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Film at Eleven

Chapter 8 — One and One and One Makes Three

Garrett Jones sat at the bar and watched his favorite dancer.

He never took his eyes off of her as he took another swig from his beer. Her name was Heaven. He’d been thinking about her all day long and now he was here again.

It seemed remarkable, the man told himself. It seemed remarkable that they’d only just met a few days ago.

The first day he’d seen her, he’d gotten himself thrown out of the club. He’d done something stupid although for the life of him, he couldn’t remember what that was.

He’d come back two nights later to see her again. Of course, he hadn’t admitted that even to himself. He’d told himself that he’d come back to see another girl. He’d told himself that the other girl was a girl he knew from work although it was clear to anyone who wasn’t totally blind that she looked nothing like the girl at work. Oh sure, there were superficial similarities, but really, who was he kidding?

That night, he’d gotten a dance with Heaven and then he’d gotten another. That had been incredible. His favorite part, well next to the part where he got to get his cock inside her, but his favorite part was where she’d turn around and she’d rub her bare, little back against his shirt, and then he’d beg her to reach around and grab hold of her tits and she’d whimper whenever he did that and then she’d squirm on top of him and tell him how hot he was and then she’d beg him to put his cock inside her pussy and of course, Garrett always did what she wanted.

He’d run out of money that night, spending it all on Heaven, but it was worth it, he told himself.

That was why he came back with even more money the next night, and he’d spent all of that, too, and that was why he was back again this evening with even more money.

Garrett knew Heaven saw him almost from the moment he walked in the club. Of course, she saw him, he told himself. After all, he was spending a lot of money on her.

Of course, he told himself, that wasn’t the real reason she was interested in him. That might be the way it was with the other guys but she really liked him. She kept telling him how interesting he was and of course, he believed her.

“Garrett, baby, you’re back again. I can’t believe it. What a pleasant surprise.”

“Well, you know,” Garrett said, “I just couldn’t stay away.”

Heaven snuggled in close. The rules of the club were that the guys couldn’t touch the girls but there was nothing that said the girls couldn’t touch the guys, a fact of which Garrett Jones’s cock was painfully aware. “That’s sweet,” the girl said. “Are you going to do a dance with me tonight?”

“Of course.”

“Oh good,” the girl said and with that, she let her hand slide almost innocently down the front of the man’s pants. “And is he going to come out and play.”

“Oh yeah,” the man said.

“Oh good. You know, you make my day when you come in here,” the girl told him.

“And you know I wouldn’t come in here if you weren’t here,” Garrett told her.

“Oh my God. You say the sweetest things,” and Garrett wasn’t sure if the girl actually believed him or if she thought he was just making it up, but the truth was he meant every word of it. He wouldn’t be coming in here if she weren’t around.

“Should we go in the back,” the girl asked.

“Yeah,” the man moaned.

“Oh good,” the girl said. “I was totally hoping you’d say that.”

Garrett Jones just couldn’t help himself. Every time he tried to hold back, he found himself giving in and not only did he find himself giving in, but he found he liked it, too.

He let her lead him to a room and then she was closing the door behind them. “So what do you want to do tonight?”

Garrett was sure she already knew the answer. She just wanted to hear him say it, and besides, it gave him time to take out his wallet and get the money ready. “I want you to ride me,” the man said. “I want you to ride my cock.”

Heaven stroked a hand over the front of the man’s pants. “Are you sure,” she asked him. “We always do that, you know.”

“I know what I like,” Garrett said.

“Yeah, and what is that?”

Garrett knew she already knew. She just wanted to hear it. “I like your pussy,” the man said. “I like the way my cock feels inside it. I like your ass. I like how it’s nice and tight and round. I like holding it in my hands. And I like your tits. I love it when you tease me with your tits. I love it when you stick them in my face. I love it when you let me suck on your nipples. I love it when you let me cum.”

“Good answer,” the girl said. “Why don’t you sit down for me.”

Garrett couldn’t sit down fast enough. He knew what was going to happen next.

The dancer took off her clothes, her body dancing to the piped in music as she swayed in front of the man, but that was just the opening event. The main event would come later when she climbed onto his lap.

And it wasn’t like she was going to make him wait all that long. She straddled his legs and she grabbed hold of his cock. “I like this,” she said.

Garrett groaned.

“Are you sure you want me to ride your cock?”

