front of her. Running her fingers through his hair, he inhaled deeply and she thrust his face directly into her warm and eager slit.

Ron opened his mouth and began to nibble and lick all around Alyssa’s sex. He felt a haze overtake his thoughts; he remembered the first time he had ever seen a naked woman and how much he felt in awe of her body, thankful that someone would be kind enough to share her body with him. Back then, there was a cautious enthusiasm to his movements. Tonight, he felt he was reliving the enthusiasm, leaving the caution in the recesses of memory.

Alyssa tipped her head back and closed her eyes. Lynda noticed the wide grin and spoke, “That’s it. Give in to your goddess. Males exist for our pleasure, no more, no less.”

A powerful and drawn out rumble of thunder overhead shook the walls. At exactly the same moment, Alyssa let out a low moan as Ron, in his act of worship, brought her to orgasm.

Alyssa’s knees grew weak as she fell backwards into Lynda’s arms. Lynda casually lowered her to the floor and put her hand on Ron’s shoulder. “That’s enough, supplicant.”

Ron placed his hands on his knees as he remained in a kneeling position before Alyssa’s quivering body, his eyes vacant, almost unseeing.

When Ron first fell under the spells Lynda had cast, Irene started to back away. Pete, on the other hand, found himself strangely drawn into the sight of his friend going down on Alyssa. After all, Ron had already said he wanted Irene and not Alyssa.

Lynda knelt beside Alyssa and addressed her directly. “Tell me about this male. Did he satisfy your inner goddess?”

“Yesssss.”

“Shall I search his mind for his desires?”

“Yes.”

“If it can be satisfied, shall I allow his desires to become reality?”

“He has earned it, yes.”

“Very well.” Lynda casually strode over to Ron’s motionless body. “Tell me, male. Whom do you desire?”

Ron’s mouth barely moved as he spoke the name, “Irene.”

“Did you say, ‘Irene’?”

“Yessss.”

Irene, who was thinking that she would be better off in the driving rain than inside this church, had nearly reached the front door when she heard this. She turned around and screamed. “What did you just say?”

Lynda called back to Irene. “I think you heard him. It’s his desire to awaken your inner goddess. And awaken her he shall.”

“Not if I can help it!” Irene rushed for the door and tried to turn the knob to what she perceived as the relative safety of the storm outside.

Lynda’s laughter echoed off of the high walls. “The door won’t open. I won’t let it. All you need to know is that you have nothing to fear, Irene. This male, here, shall relieve you of your fears.”

Lynda snapped her fingers and Ron stood up. He simultaneously peeled off his clothes and strode casually towards Irene. Irene started to panic and started tugging on the doorknob, turning it, and banging on the door itself. She screamed for help, hoping someone close by could hear her pleas. The rain pounded harder against the walls, making her screams feel all the more futile.

Soon, Ron—if he even knew who he was anymore—was standing directly behind her, waiting for a sign he would be permitted to move forward. Irene sensed that he was near, and collapsed, crying in a borderline hysteria. “This isn’t happening! This can’t be happening! I’m not here! I’m in my happy place. I’m in Cancun, where I first suggested going on spring break. I’m anywhere but here.”

Ron paused. Lynda quickly took her place a few feet behind him. As he turned to face her, Lynda nodded her head.

Ron knelt down and took Irene’s chin in his hand, lifting her head to face him. With his free hand, he wiped away her tears. She let out a final sniffle as she gazed into his eyes. He didn’t speak. Lynda stepped forward and advised Irene, “He wants to revere you. Search yourself. Let go of your fear, of your pain. Embrace your pleasure. Embrace your inner goddess.”

Irene lifted her hands and placed them on Ron’s shoulders. Lynda snapped her fingers. Ron placed one hand under Irene’s legs, and the other behind her back. He inhaled deeply and lifted Irene off the floor. Lynda returned to the altar. Ron turned and followed Lynda, carrying Irene back with him.

As the three students returned to the altar, Ron set Irene down next to Alyssa. He rolled Irene’s sweatpants down to her ankles and leaned forward. Irene wanted to stop him, but by now, she had no further strength to fight. She squinted her eyes, bit her lip, and hoped it would be over soon, bracing for a violation of her body that she neither wanted, nor welcomed.

The violation never came. Instead, she felt a few drops of water, followed by gentle hands and a mouth and tongue that seemed to know every pleasure point below her waist. He nibbled gently on her exposed flesh, causing her head to jerk forward with a gasp, her eyes wide and wild. She sensed her goddess moving to the forefront in her body and her mind. Suddenly, the fear and insecurity she felt not ten minutes ago, had long since dissolved amidst the pleasure. This male, then, was nothing more than a vessel, a servant, a conduit for her pleasure.

Breathing heavily, she let go of all inhibition, vocalizing her passion without any real words. She reached the pinnacle of pleasure and, short of breath, moaned, “My goddess........” before she fell asleep next to Alyssa.

Lynda smiled. “Very good. Males, I need both of you to take a seat in the front row, in anticipation of our leader’s arrival.” Ron quickly followed this command. Pete, who had not been able to move throughout this entire incident, shook his head in uncertainty. It was as though he had been awakened from a deep sleep, and he didn’t quite understand where he was or why his friends were in the positions they were.

Lynda, seeing this, approached him and scowled. “Are you prepared to meet our leader, our Goddess?”

After a moment, Pete glanced down at Lynda’s feet and slowly traced his eyes back up to the top of her head, appreciating and admiring every curve along the way. “I am prepared.”

“Very well. Please disrobe and remove the remaining clothes of this female. Once finished, take your seat, and I shall summon our leader.”

