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The Payment

Synopsis: Vlad is the Lord of the Valley. He rules over the five villages. He expects submission, or they’ll be hell to pay

For Mihai and Elena it was their happiest day, the day they were married. Mihai was twenty, his bride a few years younger.

Elena was mid-height for an Eastern European of that era. She had bright brown eyes and auburn hair down to her lower back. She had two small but pronounced breasts. She was a virgin. She was the daughter of Alexandru Fierar (the Blacksmith).

Mihai was the son of Marian the primar—or mayor, of the valley’s north village. He was young, strong, and boastful. Prideful in fact. He had left the valley four years ago, despite the law forbidding it. And in his travels had visited Craiova, a near-by city. He had learned that people lived ‘free’. He had lived and worked, and enjoyed his life as he wished. A priest, Father Adrian had taught him of the science of the modern world… and the priest was surprised to learn that there were no churches in the valley. He took Mihai into the bosom of the church giving him a new perspective on life.

Mihai had returned a month earlier to this wedding day; determined to dispel the people’s fears, but he caught sight of Elena and was distracted by her beauty.

He had told his family of what life existed beyond the valley. But of that news he had not fulfilled his missionary goal.

The centre of town held a large square enclosure, sunken—a pit, really. It had a pillar in the centre. This was where the occasional miscreant was tied and whipped—with the townsfolk standing around the rim of the pit in order to bear witness to the town’s justice.

Near this pit a large assemblage of benches and tables had been placed—for the wedding feast.

Someone had even thought to decorate the pit’s pillory with flowers!

At his wedding day he had risen and discussed his adventure. The wedding party quietened. Talk like this was forbidden. His father urged him to hold his tongue… for the time being—he could see the reactions of the people.

“Why should we live in fear?” Mihai asked the crowd rhetorically. “The Count gives us what…? His ‘protection’?” He laughed. His mom Daniela, and sister Alina applauded. Michael the drunk also blurted out his approval.

The Count, Vlad—was supposed to be immortal. A vampire. Mihai said that it was a nonsense. An elaborate hoax to keep the people in their place.

Marian tried to calm his son’s mouth down. Marian remembered how when he was seven his mother Alina (the Elder) had been ‘taken into service’ by the Count.

Forty years later he had caught sight of his mom and she appeared as young as he remembered her. He may not have believed the Count was a vampire, but ‘something’ had—some power had—kept his mom in youth.

“Son… please” Marian called

“What?”

“Please, be silent”

“I will not, father” the prideful Mihai said “I will not be silenced”

“Please, ladies and gentlemen… friends…” Marian began to say as there was obvious uneasiness

Michael the woodsman rose and took his wife and sons away.

Apostol and his brother Carol rose and lead their families away

“No, stop….! Listen” Mihai called

The widow Ioana rose and urged her son and daughters up.

“Wait” Mihai said. He grabbed her by the arm.

Peter her son stepped up “Let my mother go!” he said

“But I have to tell you…” Mihai insisted.

Peter shoved him back and he, his sisters and his mother left

Mihai looked about, and aside from the drunkard, his own family and Elena’s there was no one else around

“You shouldn’t have said anything” Elean’s father finally said. Alexandru was a powerfully built man. But he had fear in his eyes.

* * *

Mihai and Elena retired to the loft of the mayor’s house. He carried his young bride over the threshold

Holding her he swung her around so her feet kicked the door closed.

They kissed and he set her down. She went over to the window and drew the curtains. She used a twig from the fire to light a candle.

She then used the candle to light two others

“Candles are expensive” she said as if to get his permission.

He nodded.

He went to her and she turned into him and they embraced

“I love you” she smiled

“I love you too” he said

“I want to be a good wife to you” she said

“You will”

“I will love you always”

“I will love you always” he smiled and kissed her forehead.

And as he stood there he reached behind her and undid the laces in her dress. The back of her dress peeled away as he did and she stepped out of it

She wore a long white cotton undergarment underneath

She trembled nervously as she knew he would want to see her.

There was a suddenly loud crash below

There was a cry… from Mihai’s father

Following this there were loud footsteps on the stairs

Mihai turned and held Elena behind him, shielding her from what was to come.