“Oh yeah,” the man groaned.

“It’s going to cost you, you know.”

“I don’t care,” the man said. “I want to do it.”

“Oooo,” the girl purred. “That was exactly what I was hoping you’d say,” and with that, the girl let her pussy slide down around the man’s cock.

The man groaned again. He couldn’t believe it but every time, it just kept getting better and better. That was why he kept coming back, he told himself. It was why he kept spending the money.

“Are you going to cum for me,” the girl cooed. “You know I want you to.”

“Yeah,” the man groaned. “Yeah, I’m going to cum.”

“No pulling out this time,” the girl said. “This time, I want to feel it between my legs.”

“Whatever you want,” Garrett said and he couldn’t help but admit just how good it felt to say that to her.

She was riding his cock even harder. “Oh geez,” she moaned. “Oh geez.”

He sure hoped she wasn’t lying when she said what it was she wanted because ...

The girl moaned as she felt it. “Oh yeah,” she purred. “Oh yeah, that’s it. Oh geez, I love it when you cum inside me because it feels so good when you cum between my legs.”

Garrett didn’t care if she was telling him the truth or not. All that really mattered was how good it felt to have his cock cumming inside her tight, little cunt.

She stayed where she was, almost as if she were trying to make sure her pussy was trying to soak up every last drop of the man’s cum, and it was only after she was sure she’d gotten what she wanted that she was willing to pull herself up off his cock. She turned herself around and then she leaned up against the man and she cooed into his ear. “I love it,” she told the man. “I love it when you cum inside me.”

Garrett didn’t care if she was lying or not. If she was lying, he hoped she’d keep on lying because he loved hearing what she had to say.

It wasn’t long before Heaven was leading the man out of the room and dropping him off at his bar stool. “You wait right here,” she told the man. “I’ll be on stage real soon.”

Garrett couldn’t help but feel his cock jump at that. Her on stage meant he was going to get to see her naked. Of course, so was everyone else, but he didn’t care about them. All he cared about was her.

* * *

She was back again. “Oh my God,” she gushed even as she let a hand almost innocently stroke the man between his legs. “I saw what you did. You are so sweet.”

“What,” the man asked, feigning innocence.

“You put a fifty dollar bill up on the tip rail.”

“Oh that. Well you deserve it.”

Still the girl stroked the inside of his thigh. Her hand was so close to his cock and yet she wasn’t quite close enough. “Well I still think it’s sweet.”

Garrett Jones couldn’t help but preen at that. He loved it when Heaven noticed how wonderful he was.

“Do you like me,” she asked out of the blue.

“What?!”

“Do you like me,” she asked.

“Yeah I like you.”

The girl’s hand continued to stroke him between his legs. She was so close and yet she was so far away. “You wouldn’t go and find some other stripper that you like better, would you?”

“What?! No.”

“Are you sure?”

“Of course, I’m sure. Why?”

“Because I’d like you to do me a favor.”

“Anything,” the man promised.

“I’ve got this friend,” the girl said. “The next time we do a show in the back, I want to bring her in on it. That’s okay, isn’t it?”

Garrett desperately wanted to tell her no. All he really wanted was her and he sure as hell didn’t want some other dancer coming in there and maybe getting between them.

That was what he wanted to tell her but there was still that need he had. He wanted to spend all his time with Heaven, and if this was what Heaven wanted, then the fact was he wanted it, too, and he told her so.

“Oh goody. I was hoping you’d say that, but you got to promise me you won’t like her better.”

That was an easy promise to make. “I promise.”

“Good. I’ll be back in a few minutes.”

Garrett would have told her to stay, that she didn’t have to go and get her friend, at least not right away, but before he could say anything, she was already gone.

Garrett watched her go and then he watched her disappear back stage. This sucked, the man told himself. He didn’t want anyone else. He wanted her.

She was back quickly with another girl close behind her. “This is my friend Shiloh,” she said.

It was weird, the man thought, because when she’d first brought her friend out, he was sure she was going to say the girl’s name was Kelly. He wasn’t sure why he thought that. He just did.

“I was telling her that you wanted to do a threesome with me and with her.”

Well not really, Garrett wanted to say. After all, this wasn’t really his idea, but if this was what Heaven wanted, then he was perfectly willing to humor her.

“What do you think,” Heaven asked. “Would you like to take the two of us in the back?”

