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The Temptations of Lorelei

Chapter 2: To Honour and obey

Lorelei waited in agony for Amy to respond. She felt like she had just jumped off a diving board without knowing if she could swim. As the silence stretched between them, Lorelei began to spill her heart out.

“As read about what you did to Vicky, I couldn’t help but picture myself in the same position. I couldn’t stop thinking about how good it would feel to just give in and be dominated like he—“

Before she could utter another word, Amy crushed her lips against hers

Amy pushed her whole body into Lorelei’s and slammed into the wall behind her, pinning her arms above her and wrapping the young girls right leg around her waist.

Lorelei felt like she was being devoured. She felt helpless and desired.

All too soon Amy pulled away leaving the Lorelei panting for more.

Amy rested her head against the young girls, trying to get her breath back and her thoughts in order. Lorelei waited eagerly for more of her lips.

“Well, it’s been a while since that’s happened.” Amy smirked,

“I can’t just hypnotize you, Miss Jacobs. No, no, no.” She silenced the girls’ oncoming objections with a finger.

“You are not like other girls, Lorelei. You are a natural submissive. If I hypnotized you, I would end up controlling everything about you.”

Amy tossed her hair back, trying to take slow breaths to calm her mounting excitement,

“Everything in your life would be under my command. Every twitch of your arm, every blink of your eyes and every single breath in your lungs would be at my direction and discretion. If I asked you to strip naked and run around the school, you would have no alternative but to obey me because obeying me would be the only thing in your life that really mattered to you. Not your grades, not your family, not your friends. All would be insignificant to submitting your will and mind to me forever. You would be my possession to do with as I please. I would discipline you whenever I felt it necessary or just when I’m bored and want to play and you would have no choice, no option but to comply. Is that what you want?”

As Amy spoke, Lorelei felt herself grow more and more excited. The thought of submitting to this gorgeous creature consumed her. She could, in that moment, think of no better life for her than that but before she could answer, Amy silenced her again.

“Don’t answer now. The weekend is coming up which will give you two full days without classes to think about my offer. I want you to consider the implications and think hard about whether or not this is right for you. I live in the cottage on the other side of the river. If you decide to carry on with your life then stay in your dorm on Monday night and we will never speak of this again. But, if you decide that submitting your entire existence to me is something you desire.”

Now Amy leaned in close. Eye to eye. Nose to nose.

“Then come to my cottage on Monday night at 9 o’clock and I will show you the delights of submission.”

With that Amy unpinned her student and dismissed her.

When Monday night came along, Amy was soaking herself in her bath. She had taken the whole day off, filled with anticipation of what would happen tonight. As she watched the steam rise from her exposed leg, she regretted having to wait the whole weekend to seduce the sweet and yummy Lorelei. But it was necessary. For what Amy had planned for the girl she needed this time for both of them to prepare.

If only the young student knew what she was in for.

She rose and slipped into her silk dressing gown. As she glanced at the clock (8:40), her stomach gave a little jolt with anticipation. Only 20 minutes to go.

She busied herself with make-up to try and pass the time. She glanced at the clock again.

8:51

She quickly flicked through her dresses before deciding on her battle dress.

8:53

She went down to the kitchen keeping away from the window to stop herself from peering out it. She didn’t want the girl to know how anxious she was now.

8:54

She thought about coffee but she really didn’t need any help feeling wired right now.

8:55

She dove into her imagination. She thought all the things she could do to the girl. All the fun that could be had.

8:57

But this had to be done properly. Not like her last apprentice

8:58

She had to take her time.

8:59

Almost here.

9:00

Nothing. No knock. No doorbell. Nothing

9:01

9:02

9:03

Did she scare Lorelei off? Was she too forward or too harsh? Maybe she wasn’t as in to it as Amy first thou-

A timid knock from the front door tore a gasp of relieve from Amy’s lips.

Lorelei had spent the entire weekend in agony. She had swung back and forth on whether to come tonight. One half scared stiff at the prospect of giving her whole life to someone she didn’t really know and the other half telling the truth.

That nothing would feel better.

