The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

Nice New neighbors—New Girls next door. Chapter 2

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The characters in Nick Vegas’ stories are fictional characters, crafted by the mind of Nick Vegas. Any resemblance to persons living or dead is purely coincidental, including their behaviors, good or bad. No characters represent an entire people, or culture, their appearance is merely for the aesthetic value that appeals to Nick Vegas and his loyal readers. (this applies to past and future stories)

‘This Requested story’ for Nick Vegas, is a compilation of several suggestions from several readers, who all gave me an outline, and I ran with their ideas, and my own embellishments.

All 3 roommates were quite attractive.

A young, athletic (muscular) Asian girl, a young goth-looking Brunette, and a young Latina.

They all quietly put their boxes down and they looked at their phones while they waved.

The Goth Girl Spoke a little disappointed, ‘Um, this place is like a total mess, who is gonna clean it up so we can like move in? The other roommates echo the same sentiment. Mentioning they were students, not cleaners.

Amy smiled. “That’s why I brought her over,” isn’t it “Melissa?

Melissa was confused as to what was happening. Were they insinuating she would clean up the place for them? “ Gosh, Um I uh… what are you saying?”

Amy winked at her roommates.

Amy simply blurted “maid service”.

And Melissa’s expression suddenly went blank, her eyes had that 1000 yard stare. She then stood at attention.

Amy turned to face her friends.

Amy: “See I told you” we’ll have this place all cleaned up, and if it gets too late she will come back tomorrow, won’t you?

Melissa quietly replied: “Yes Ma’am.”

The girls were ecstatic. They clapped fake applause. This lady from next door was gonna clean up for them.

Amy continued. “By the way guys, she will also do whatever cleaning task you give her as well won’t you?

Melissa answered “Yes Ma’am.”

“Yippee” said Amy, I’m gonna go vape some cbd for a while and then go for a nice swim.

The Maid here will get the downstairs cleaned up first, then deep clean our bathrooms. Depending on how much time we have left when she is done. We might get cute pedicures or at least foot rubs. We deserve it.

“You’d like to do that wouldn’t you Melissa?” Melissa quietly answered. “Yes Maam.

Amy: “She’ll be normal about it, though I haven’t installed an extreme foot fetish…yet.” laughed Amy.

Amy walked outside, the other 3 roommates went to their respective rooms and Melissa began diligently cleaning up the living room, entranceway, and dining rooms.

She efficiently vacuumed, dusted, removed trash, and went thru drawers and tossed out old menus, and take out flyers. She used pledge on all the old furniture, then she removed all the cheap plastic flowers to hose off outside. She took off all the afghans and tossed them into the washer.

After a few hours, the downstairs was done. It was still retro, but clean.

A now dust-covered, and rather sweaty Melissa stood at attention still in trance in the now cleaned up living room. She stood there at attention silently for a good 20 minutes until Amy finally entered the room.

“Nice!” Blurted Amy. “We still have a few hours of daylight before her husband gets home. What is the situation upstairs?’

The 3 roommates came down the stairs to talk. The Latin girl was now in short shorts and sandals, the Asian girl was in Uggs. Her legs were rock solid, and stunning.

They both said in unison “The bathrooms still need scrubbing”

Melissa quietly said: yes Ma’ams and she walked toward the stairs.

The roommates looked pleasantly surprised.

Amy had blazing red eyes.

“Damn, that was a great swim, and this smoke made me kinda horny.”

Amy watched Melissa obediently walk up the stairs, and licked her lips.

Upstairs hours later at dusk

The bathrooms were finished, and much of the house looked spotless.

Melissa stood at the bottom of the stairs at attention, silently.

Amy walked over and she addressed her:

‘ Maid, go swim in the pool now and then sit in a beach chair. Use the towel I was already using, and you will remain in trance. I will join you shortly.’

Melissa answered: “Yes ma’am.”

Amy joined Melissa, who was now no longer dusty or sweaty, she sat with her hair slicked back and bore slight goosebumps. Amy sat next to her at the outdoor table.

Amy spoke. “We’ll be exchanging text info, so when I need you to perform maid services I can text you as needed, and you will text me your schedule, to work it out. Do you understand me?”

Melissa said: “Yes Ma’am.

