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Hole Lot of Revenge

Synopsis: Erin has been beaten and abused… will she give her soul to seek revenge?

All characters in this story are eighteen years of age or older.

Erin O’Reilly was sore. She’d been beaten and abused by her husband Mark, She said to herself “Thank God we didn’t have kids.” It was of little comfort that only she had suffered.

The 33 year old had been picked up from General where her wounds had been treated and she was transported to Zohar House, a shelter for women in her position—vulnerable.

“Welcome to Zohar” Director Lilith said as her helpers Pauline Anstruther and Adela Hunt helped walk Erin into the building.

“Easy” Lilith smiled “No rush.”

“Thank you” Erin blubbered.

“No….” Lilith smiled warmly “That is what we are here for…”

Adela looked to Lilith.

“To my office” Lilith said.

“Right… come this way” Adela said and guided Erin down the hall.

Lilith closed the front door. It was heavy, secured. Safe.

Erin felt a level of comfort hearing the heavy door close tight.

She was surprised that Lilith was now at her office door holding it. She’d looked back down the corridor and couldn’t understand how the director had go passed her without her noticing.

“Come, please” Lilith smiled.

Erin was ushered in and seated on a nice comfortable chair in front of a large old-fashioned desk.

There was a small painting on the wall of a topless woman, all tastefully done in the Romantic style.

Lilith noticed Erin noticing it as she passed around to her side of the desk.

“Oh, that’s Sappho” Lilith smiled as she too paused for a second to admire the woman in the painting.

“Who?”

“Um… an Ancient Greek poetess” Lilith said “One day you might be interested in her works…” she smiled and sat down.

“Um….” Erin gasped “How long can I…?”

“Oh, don’t worry about anything,,,,” Lilith smiled “We aren’t going to kick you out”.

Lilith and Erin spoke for a while and then Lilith rose up from her desk, moved around and sat on the edge, on Erin’s side.

Erin felt a little uncomfortable about the woman being so close.

Lilith opened her legs a little.

“So, yes there’s nothing to worry about here” Lilith gave her an assuring shoulder rub “This place is quite secure.”

“That’s…. that’s good… to….” Erin began when she felt her eyes grow a little out of focus.

“Is anything the matter?” Lilith smiled.

“That smell… um… what is it?”

“That… perfume?”

“Yes… it’s… really nice”

Lilith opened her legs a little more.

“Breathe it in” she cooed “And… relax….”

“Um… I…it’s really nice… but… I feel…” and suddenly Erin giggled. “Oh, my”

“Breathe it in deep” Lilith cooed.

“I feel… like….I’m a little drunk” Erin gasped and she giggled again inconsolably.

“You need to relax” Lilith said as she bent down and took the hem of Erin’s T-shirt. “Just relax” she said as she drew it up over Erin’s head. Erin raised her arms compliantly to let it happen.

“So soft” Lilith said and Erin looked down to see Lilith’s hand under her bra.

“No… what?” she gasped.

Lilith drew her hand in between her legs and wet her fingers and she pushed these into Erin’s mouth. Erin tasted something she’d never tasted before and she gasped. “Drink” Lilith said as she drew Erin forward.

“No… this… this ins’t….”

She found her head going under Lilith’s dress

She tasted something there… and she began to lap….

Erin woke up in bed with a hang-over.

“What the fuck?” she gasped and she sat up before she realised she was naked. She pulled the sheet up over her breasts.

“Good morning” came the voice of a woman in another bed in the room.

“Where am I?” Erin gasped.

“The Banksia Room” the woman said, who sat up, leaning across and offering her hand “I’m Toni” she said.

“Um… I’m….”

“Erin… yes, we met.”

“We did?”

“Yes… when you came in last night… you weren’t feeling that well…”

“I… I don’t remember….”

“Well you’re here now….”

“In the what was it?”

“The Banksia”

“The what?”

“All these rooms are named after plants….” Toni said “Across the hall is the Oak Room…”

“Really?”

“Yeah”

“So…” she gasped looking around.

“No worries… your stuff’s all here….” Toni said and she got out of bed.

Erin blushed. Toni wore no panties, and she was clean-shaven. Nothing was left to the imagination.

She went over to a wardrobe and opened it….