She shuffled from foot to foot as she waited for an answer to her knock. She was a full three minutes late. Was that bad? Would she be punished? Would she like being punished?

These thoughts and more swarmed in her mind like hornets, stinging her over and over again. Her instinct told her to leave. This was too crazy, too surreal. But something kept her there. It was like she was being drawn magnetically to this place and this situation.

The door opened and the light from inside framed her gorgeous teacher perfectly in her silk robe teasing Lorelei with the silhouette of Amy’s naked form.

“You’re a little late, Lorelei.”

“I-I’m s-s-sorry Pro… I mean Mummy.” She stammered, trying to remember the guide her professor had written.

“Not Mummy. It’s Goddess. I grew out of that Mummy thing years ago.”

Amy waved her inside. The house was pleasantly warm, wrapping itself around Lorelei against the cold and damp outside world. Her Goddess led her into the sitting room, a cream coloured sofa sat at the back, in front of an elegant glass door that led out into a gorgeous garden bathed in moonlight.

Her Goddess slid out of her robe as she walked to the sofa.

Lorelei’s mouth hung slightly open as her eyes travelled up her Goddess’s powerful muscular legs to her tight ass and beautiful silky back, either side of which lay an outline of breasts. Her Goddess turned to sit and Lorelei drank in her flat and taught stomach, her commanding breasts and her crossed legs cutting of access to her-

“Pick up my robe.”

Amy watched with amusement as Lorelei did as she was bidden without question or hesitation. She didn’t know how calculated this all was. Being naked gave Amy an advantage. Lorelei would find so hard to concentrate or analyse anything Amy said or did whilst her naked body was in full view.

Lorelei folded the robe and placed it on the coffee table at her Goddess’s direction. She sat down next to this vision trying hard to look and not look at her exposed flesh. Her eyes slid up and down her Goddess’s legs, memorizing her powerful calves and thick thighs that invited her to rest her head between them-

A click alerted Lorelei to another person in the room.

Her skin was coloured golden butterscotch and her athletic physique was covered barely by a thin pink apron and nothing else. Her hair was a dirty blonde that contrasted with deep hazelnut eyes which stared blankly ahead without any reaction to what they were seeing. Without a word the strange women left the teapot and cups she had brought in behind and exited out the door.

“Go ahead. You can ask.” Amy said with a ghost of a smile on lips.

“W-who was that?”

Amy poured tea into both cups, “That was Tabatha. My maid for want of a better word. She takes care of all the domestic chores of the house.”

Lorelei tried to process this new information whilst automatically mimicking her Goddess and drank some tea without thought or question as to why. The robotic blank stare of the woman scared and thrilled her to the bone. Would she end up like that?

“No Lorelei, you won’t be like that.” Amy said, reading her mind. She was playing this girl like a violin.

“Tabatha has a life outside this house that I have no influence nor interest in. You will be different. You will be reduced to an extension of my will. As such there are a few things I need to teach you.”

Amy brushed a hair from Lorelei’s shoulders sending shivers down the girl’s spine.

“You can relax Sweetie. I won’t be hypnotizing you tonight.” Amy lied.

Lorelei felt disappointment and relief in equal measure. Her shoulders sank a little whilst taking another shaky sip of tea. It really was delicious.

“You’re too nervous just now. Too much adrenaline and anticipation in your body at what is to come. So for now, what I would like to do is just take you through what will happen so you can be prepared and relaxed for when I do finally entrance you.”

Amy stifled a fake yawn before shifting her hair back gently drawing the girls’ attention back to her breasts just for a second. Lorelei dragged her eyes back to her Goddess’s face. She had to pay close attention in case she might miss something. She felt so much less nervous now and the tea was quite soothing. No wonder her Goddess drank so much of it usually.

Only then did it strike her that her Goddess didn’t seem to be drinking much. But the thought was interrupted by Amy taking the cup out of Lorelei’s hands and placing back on the coffee table.

“Turn and face me. Good. Now before we begin, I like my subjects to go through a small relaxation exercise just to get them nice and comfortable. I just encourage them to take a few nice deep breaths just to loosen all the muscles and get them ready to be hypnotized.”