More shouting and then a scream

The door burst open

Vlad walked in and Mihai swung at him. Vlad caught the fist mid-flight and simply crushed it

He threw Mihai back towards the door.

Two women, pale as death, wearing what could have been white shrouds came in and grabbed him

“You would defy me?” Vlad snapped as he grabbed Elena and lead her by the head over to a small table

He flung her face against the table, breaking her nose. She cried out in pain, blood ran down her face

Mihai struggled but the two women held him fast

Vlad pushed Elena’s head flat against the table. He opened his mouth. Mihai couldn’t believe it as he saw Vlad’s upper canines extend into fangs

Vlad tore at Elena’s night-dress exposing her back. He then bit into the back of her neck

She trembled, and then to Mihai’s surprise he heard her let out a small moan.

“Noooooooooo!” Mihai cried in anguish

Vlad supped and Elena seemed to moan as if penetrated by a lover for the first time. She gasped and sighed and her whole body relaxed. She was not going to try and stop this

Next thing Vlad unbuttoned his trousers. And, he tore at Elena’s dress. She opened her legs, she was moist—as if ready for him… her body at least wanted him.

“Please…” she managed to beg, and she looked to her husband for help

Vlad pushed his long dog-like cock into her “Ow!” she cried as she was broken.

Her hymen tearing at the sudden influx of hard red cock.

“Noooo!” Mihai cried again “Stop it, please”

“Ow! Ow! Ow!” Elena cried in pain

But then her cries died down

Vlad turned to smile at him. His mouth red with Elena’s blood

“Elena?” Vlad grinned

“Yessssss” she sighed

“Do you want me to stop?”

“No.. Master” she hissed “Fuck me”

He grinned and thrust up into her harder

“Oh, yes” she cried

“Nooooooooo” Mihai wailed

“Oh, yessss” she gasped with each thrust

And then he pulled out of her, drew her face up and came into her open mouth. Her mouth clasped around his spurting cock and like a baby she fed on him.

“Please…..” Mihai cried “Elena, noooo”

“She seems to want it” Vlad smiled sardonically

He came so much that Elena started to gag. Instead of pulling out his simply pushed his cock deeper down her throat and suddenly she relaxed into it—her gag reflect suppressed as she simply became a come dump.

And then finally he pulled out of her. She gagged up now a little bit of sperm.

“So, you think you can defy me” Vlad said as he put his cock away. Behind him Elena lapped at the sperm on the table. “Mmmm-mmm-mmmm” she purred, she rubbed her face into it, she loved it.

“You’ll….” Mihai said before catching his breath

“Still defiant?” Vlad sneered

“Elena?” he said

“Yes, Master?” she gasped, going to him and kneeling before him

“Is there anything I can do for you, Master?” she whimpered.

“Please…” Mihai begged.

“Rise” he said

She got to her feet, but her head was bowed. He bit at his wrist, till blood flowed. He pushed it to her face “Drink” he said

She did

And as she did he bit into her neck again

“Mmm-mmmm-mmmm” she gurgled

He drained her, but filled her with his foulness

Then he flung her away

She fell to her knees. Then on her hands and knees she gasped.

She looked at Mihai and for a moment he saw remorse in her eyes as if she was aware of all the filthy things she had just done

Her breathing was erratic

“What have you done?” Mihai cried

“I…” she gasped as she realised something was happening to her—like she was going to be violently sick

She reached out to her husband and then fell to the ground dead.

“Nooooooo! Elenaaaaaaa” Mihai screamed “What have you done?”

Vlad stood over her. He kicked her with his foot and her lifeless body rolled onto its back.

“Elena” he said

Suddenly her eyes opened

She sat up and took in an enormous breath, with a face of utter shock.

And Mihai saw her eyes—no longer brown but pale blue—almost white—her pupils

“Elena” he called

She turned and looked at him and smiled and, as she did her upper canines extended into fangs

She rose up

“Stop” Vlad said

She halted

She had a hunger in her belly like she had never had before but she obeyed her Master.