What was he going to say? He wasn’t sure how much this was going to cost him but all that mattered really was that this was something that she wanted. “Sure,” he said. “Sure. I want to take you in the back.”

There was one thing Garrett really liked. When he got up off of his bar stool, he knew every man was watching him and why shouldn’t they be. He didn’t just have one but he had two dancers with him and he knew the other men in the club were jealous of him. It was understandable and it felt good.

The room that the girls led him to was bigger than the one that Heaven and he had used in the past but that was understandable, he thought. After all, there were three of them now.

The girl, Shiloh, or Kelly, or whatever her name was, she whispered something to her friend.

“That’s a good idea,” Heaven gushed.

“What’s a good idea?”

“Shiloh was saying that since there were two of us, that you should pay us double what we each would get, but if you did, we’d definitely make it worth your while.”

“Double? I can’t afford—”

Heaven snuggled close. “Baby, don’t make me look bad. I brought Shiloh in here because I said you were a cool guy.”

“Yeah, but—”

“But what,” Heaven cooed. “I thought you liked me.”

“I do like you.”

“Then why are you making me look bad in front of my friend.”

“I’m not—”

“I thought you liked me.”

“I do like you.”

“I want to do it.”

Really, that was all she had to say and Garrett knew it. He had this need to please her and he just couldn’t do anything else. “You have an ATM machine here,” he said with resignation.

“Out by the front.”

“I guess I could get some more cash.”

“You do that and we’ll wait here, and baby?”

“Yeah?”

“I’m not sure how long we can wait so hurry.”

That was the last straw. Garrett knew he shouldn’t be doing this but he also knew he couldn’t help himself. He rushed out of the room and moments later, he was taking his cash from the machine and then he was back again.

“That was quick,” Heaven said.

“You told me to hurry.”

The dancer grinned. “That I did and you always do what you’re told, don’t you?”

Garrett bristled at the implication but it wasn’t enough to make him stop what he was doing.

“You know what Shiloh was telling me?”

The man shook his head.

“She was telling me she really likes you. She was telling me she wants to suck on your cock.”

Garrett nodded. He didn’t really care what the other dancer wanted. What he wanted was what Heaven wanted.

“I want it, too,” Heaven said. “I want to see her suck your cock.”

And that was all it took. That changed everything. If that was what Heaven wanted, then he wanted it, too.

The girl, Shiloh, was unzipping his pants and then she was opening his belt. “Hey,” the man said.

“What?”

The man nodded at the surveillance cameras. “You’re not supposed to do that in here. They’ll see you.”

The dancer laughed. “They never watch the tapes from in here.”

“You’re sure.”

“I’m sure,” the dancer went on as she continued to pull the man’s pants down. “Now let’s get you out of those underwear.”

The man groaned as his cock popped free.

“Mmm, that’s what I wanted to see,” Shiloh said as she sent the man tottering backwards and then moments later, she was sliding between his legs. “Mmm,” the girl purred. “I like this.”

The man groaned as the girl took his cock in her mouth. Damn, that was good.

Heaven was off to the side and playing with her pussy. “Is she doing a good job,” she asked. “Is she sucking you good.”

“Oh yeah,” the man groaned.

“It makes me hot,” she said.

“What does?”

“Seeing you get your cock sucked like that. It makes me so hot.”

The man groaned. It made him hot, too.

“I want to see you cum,” the girl told him. “I want to see you cum in her mouth.”

The man groaned. He much would have rather have cum in Heaven’s pussy but it seemed as if no one was taking into account what he wanted.

“Come on,” Heaven urged as she rubbed herself harder. “Come on. Do it. Cum in her mouth.”

The man groaned. He was almost there.

“Do it. Cum in her mouth.”

The man groaned once more and then he grunted as his cock surged. He couldn’t help it. It just felt so good.

Shiloh never missed a beat as her mouth continued to suck away at the man’s cock. She absolutely loved this. She loved making guys cum.

“Oh fuck,” the man groaned. He was loathe to admit it but this was the first time he’d gotten a girl to suck him off and now that it had happened once, he knew he wanted to have it happen again.

“Oh my God,” gushed the other stripper. “Oh my God. You were really cumming hard. You must have really liked that, didn’t you?”

Garrett nodded sheepishly. He didn’t just want to remain true to Heaven. He needed it, but what the other girl had done to his cock, well hell, there was something to be said for that, too.