Amy took a deep breath to demonstrate and covered another yawn. Lorelei watched the swell of her breasts an-

“Try it yourself Lorelei. Close your eyes and take a deep breath in.”

Lorelei was finding very hard to concentrate with her Goddess always interrupting her thoughts and she could feel a yawn starting to build in her chest. She didn’t feel that tired but yawns were contiguous. She did as she was told and took a few deep breaths and she began to feel her heart rate slow a fraction.

“The heart has to slow down to compensate for the increase in oxygen and with lower blood pressure, the muscles in your body can’t tighten up as well, leaving you nice and relaxed and ready to be hypnotized. You see?”

Lorelei nodded enthusiastically. It was so interesting to learn from a master like this. She was completely captivated. She yawned almost without thought.

“Now that my subject is totally relaxed, the best thing to do is have them fix their eyes on something. By having them concentrate on their eyes following a watch or looking into my eyes it creates tension in the muscles in the eyes and starts to dry them out slightly. This means the subject unconsciously starts to blink more often to keep them wet. I tend to have them look deep into my eyes since suggestive subjects like you will mimic my blink rate allowing greater influence over it. This tires out the eyelids which are such weak muscles to begin with. It tricks the brain into thinking it’s sleepy.”

Lorelei was already looking into her Goddess’s eyes. She wasn’t being hypnotized, she knew that. Her Goddess had already told her that wouldn’t happen tonight. Her eyes were just so lovely to look at; she could lose herself in them so easily. It was just so much easier to listen and to think when she looked into her eyes. She yawned again.

“I must be more tired than I thought.”

“Hypnosis has often been likened to sleep. Because when the muscles in your back and buttocks relax it gives you the impression of sinking into the couch. Almost like you are melting and going down deeper into sleep. It’s why all Hypnotists use “deeper” constantly. To reinforce that feeling of almost free falling to a soothing dream.”

Lorelei couldn’t help but imagine what it must be like to sink down for her Goddess. To be lured into a soothing dreamy sleep by the soft honeyed tones of her voice.

She felt eyelids start to strain. She couldn’t space out now. She had to listen to her Goddess’s every word. She yawned again and started to feel so tired now. It was late and the tea and the comfy couch made it difficult not to just curl up and sleep.

“Then the subject has no choice but to close their eyes. It completes the illusion of sleep and without the distraction on visual input, the brain can focus totally on the sound of my voice and accepted totally and completely everything I tell it.”

Lorelei closed her eyes almost by accident. It did feel so good not have to look anywhere anymore. And it was so much easier to listen to Goddess when her eyes were closed. Her Goddess told her she could close her eyes now if she wanted. It was very late and this talk of sleep was getting to her.

“Maybe just for a moment then.”

Lorelei couldn’t help but daydream about how one day her Goddess would do this to Lorelei and cause her to fall deep into trance just by snapping her fingers and commanding sleep. It felt so hot to Lorelei and her Goddess explained that since the brain would be convinced it was asleep, the conscious mind would shut off, unable to analyse or question anything she said and all her commands would slide effortlessly down into her subconscious where they would be accepted and obeyed without question or thought.

She couldn’t wait for that. To be so entranced that resistance would impossible. She bet it would be like that time in the locker room. She would even realise it was happening. Why couldn’t happen tonight. Lorelei agreed with her Goddess’s voice that she would give anything to hypnotized right and for Amy to command her to slee-

Lorelei heard the snap of fingers and command of sleep and then she knew no more.

Amy watched with glee as Lorelei collapsed into her lap. It had been so easy deliciously easy to mesmerize the young girl and now she was Amy’s to play with. But she wouldn’t take her tonight. She had to draw this out.

“Lorelei, can you hear me?”

A small mumble came from the entranced girl.

“Good. I know how sleepy you are and how good it feels to let go completely. Why don’t you Stand up and take off all your clothes and get really comfortable so you can go even deeper into sleep.”

Lorelei obeyed her Goddess, stripping off her uniform, unveiling inch by inch that pale creamy skin beneath. Soon her bra came almost hesitantly off to release two perfectly formed B cups. And finally the panties followed.