“See…,” she smiled

Erin could see all her stuff was there.

Toni was quite beautiful, and she had large breasts poking out against her T-shirt.

Then the door opened and in walked an Asian lady came in.

“Hi” she said. The lady carried a towel loosely in front of her.

She got into the same bed Toni had been in, only she discarded her towel not he floor.

“May!” Toni gasped “You are such a pig…”

May, naked slid under the covers.

“Hi” May said.

“Um… hi….”

“This is Erin…” Toni said.

“Oh, yeah?” May said and she sat up letting the sheet fall. She had prominent press too. Firm.

Toni turned and got into bed and kissed May on the lips.

It was clear to Erin that they were more than just friends.

“Um… sorry to bother you” Erin said…

“No bother…” Toni said and she broke from giving May kisses “What is it?”

“Um… could you pass me some clothes…”

“We’re all sisters here…” May said.

“Hush, now” Toni gently scolded her “She’s new here… she may just be shy…”

Toni slid back out of bed and as she did spreading her legs Erin again got to see everything.

“Will these do?” Toni said as she rummaged through the wardrobe.

“Um… yes… fine…” Erin said.

“Do you want to use the amenities?” Toni said.

“Yes… I think so… if I could just freshen up.”

“Come…” Toni said offering her hand “I’ll take you…”

“Um… could you ah… let me get dressed first….?”

“Sure” Toni said and she went back and sat on the bed, watching.

Erin was going to say something but instead pulled the sheet up over her and did her best to get dressed under it.

When she emerged she found Toni and May kissing again.

Erin coughed politely.

“Oh, ready?” Toni asked and again she got out of bed showing everything… this time she got out backwards on her hands and knees.

“Don’t be long” May said. Toni bent back over and kissed May again.

Erin looked away…

“Come on” Toni smiled, taking her hand.

Erin was about to ask if she was going to put something on too, but Toni just lead her out into the hall.

And Erin noticed a small sign on the door opposite “Oak Room”. She then saw “Banksia Room” on her own door.

Toni took her hand and Erin let herself be lead down the hall. “Elm Room. Wattle Room…” other doors were indeed named after trees.

They came to an open room where there was some noise. The room was tiled and looked a lot like her old high school change room.

Two women were sitting on a bench kissing each other.

“Don’t mind them” Toni said.

Erin wondered why Toni would say that, given she and May kissed.

“They don’t talk that much” Toni said.

And then it clicked in Erin’s mind. It wasn’t that they were kissing, it was that they were ignoring everyone else.

Erin’s heart sank when she saw the showers. They were one open wall. No partitions.

“No one else about” Toni said “You’ve missed the morning rush… unfortunately….”

‘No… fortunately’ Erin thought.

“I’ll leave you to it… if you know the way back…”

“I think I’ll manage” Erin smiled… it was only just up the hallway….

Erin went to the far end, so she had at least a corner. She turned and saw Toni still there, watching.

Erin paused.

“Sorry,” Toni said and left.

Erin carefully undressed and she paused. She heard nothing so she turned on the shower. Even then she didn’t get her head under the water until she felt she was alone.

She plunged her head under the warm water. She washed herself and as she massaged her breasts she stopped to look. They seemed bigger… She’d gone from 32A to 34C.

A part of her said that this was normal and so she continued to wash and then when she was done she quickly grabbed her towel lest someone else come in and see her naked.

She dried and as she got down between her legs she had to stop, bend over a little… she had less hair then before…. How odd…?

She dressed as she heard a voice.

She paused and watched as in strode the director herself, Lilith, in a towel.

Pausing to view her now Erin couldn’t help but marvel how beautiful she was. Tall, pale, perfect skin. Lilith stopped a few shower-heads away and drew off her towel.

She was totally naked, bare-skinned between her legs. She had a small bump there that Erin couldn’t help but notice. “Fuck” she thought to herself, “That’s her clit!!”

Lilith drew on the water, turned and looked at Erin. She said nothing but she smiled and, when she did Erin burst into a huge grin. She felt kind of stupid after she realised. She grinned like a giddy school-girl.

Erin continued to stand there gazing at the statuesque woman… a woman who should be the subject of art, and admiration.