Amy continued. ‘Now, you will only remember visiting your 4 charming new neighbors next door, who are really good kids, and super cute, they just need a mentor, and you wish to spend time with us whenever possible, to be that ‘mentor.’

Oh, You will also find yourself looking at my legs, my feet, and my ass a lot.” Said Amy. Smirking.

Amy continued planting post hypnotics.

Amy: “You will, however, find yourself having erotic fantasies about each of us when you shower and will masturbate to an amazing orgasm, which will shame you and yet arouse- you, but you’ll keep silent about it. When you do have sex with your husband, you will not hesitate to do so, but you will be revisiting those fantasies during it in order to get off.”

When I awaken you, you’ll simply thank me for a wonderful visit, and then go home and shower.

Next week, when you have the time available (Amy had already run through Melissa’s schedule) you’ll bring over either a pie or a home-cooked meal, for us. The choice will be yours, but you are inclined to do both.”

Amy replied quietly. “Yes Ma’am”. Amy then placed an empty Mimosa glass in Melissa’s hand.

Amy“and awake,” said Amy.

Melissa awoke holding the empty glass. She looked at it with mild confusion.

Amy was standing next to her. Then Amy reached for the glass.

“I’ll take that for you, after all… you are our guest,” said Amy, smiling sweetly.

Melissa smiled as Amy walked away with her glass. She couldn’t help notice how shapely Amy was. She looked at her shapely legs and young ass and feet as Amy walked away.

Melissa Spoke. “Oh, my time flies, I’d better-hit home and shower before hubby gets home. It was certainly a pleasure meeting you all. You’re Such nice girls.”

Melissa emerged from the house, mere moments after her husband drove away, wearing sweats, and holding a large thermal bag with a home-baked pie and a nice dinner for 4 she had made from scratch. She just had the urge’ to do so.

She seemed to be on autopilot as she walked through her backyard and then opened that section of fence and then walked into the girl’s house. She put the food down in the kitchen, in the appropriate places, and then she walked over to the hall closet.

Almost as a reflex, she grabbed the maid uniform and then disappeared into the bathroom, and then she emerged in the maid uniform.

Melissa’s expression went blank, and she stood at attention, patiently waiting to be acknowledged by one of the 4 young roommates.

After about 25 minutes, one of the roommates came downstairs and noticed her.

She addressed Melissa:

Roommate: “Yo, make coffee, then get to cleaning the bathrooms, and do the usual. We ain’t got time to clean this place. That’s why you are here.”

Melissa replied: ‘Yes Ma’am,’

The particular roommate grabbed some coffee, scrolled her phone, and returned upstairs.

Melissa then got to work.

Melissa cleaned and scrubbed and vacuumed and dusted. She put away dishes and she washed clothes. She folded and placed the items next to their respective baskets.

As the place began looking tidier and tidier, Amy slowly came down the stairs and was rubbing her eyes, as she woke up.

She had on little more than fuzzy slippers and a negligee.

“Maid” Amy barked.

Melissa stopped mid-cleaning and she stood at attention before her immediately.

Amy looked her over. It appeared Melissa had already dropped a couple of lbs, which pleased Amy. In a couple of weeks she would make another adjustment.

Amy spoke: “Continue cleaning maid, then I might share some lunch with you. I can hear your little stomach growling.”

Melissa answered respectfully: “Thank you ma’am” and then returned to her duties.

Once Amy felt she was done with her lunch, as were the other two, the minuscule amount of leftovers were scraped from each girl’s plate onto a small paper plate and

then placed on the counter with one of the girl’s used fork and knife.

“Maid” ordered Amy, “you may now have your lunch, then you will perform massages on all three of us, before I give you instructions for the days until next week.”

“Yes ma’am” replied Melissa, who then ate the small portion of leftovers.

Lower back pain and the style of shoes the women wore were described in detail as each college-aged roommate got their deep tissue massage from their neighbor, now at their beck and call.

Once finished, Melissa was ordered into a deep trance again:

Amy gave the itinerary

Amy: “Melissa, you deeply enjoy your maid duty and it even creeps into your dreams. You awake each morning horny, and you imagine being our obedient maid as you service your husband. You will continue to do your weight loss regimen and portion control as well as the exercises I have given you. Several times a week until the next maid service-you will tan outside, you will order and use Maui Babe lotion to speed up your tanning.”