Amy drooled at the sight of the innocent bald pussy before her, untouched and pure but ever so moist in anticipation. Like the pussy itself was begging for a finger or tongue or cock to take Lorelei’s sweet innocence away.

Lorelei returned her head into Amy’s lap and her lay on the couch.

“Good girl. It’s so good to fall deeper isn’t it Sweetie. Just to give up all control and slide effortlessly down deeper and deeper. And my voice can penetrate you so deeply now. I can make you feel anything at this point. I just have mention only once how horny you are and already you can feel that hot flame inside your pussy start to light. That fiery energy that tells you to touch yourself, that begs for pleasure in all of its forms.”

Lorelei’s hips began to twitch as she gave the tiniest whimpers of arousal.

“Now Lorelei, how often do you masturbate? You can tell me openly and honestly.”

Lorelei mumbled “Once a day. Before bed.”

“Good girl. It feels so good to open up to me like this doesn’t it. It lets you fall even deeper into this warm cosy creamy sleep. Tell me more. Tell me what you think about when you touch yourself.”

Lorelei’s whimpering was becoming more urgent. “Girls.”

She gave a sigh when the word passed her lips as she went deeper into her Goddess’s control.

“Mmmm such a good girl. Do you think about them naked in the showers and in gym, the sweat glistening on their bodies?”

“Yesss.”

“Good girl. Tell me, is there one girl in particular you think about?”

Lorelei squirmed a little. In what was left of her conscious mind she didn’t want to say but every time she answered honestly her Goddess called her “Good girl.” And she loved hearing that. She would do anything to please her Goddess and it felt so good to keep falling deeper.

“Alexa.”

“Ah that’s your friend who didn’t turn up for your tennis match right?”

Lorelei nodded, a vacant smile playing on her lips.

“You share a dorm don’t you? I bet it’s so exciting to watch walk around in her pyjamas or even her underwear. Watching her gorgeous long legs and that tight ass just tease without even knowing it.”

Lorelei’s squirming increased.

“I know you want to touch yourself now. I know you would anything to relive that sexual tension in your body but it is so difficult to move right now isn’t it. So hard to move and just so easy to just lie hear and listen to me guide you even deeper into sleep.”

Amy whispered into her ear.

“I could do it for you. I could make you feel so good right now. I could make you cum like you have never cum before. Would you like that?”

Amy had barely finished before Lorelei moaned “Yes”

“Beg me for it.”

“Pleeease Goddess. Fuck me, do anything to me. Please just make me cum for you.”

Amy reached down and began touch that gorgeous pussy. It felt so slippery like the act of trance had subconsciously had turned Lorelei on so much. Amy’s fingers traced the inner and outer lips of the girl’s vagina and drove her wild.

“Pleeease Goddess. Anything for you. Fingers. Please. Fuck me. Gawwwd.”

Amy slid one finger effortlessly into her. She curled it just enough to tease the G-spot. Lorelei’s moaning became louder and more vulgar. Who knew the innocent young girl could swear like a sailor when given the proper motivation.

“Can you feel it coming Lorelei? The orgasm building inside of you, right there in your body you can feel the beginnings of that addictive explosion. It’ll feel so good to release won’t it Sweetie, all that tension in one mind blowing burst of pleasure. It’s coming, it’s coming now you can feel like a dam bursting forth, it’s coming, you’re coming now. Do it now Sweetie. Cum for me.”

Lorelei gave an almighty scream. Her hips jerked out of control and a river of cum squirted from her pussy. Her body convulsed and her mind melted into nothing.

Lorelei awoke in her room with early morning light creeping in. Had it been just a dream? She didn’t even know what it was she was trying to remember. She knew she went to Goddess’s house. She knew she had knocked the door and then….

And then?

She heard a women’s moan next her.

Lorelei leapt out of bed like a frightened cat. She was alone. There was no one on the bed or in the room, moaning or otherwise. She gingerly searched the covers until she found her phone. Someone had changed her text alert.

Her phone told her she had a text from someone called “My Goddess”. It read,

“My Office. Now.”

Lorelei’s whole being trembled. It had happened. She had been hypnotized and made to forget what had happened.

Her seduction had begun.