Lilith massaged her 38DD breasts. She tilted her head back and let her thick straight dark hair wash under the shower.

Then without really washing she turned the water off and looked at Erin.

“Hand me that towel!” she said, not politely, but with a voice of authority.

“Yes, of course” Erin gasped as if she was stupid for not thinking of it herself.

Lilith wrapped it around her head. Erin found herself staring again.

She felt a warmth between her legs.

She realised she was staring and she went to go when Lilith stepped for from the shower, walked across and blocked her.

Lilith put her right leg up on a bench.

“Um… can I….?” Erin almost begged to get past.

Erin took in a deep heady breath

“That smell… um… what is it?”

“That… perfume?”

“Yes?” Erin said, and she had a sense of déjà vu,

“Breathe it in, my child” Lilith said.

“It’s… it’s really nice…” Erin gasped.

She took in deep breaths.

Lilith opened her legs a little more.

“Breathe it in” she cooed “And… relax….”

“I feel…” and suddenly Erin giggled. “Goodness!”

“Breathe it in deep” Lilith cooed again.

“I feel… like….I’m a little drunk” Erin gasped and she giggled again inconsolably.

“You need to relax” Lilith said as she bent down and pressing on Erin’s shoulders made her get down on her knees.

Erin felt massively uncomfortable, so close to Lilith’s sex.

Lilith drew her hand in between her legs and wet her fingers and she pushed these into Erin’s mouth. Erin tasted something she’d never tasted before and she gasped. “Drink” Lilith said as she drew Erin forward.

“No… this… this ins’t….”

And then Erin sucked the fingers.

Next thing she was guided between Lilith’s legs and she began to drink….

Lilith smiled as Erin’s tongue lapped at her cunt. Her small soft pink tongue ran up and down between Lilith’s labia before delving into her.

Erin woke. Again she was in bed, and again she was naked.

“What the fuck?” she gasped as she heard a moan.

She sat up, again the sheet fell from her but only this time she didn’t adjust it.

There opposite her Toni and May were licking each other out. They were almost wrapped in each other’s thighs.

At first Erin looked away. But then as their moaning grew she looked back. She watched and she soon realised she was touching herself. She stroked her clit as she watched the lesbians in ’69.

Toni stopped, turned to see Erin. Erin smiled. She continued to masturbate, feeling no shame. Toni smiled… her mouth covered in fluid… May’s cunt juices. Toni turned and resumed eating out her lover.

Erin sighed as she came…

Pauline Anstruther came to the door. “Erin” she said “Lilith would like to see you now…”

“Now?” Erin gasped.

Erin slid out of bed. She was naked. She felt a breeze and looked down momentarily to see she now was hairless between her legs.

Her breasts were now 38D, but she barely noticed.

Instead, naked, she followed Pauline Anstruther down the hall to the office.

“Ah, my darling” Lilith said getting up from behind her desk she went up to Erin and kissed her gently on the lips.

Erin blushed.

“That will be all” Lilith said to Pauline Anstruther.

“Yes, Mistress” Pauline Anstruther said.

Erin heard these words and in another day would have questioned ‘Mistress?” surely… no… but… Lilith… yes, it seemed appropriate.

“Please, sit” Lilith urged. Erin sat and Lilith went back around behind the desk.

She paused. Stopping at the crucifix on the wall… she adjusted it, turning it completely around the wrong way.

Erin now felt a little uncomfortable.

“So….” Lilith said “How are you settling in?”

“Fine, Mistress” Erin said.

Lilith grinned.

Erin wondered why she’d called… no… it…. it was right….

“Very good” Lilith said. “And… Mark?”

“Sorry, who?”

“Your husband?”

“What about him….?”

“He’s out of your thoughts now?”

“Um… yes… I hadn’t thought about him.”

“Good. Good” Lilith said.

“What have you heard?”

“Only he’s now hired a lawyer…”

“A lawyer?”

“Yes… he wants to sue you for property he says apparently you stole…”

“Stole?”

“Well… yes…. and… would you consider challenging him in court?”

“I… I can’t afford a lawyer….”

Lilith rose up and went around to the front of her desk and sat down “What if I told you there was another way?”

“Another way for what?”