Mihai’s mom was dragged in

“What… no…?” Mihai gasped

She was thrown in, landing on the floor in front of Elena

Elena bent down and helped her to her feet

“Elena” Daniela gasped “You’re okay, thank goodness”

She looked into Elena’s eyes. “I…” she began

Elena’s eyes held her fast. “I…” she began again

Elena smiled, her fangs still prominent. She gently brushed her mother-in-law’s hair away, revealing Daniela’s long neck

Elena could smell the food on her… in her. She kissed Daniela, feeling the pulse of fluid under her

Suddenly she bit

“Oooo” Daniela gasped

Blood. Red. Coppery heat welled up into Elena’s mouth. It tasted delicious like fluid fire. She gulped. She gulped again. Her hunger… so deep

She fed. She couldn’t hear her husband’s pleas, or her victim’s orgasm

She kept supping. She did notice that Daniela felt lighter in her arms

And then as she sucked there was nothing. She tired again and there was nothing.

She looked at Daniela’s shrunken dead face as if asking her for more.

She threw the husk away, still ignoring her husband’s cries—now turned to curses.

She was confused.

She looked to her Master

“You want more?”

“Yes, Master” she gasped, still guided by the feeling of want she had never known could be so deep.

Alina, Mihai’s sister was brought in next.

She too was caught in Elena’s hungry gaze. Elena’s eyes burned into her soul. She made no effort to resist as Elena bit into her and fed.

This time however—even in mid-meal—she stopped as her Master commanded her.

Alina was a virgin too. Her blood tasted different—fresher to Elena. But she was compelled by a force to obey her Master—a force even greater than her hunger.

Alina had fallen to the ground, weak. Elena only now realised where she was and what she had done. She had no regrets however.

Alina was helped to her feet by Vlad.

Mihai’s mind was crazed with despair as he watched the vampire defile his sister as well.

Alina was just as willing as she was opened up by the vampire’s large cock.

* * *

“This is the price you pay for defiance” Vlad announced to the crowd he’d ordered to gather in the centre of town.

Alina and Elena stood on either side of their master

Mihai was brought forth and thrown into the pit.

Mihai landed with a thud. He rose, and hobbled—having just injured his leg. A sword and a shield, and a spear, and a long dagger were thrown into the pit.

A pitchfork, and an axe were also thrown in.

Vlad turned to his new proselytes. He said nothing.

Each turned to the other and smiled and then turned back to the pit and they leapt into it

Only, they seemed to glide into it, falling softly onto the dirt floor.

“Elena?” he cried “Alina?”

The two stalked him, moving around to either side of him.

Alina hissed. And, as she did she bared her teeth -and her fangs drew down.

Marian was there in the crowd and his saw Alina (the elder), his own mother stand beside Vlad. She stood there gazing at Vlad as if she were in awe of him. She was—she only desired to please him. And then she turned her head and looked straight at him He saw her eyes—as pale as the two in the pit and he finally understood that she too was vampire.

“Elena?” Mihai called again “What are you doing?”

He sensed the danger as the two continued to circle him, slowly drawing closer. And, he reached for a sword.

As he did his sister Alina saw an opportunity and lunged at him

He swung the sword upwards and cut across her stomach deeply

She screamed in pain as the blade sliced her flesh.

She was in shock

She looked down at the wound as it weeped blood

“Alina?” he cried… but as he felt remorse for his sister the wound on her healed

She looked pleasantly surprised and turned on him again—for having tried to hurt her. As she looked at him her fingernails extended to claws.

Someone in the crowd turned away

“Look!” Vlad cried angrily “Do not turn away!”

She turned back to watch… for fear of his retribution.

The crowd watched as Mihai fought desperately, parrying them with his blade.

But he could not prevail with such weapons. Two more times he cut deep into them. At one stage Elena’s hand hung only by a sinew. But this too healed even as he watched in horror.

And they did not tire.. whereas he did. He had the sword’s point on the ground as he leaned over it, panting deeply… sweat pouring from his brow.

If only the dawn…

The vampires had one weapon… they could have just used their minds against him, but Vlad had forbidden it—he wanted a spectacle

And they gave him that

Till at last he fell to a knee, unable to stand.

They closed in.

He couldn’t hold the sword up any longer.

And they feasted

“Defiance has been paid in full” someone was heard to mutter as Mihai stopped struggling…

The End