“I’ll bet you’d like her to get you hard again, wouldn’t you?”

That seemed wrong, Garrett thought. He wanted Heaven. He wanted to do whatever he could for her so he shouldn’t be wanting this other girl to ... to get him hard again.

He shouldn’t be wanting it, but he did.

“All you got to do is say the word,” Heaven said.

The man knew what he wanted. “I want her to suck my cock,” he said.

That was all it took and suddenly Shiloh was back on his cock, her tongue licking and her mouth sucking and the man couldn’t help but groan. He could feel the blood rushing back between his legs.

Garrett could feel his cock getting harder.

“Do you like that,” Heaven asked.

“Yeah,” the man groaned as his cock even harder.

“I’ll bet I know what you’d really like.”

“What’s that?”

“I’ll bet you want me to ride your cock.”

She was right there. All she had to do was to say it and he knew she was right. He did want her to ride his cock.

“Well?”

“I want you to ride my cock.”

Shiloh moved back even as Heaven came forward and suddenly the girl was perched over his lap. Her hand reached down and she stroked his cock and she was so close to him that he could smell her perfume.

“God, I love this,” she purred even as her hand stroked his cock. “I love being here in your lap.”

“Yeah,” the man groaned.

“Yeah? You mean you like it, too?”

Who was she kidding, the man thought. She had to know. She had to know he loved it, too, and yet even though he knew she might be playing with him, he couldn’t help but play right along with her. “Yeah,” he groaned. “I love it, too.”

“Then I guess we shouldn’t waste time,” the girl said and with that, she let her pussy slide down around the man’s cock.

“Oh yeah,” the man groaned and then he groaned again. “Oh yeah.”

“You like that,” the girl asked.

“Yeah,” the man groaned.

“I knew you would,” the dancer said, “but you know what? You know what would make it even better?”

“What?”

“If my friend had a dick,” the girl said. “Then she could fuck me from behind even as I rode your cock. Wouldn’t that be great?”

Garrett wasn’t sure if that would be great, but he knew he wanted to see what that would look like.

“I’ll bet you want to know what that would look like,” Heaven said.

“Yeah.”

Garrett had no idea if the two girls had planned it this way or if it had just happened but he just didn’t care. All he knew was that as Heaven sat there atop his cock, her friend came up behind her and then she was pushing herself against her friend, pushing Heaven from behind and shoving the dancer up against Garrett’s chest.

“Unnhh,” Heaven moaned and Garrett could almost believe that the other girl really was fucking her, especially when Heaven moaned again.

“It feels so good,” Heaven moaned as her friend once more pressed her tits into her back. “It feels so good. It feels so good to get fucked.”

Garrett wasn’t sure if she was talking about his dick or the one behind her and it was only then that he reminded himself that Shiloh didn’t actually have a dick. It was just that ... it was just that it seemed so real.

“It feels so good,” Heaven moaned again even as her bare chest was once more mashed up against Garrett’s body.

“I want to cum,” the girl moaned. “I want to cum. I want you to make me do it to me. I want you to make me cum.”

Garrett wasn’t sure exactly what she wanted.

“I want you to make me cum,” the girl wailed again. “I want you to do it. Come on. Make me feel it. Make me cum.”

It was almost as if her words had made it happen but suddenly, his cock was surging and the girl moaned and then she squealed with delight even as his cock surged inside her.

“You’re doing it,” she moaned even as her pussy bore down on the cock inside her. “You’re doing it. You’re making me cum.”

And Garrett Jones was glad. He hoped he’d given her exactly what she wanted.

* * *

“Hey, boss,” the bartender said.

Mr. Avery turned and looked at the bartender. “Something on your mind, Sean?”

The bartender nodded. “You realize who that man is?”

“You mean he used to work with Kelly?”

The bartender nodded.

The club manager nodded. “I wouldn’t be all that worried about it if I were you.”

“Why’s that, boss?”

The man looked in the direction of where the two girls had taken the man. “I think Kelly’s coming along just fine,” he said.

“You don’t think he’ll say something to ... you know, to make her remember.”

The club manager looked thoughtful. “No, I don’t really think that’s going to happen. Still all the same, maybe it wouldn’t hurt to have another talk with her.”

“That’s what I was thinking too.”

The club manager nodded to himself. “I’ll have to think about it,” he said. “I’ll have to think about it.”