“Of… how shall I put it…. dealing with Mark…”

“Dealing with…um… how…?”

“I could empower you…” Lilith said… “As I have Pauline Anstruther and Adela Hunt, and others like them…”

“Empower them?” Erin asked “How?” and then she smelled that wonderful odour again as Lilith sat back and opened her legs.

“I could give you power over men….” Lilith said “Sexual power…”

“I… I don’t understand…”

“Eat… and we’ll talk again” she said as she pulled up her dress.

“No… I….” Erin began but looking at that juicy slit… she actually drooled….

This was the most open she’d been about it and Erin was now facing the most perfect labia she’d ever seen. A clit probing out thick and hard. And those lips, wet.

Erin pressed her mouth against Lilith and her tongue slid out and into that warmth.

Erin lapped at Lilith.

“Good girl…” Lilith smiled as Erin fed.

“Mmm-mmm-mmm, so good,” Erin sighed.

“Drink it… and you’ll be one of us soon” Lilith purred

Erin found herself waking up in her bed again. She sniffed the air… something delicious.

She slid out of bed.

She noticed her breasts were larger now. 40DD sized. She was also completely hairless between her legs.

She was however driven by that… that wonderful smell.

She went over to the other bed where Toni lay asleep.

Erin pulled off Toni’s sheets. The smell grew more powerful. She opened Toni’s legs and gazed at that hairless slit.

She spread the legs wider and got onto the bed. Toni began to wake.

“What…?”

“”Shhhhh,” Erin said… “Be still….”

Toni relaxed.

Erin pressed her lips to Toni’s labia and drove her tongue into her.

“Oh, fuckkkkkkk,” Toni cried as Erin lapped at her.

Toni curled her hands, grabbing the bedsheet as her back arched up. “Oh, fuckkkkkkkk!” she cried again and came.

May came in at that moment, barely covering herself with her towel.

“What the fuck….?”

Erin looked up at her. Erin’s eyes seemed to glow.

“Get into bed!” she hissed.

“Yessssss” May gasped and she slid into bed next to her lover.

Erin moved between them, lapping at one, then the other. She drove each to several orgasms.

She felt herself relaxed and went back to bed and sat there as Toni and May turned to each other and began fingering each other.

Suddenly Erin felt a wave of disgust. What had she done?

She got up off the bed.

“Don’t leave” Toni begged.

“Join us” May cried.

Erin stormed down the hall to confront Lilith.

She found Lilith there… but to her surprise Lilith was riding a guy’s cock.

“Oh! Oh! Oh! Oh!” Lilith moaned.

Erin was captivated by it.

“Ah, my little succubus” Lilith grinned, “You’re hungry?”

“What… what’s going on?”

Lilith rose up off the guy. “Come, feed….” she said.

She held out her hand.

“What’s going on?” the guy also asked.

“Shhhh” Lilith snapped.

She offered her hand to Erin.

Erin stepped forward and was guided onto that handsome cock.

“Oooooooo,” she sighed as slit onto it.

She felt her clit already burning.

“Fuck him…,” Lilith urged… “Fuck and feed….”

Erin didn’t understand. She only knew how good it felt between her legs as her body embraced cock.

She rode up and down slowly at first and then she built up speed.

“Oh, yessss!” the guy moaned.

And then Erin felt the most amazing thing… the guy came in her… but it wasn’t the feel of his cock spraying her innards with his hot jizz… it was…

It was like electricity.

“Oh, God” she gasped “What’s happening….?”

“Feed” Lilith said.

Erin continued riding that cock and… she felt an energy swell up inside of her. She kept riding him and as she did she felt more and more energy.

She slowly eased her speed when she realised she could hear him wheezing.

She looked down and was shocked. This young handsome guy now looked aged. His faee sunken….

Erin leapt off of him in shock.

“What… what just happened?”

“You fed… “ Lilith laughed “On his life-force….”

Lilith now sat on his cock “Let me finish him off” she said as she began riding him.

“What do you mean….?”

“Let me do him first…” Lilith said.

She rode him hard, thrusting her pelvis forcefully down on his groin. He seemed to let out a giant gasp, and then he was limp.

“Oh, man,” Lilith gasped as she slowed. “That’s always such a buzz…”

“What…? I…?”