Without hesitating, Pete did as commanded.

Lynda turned around and faced the back of the sanctuary. She raised her hands above her head and called out, “We are ready for you, my Goddess!”

At this moment, the ground started to rumble and the Goddess, still clad in her long flowing red robe, rose from the floor and stood, facing Lynda.

The Goddess did not speak, but rather walked calmly over to the two women who slept on the floor by the altar. She knelt down next to the two women, placing one hand on the shoulders of each. Suddenly, both awoke. Seeing who was standing over them, both let out a gasp. They sat up on their knees. Simultaneously, both women spoke in a monotone. “We are your humble servants.”

The Goddess snapped her fingers, and both women stretched their arms out above their heads, and bowed, palms down, to the floor. Their physical position closely resembled praying in the Muslim tradition.

The Goddess pointed at Ron and Pete and raised her hand, indicating that both men should stand up. The men knew that they only had but one goal. They calmly moved behind the two women, kneeling behind them both. With a clap of the Goddess’s hands, both men thrust forward and penetrated into the engorged and moistened folds of skin.

Alyssa and Irene knew not to move but they were incapable of suppressing the feelings of intense pleasure that coursed through their bodies. The Goddess who rose above them inhaled deeply to share in the pleasure that filled the room.

Ron and Pete kept thrusting rhythmically. Alyssa and Irene found that their breaths were matching the men’s movements in exact synchronicity. The Goddess held her hands straight out by her sides, appearing as a giant cross. The sensual energy coming from her four servants on the floor drew into her hands. With a circular motion of her arms, her gown fell to the floor to reveal a perfectly toned, hairless body.

The Goddess lifted her hands above her head, such that her position resembled the engraving of the female figure on the door that Irene, Alyssa, and Lynda had found. As her faithful servants moaned louder and louder, she started to levitate off of the ground, her body feeding off of the lust, energy, and power coming from before her.

Lynda gazed longingly up into the eyes of her Goddess. Transfixed upon the female form that floated before her, she allowed her hands to roam between her own legs. Without saying a word, she thanked her goddess for allowing her a small taste of the passion that was slowly filling the room.

The candles lining the walls of the sanctuary brightened, as if controlled by the Goddess herself. Even the shadows that danced across the walls and floors seemed to move with the same rhythm as the orgy that was being held in praise of the Goddess.

Lynda let out a low moan, both as an expression of her own pleasure, and of the pleasure of the otherwise silent goddess.

Irene quickly followed suit. Alyssa’s higher-pitched squeals melded seamlessly into the sounds echoing throughout the chamber as all three of the human females allowed themselves to give in to the passion and the beauty of their Goddess and all she represented.

Irene, Alyssa, and Lynda fed off of one another in both their rapidly increasing pleasure, and their increasingly vocal yet unintelligible expressions of their pleasure. The Goddess inhaled deeply and channelled the pleasure of all three of these servants into her own body, absorbing their reverence into her skin, her mind, her body, and her heart. For these newly converted worshippers, she had given them true pleasure and a sense of purpose. For herself, she basked in the power these humans would only stoke. The more people who would revere her, the more power she would attain.

The five college students who sought refuge in the church basked in the growing pleasure that was bestowed upon them by their newfound Goddess. The pleasure coursed throughout their bodies and warmed them, filled them with an energy they neither knew nor cared to understand any more than they could feel. They just knew that this was where they needed to be, and it was their Goddess who had taken them there. The Goddess smiled and consumed their energy, returning exactly what they needed.

Unable to restrain themselves any longer, Ron, Pete, Alyssa, and Irene all let out a giant shriek of pleasure, which was followed immediately by a and then loud clap of thunder. All four collapsed from the pleasure, the intensity, and the knowledge that they had, at last, found their purpose.

Once Lynda’s breathing returned to normal, she walked around her friends, looking down on their spent bodies. She gazed longingly back at the Goddess. “They are fine choices, my Goddess. The males shall be tasked to bringing new converts inside these walls. The females shall be priestesses here within these chambers. In due time, when the females’ inner goddesses become strong enough, we may even allow them to start their own church, but at least for now, they know only to serve you.”

The goddess ran her hands through Lynda’s hair. Lynda continued. “And I, my Goddess, shall be your voice for all eternity. It will be my pleasure and my honor.”

The Goddess disappeared from the sanctuary. Lynda glanced down at her four friends and mused. “They may sleep here tonight. In the morning, they shall understand their destiny. I shall tend to the lilacs for the evening.” Lynda walked through the door behind the altar.

The sun shone through the small windows in the sanctuary. Alyssa was the first one awakened by the sound of the singing birds. She stretched, scratched her eyes and took stock of her position. She glanced around and saw Irene, Pete and Ron, still fast asleep. The males must not be permitted to sleep any longer, she thought, and started to shake them. In an instant, Ron and Pete awoke. Each kissed one of her bare feet. On cue, they both started repeating the phrase, “We must gain new converts.”

Hearing the sounds of her servants uttering their duties, Irene awoke as well. Seeing Irene awake, Ron and Pete kissed her feet as well.

Irene and Alyssa stood up and walked around the altar. “We must prepare for our new guests,” Irene coyly remarked.

“Yes, we must,” Alyssa agreed.

Irene faced Ron and Pete, still kneeling at the foot of the altar. “You must dress and bring the converts to us.”

Ron and Pete understood. They put on their clothes and walked slowly towards the entrance into the church. Ron opened the door and an almost blinding ray of sunlight penetrated into the chambers. It was springtime, and, for the five vacationing students, the renewals had only just begun.