Amy continued:

“Also, next week you will begin wearing this instead, under the maid uniform, you will conceal it until you return”. Amy handed Melissa a tight-fitting wet look black bikini and thong in a small bag from Yandy.com.

Melissa put on her regular clothes, those drab sweats, and she was given the command to awake, and to feel full.

Melissa awoke:

Melissa: “Gosh girls, it’s always so nice to see you. I am so glad you moved in next door and you appreciate my cooking! Oh my, I feel pretty full. I might have to skip dinner tonight!” laughed Melissa.

Amy then said: “Thanks to you as well. I look forward to your next visit”

The next week was much the same, although Melissa looked a bit thinner still and her tan was coming along nicely. Her cheekbones and jawline were slowly coming back.

Melissa arrived again, moments after her husband drove off, and she looked a tad even more trim, more fit, and more tan. She wore the wet look bikini under her sweats, and she changed into the maid uniform. Then she stood at attention.

The other roommate noticed Melissa first this time and she spoke to her first.

Other roommates: “Maid, starting today you will remove the maid uniform and place it back in the closet. You begin using these eye-lightening drops in the morning, afternoon, early evening and again at night as well, 4-6x per day. You will be instructed when to stop. You are now to kneel as you wait, wearing only your bikini, remaining motionless. Amy will be down soon, but meanwhile clean as usual. And you will address her like this”: She whispered her instructions.

“Yes Ma’am, replied Melissa. She began cleaning this time wearing just her bikini.

An hour or more later Amy sauntered down the stairs.

“Maid” she exclaimed.

Melissa returned to the living room and knelt in front of Amy now.

Amy asked: “So, maid, you have a new greeting now I heard?”

Melissa spoke: “ Yes Ma’am. I exist to serve ma’am” how my I serve and obey you today?”

Amy had Melissa continue working, and then polish all the girl’s toes.

After Melissa was done Amy instructed her.

Amy: “Maid, next week will be the same, but your dreams now will feature the new outfit with your arousal increased by 15%. You may change first, then have your super small lunch, and then awake.”

Melissa complied. Then, once she had eaten she returned home, again feeling full, even though under the girls’ tutelage she hardly ate, really.

Melissa now had a noticeably deeper tan, and was even more trim, and she was looking even fitter, more ‘cut.’ She arrived and she knelt once she changed.

Today however all 4 roommates sat at the couch and were either barefoot or in Birkenstock sandals, swiping their phones while they waited.

Amy approached the now kneeling Melissa.

“Maid”—she said: Beginning today and until further notice, you will report to us on all fours while in your bikini, but minus your top. You initiate the greeting now by kissing the tops of all our feet and then, asking us how you may serve today. You are also 15% more obedient each visit to commands from any of us, whether while in trance or while awake.”

“ After the greeting, you will then look up at us, give each of us a compliment then await your list of duties, from any or all of us. Your level of arousal increases by another 15%, as does your gratitude.”

Melissa obeyed, then she was given a grocery list of duties, and when she was done and the place looked great, she was fed minuscule leftovers again, and then given instructions for her next visit.

Amy said: “Maid, you will dream and you will daydream of paying even more attention to our feet than you did before. You will be creative with things you think may feel good to us for the next visit. Meanwhile, you will begin to crave humiliation and to crave punishment… things like spankings, being talked down to, etc.”

Once Melissa awoke she returned home again, and again she felt full.

Two weeks later again

Melissa had been really trimming down, and toning up, and deeply tanning now for almost 2 months since she first met the new neighbors. Melissa was now close to 18lbs lighter, with a nice deep tan and slightly visible ribs, her body fat had dropped and she looked fantastic.

Melissa arrived, then she put the lunch and dessert on the counter, and she started the coffee, and then she changed into her bikini bottom only.

She then knelt topless in front of the 4 sitting on the sofa, and then she got on all fours.

She greeted each of the young women with a series of numerous kisses on the tops of their feet, and when they raised them out of their Birkenstocks she paid avid attention to the bottoms, and then to their toes.

Melissa asked how she may serve, and she asked for their instructions.

That roommate who first ordered Melissa after Amy had hypnotized her, spoke.

To be continued in the next chapter