“I made you one like me” Lilith said as she got up off the corpse.

“What do you mean?”

“You’re a succubus now…” she said…

“A what?”

“A sex demon…,” Lilith smiled. “You can now feed of sexual energy….”

“I… don’t….?”

“I could have made you a minion like most of my other girls here… but… I saw your dark soul… and I knew you’d want this gift….”

“Gift?” she gasped “What gift?”

“You can now go back to Mark… and have your revenge….”

“Revenge?”

“Take his soul…” Lilith laughed… “Drain him…. like we did this man…”

“This man…?”

“He was a rapist…,” Lilith said. “He deserved to die…He raped Toni…”

“No.. he…?”

“Yes…” Lilith said. “Toni came to me and I have given her my protection. She serves me… and by default now she serves you too…”

“I… don’t…”

“You do” Lilith gasped “I know you… you were broken… but I have re-made you in my image…Now you never need be afraid of a man ever again…..”

A few days later Mark was surprised when Erin came back to him. She looked hot too… She seemed confident and sexy… and… her boobs…? They… they were amazing.

“I miss you so bad,” Erin said as she embraced him.

“I…?” he gasped.

“Let’s make love…,” she whispered.

“Now?”

“Yes….I want it so bad….”

He rubbed his eyes as he felt a little groggy.

“What’s that smell?” he asked as she spread her legs around him.

“Breathe in my perfume” she smiled.

“I…?”

He was rock hard…

She took his hand and lead him up to their bedroom… to feed.

He stumbled as they went up the stairs… He felt light-headed. The perfume from her cunt… he breathed it in deep.

She could sense his arousal. She had heightened senses… her whole being was designed to entice a man to fuck her.

She pushed him onto the bed.

“Hey!” he gasped… he was not used to a woman taking the lead.

Before he knew it she had pulled his pants off. His cock pressed hard against his undies.

She eased him out through the eye of them because she wanted to be on him so fast

And he saw as she lifted her skirt she wore no panties. Her cunt glistened.

He had no idea that the juice she was producing was driving him wild. He simply felt so horny, and then, she was on him, driving down onto him… and now it was too late.

She had him inside her and her cunt closed on his cock and she would never let him go.

Even if she had to she could tighten herself so much he’d be unable to pull out, and of course she could loop her arms and legs around him, binding herself to him… yes… it was too late now… she had him.

She humped him like she was riding a bucking bronco… hard, and fast.

He couldn’t believe his mousy wife was grinding so furiously against him.

“Fuck me!” she hissed…

He grabbed her breasts and a small part of him registered that these were way bigger than before…

She hit his hands away

“Hey!” he gasped when she squeezed on his cock with such deftness it was like a soft warm wet hand was jerking him.

“Shiiiitttttt,” he moaned… that felt amazing….

“Come in me!” she growled. “Come in me damn you!”

“Fuckkkkkkk” he moaned at that moment his cock erupted and her began feeding… draining him of his sexual energy.

“Oh, yesssss!” he cried as she rode him… and then he couldn’t focus… he panicked. “What’s happening?” he gasped…

She ground hard against him again and he gasped a second time at how good it felt.

He was barely aware he was being drained….

Even when his heart began to palpitate and his breathing grew erratic. Already his eyes were shut over, unable to work…

Yes… too late…

She rose off his body and watched as deprived of life energy it began to cave in on itself and crumble.

She felt his energy surging through her and she had never known such a high… doubly so in having exacted such a high toll against her tormentor.

Lilith was in the back of the limousine outside.

“Mistress!” Erin gasped. She hadn’t expected her lover would be there to collect her.

Lilith smiled and swivelled on her seat and planted a leg up on it, as she opened her legs she invited Erin’s mouth to her.

Erin almost drooled as she dived in and pressed her lips there….

She thought no more of her husband now as she delved into Lilith’s cunt.

Behind Erin the driver …May, closed the door before returning to the front of the car.

She looked in the rear-view mirror awaiting instructions.

“Drive on…” Lilith snapped.

The car pulled away.

Lilith gasped as she came, squirting into Erin’s willing mouth.

“My dear pet” she purred. She had done well in choosing Erin…

And they drove on….

The End